Replying to reviews is the funnestttttttttttttttttttttttt part of writing a fanfiction!

Ok, so I have two that say OK to Yoh x Oc x Hao, and two that say NO. I need a tiebreaker... Oh well, I'll wait for the next replies or just forget about it. It'll depends on my mood...

Winner-loser: So you don't want me to change it? Well, I'm still kinda waiting. But I might not put it in it.

Helena-Jeanne-Chibi: Oh! So I've mistaken about pinkdreamer's words! Hehehe! One of the rare person who wants me to change!

Wingweaver22 : But... If I put another love triangle, will it matter? Hehehe! I don't really think that I will change, really. (Since you seem to be the most against-it one)

Michi : If I don't put Yoh in the triangle but another person, will it matters?

The picture url: Go see my biography for the first picture! I'll always put my pictures there, and tell you in the chapters if I've a new one. Have fun!

Disclaimer: I do not own SK characters, the only things I own is my story and my original characters.

This story happens few months after the end of SK anime. I have no clue what the manga is about so.... Please stick with the anime story line!

"..." Talking

Blablabla: narration

Blablabla: (Italic) thinking

(...): my notes

...---Chapter 4---...

I will kill you

After Hao swept Elwynn's tears, he pushed her away from him. Just as he thought of going in the star mirror, Elwynn sealed the entrance and the exit of the mirror.

"Ely, you are still like always, always are one step ahead of what I am about to do. I guess there is no one in the world who will understand me more than you."

"Should I say thank you for your compliment?"

"You have never smiled this fake before."

"You remember how I used to smile?"

"I miss you."

Elwynn's heart ached. This was the first time that Hao said something as frank as this to her. He usually avoided saying those things. However, she couldn't let her guard drop down since Hao could be plotting something behind his words.

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"Hao is here! We have to act, and FAST!"

Christopher immediately ran to the gate, which led to the outside world and was pushed back. He tried again and again. He refused to give up even though the barrier wounded him.

"Wynn-Wynn! (Elwynn's surname, Christopher's privilege) Open that gate!"

"Master Christopher, please, stop this." Said Reithia. "Master Elwynn just wants some time alone with Master Hao."

"Alone? With HIM? He wants to kill her!"

"He doesn't..."

"He DOES!"

"Christopher, don't be like this. I am sure that Elwynn won't want you to be like this." Said Hailey.

(Reithia always says 'Master', and Hailey never does.)

"Never mind her!"

"Chris, my bro..." Edward went to him and punched him his face. "Are you more awake now? If you are, listen to this. Elwynn will be sad if she sees you hurt and will never forgive herself."

"We'll just wait. If she needs us, then she will let us go. Just trust in her."

"I will never forgive Hao if he dares to hurt her... I will kill him."

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"What do you wish me to do for you?"

"I just want to see my dear Ototo. It seems that he is under your care."

"What do you want with Yoh?"

"Oh nothing, just to see him. I wonder if he'll become stronger under your training."

"I will not train him. This is the only time."

"Is it because the Great Spirit asks you to? Still listening to his order, I suppose."

"It doesn't matter from whom I take order."

"What did the Great Spirit gives you this time? More power?"

(OK, I'll refer the Great Spirit as an 'it'.)

"..." It told me that you are alive... And in return, I've...

"Why do you care if I am alive or not? Did you not betray me?"

"You read my mind... You never do that to me..."

"Only not to the Ely that I know."

"I see... I am no longer the one who will be by your side?"

"You never were, and you never will be."

"You just conceal your thoughts to block me from reading it. I never knew that you could to that. Who taught you? Christopher?"

"Leave him out of this. This is only between us."

"Between us? Yes, it's true."

In high speed, he held Elwynn's throat, pulled her up in the sky, and prepared to crush it. Although he was attacking, he was still smiling.

"I've gained more strength that you'll ever imagine. No one can beat me. Humans are too weak."

"You... are... cough... also... cough... human..."

"No, I am not."

"Cough... Hao..."

She looked at him and closed her eyes. Then, he let go of her and let her take her breath.

"I will kill you. And Yoh too."

"Cough..."

"It won't be any fun if he is not as strong as me."

"You... Cough... Cough..."

"Still can't breath? I don't remember you being this weak."

"Aren't...you... cough... scared that... cough... Yoh can..."

"Beat me? Impossible."

"Cough..."

"Maybe with your betrayal again, he could. But since I no longer trust in you, you can't betray me."

"Hao..."

"Let me give you a farewell present."

He called out the spirit of fire, and burned her.

"Hope you will enjoy your little plot of finding a way to kill me."

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Trying to find medicine, Faust VIII was at the desert with Elisa. Then, he saw fire somewhere in the desert. He went there and saw a girl, who seemed to be burn. Behind her was a hexagonal mirror. However, it wasn't his concern. He examined her and realized that all her internal organs were burned at a state that was impossible to heal. He couldn't possibly heal her, even with his furyoku. He needed another people's help. Just as he was prepared to leave, he saw Yoh, a human boy size spirit, three small fairies like Morphine's size, and two small animals coming out of the mirror.

"Wynn-Wynn!" Christopher cried out loud.

Her other five spirits all surrounded her.

"Faust! What are you doing here? Why is Elwynn lying on the floor?"

"Yoh! Help me..."

He wanted to say more but saw Elwynn stood back up as if nothing happened. She seemed to be paler than usual, but that was all there was of difference. For an instance, she did not talk. She took another big breath and forced herself to smile.

"Did something wrong with my examination?" Faust whispered in the corner. "It's the second time..."

"Yoh, did you finish the training? I believe that ten minutes have passed."

"Elwynn! I heard that Hao was here..."

"He is not yet dead. This is why you have to train. But I have to call off today's training. I do not feel that well."

"Did Hao hurt you?"

"Does it look like he did? I'm fine. Don't worry."

"Ok."

"I'll find you tomorrow, even if you are on the way to Patch or something like that."

"Can we do this like later? Then you will not have to search for me..."

"It is better if I do it tomorrow. After that, I can concentrate on my mission."

"What mission?"

"To kill Hao."

"Kill?"

"Yes... Kill him." She held her hands really tight. "Just go now, with Faust, who is still babbling over there. Here, take this feather. It'll take you back home."

"Thanks."

Faust and Yoh got on the feather and flew away. As soon as they are gone, Elwynn vomited... blood. All her spirits went to her.

"Elwynn!"

"Master Elwynn!"

"Wynn-Wynn!"

"I'm fine... I just used too much Furyoku."

"Then why are you still helping Yoh in raising his power?" asks Christopher.

"I promised... to the Great Spirit that I would choose one person and give him this power."

"Great Spirit? That's what you did when you were at the Sacred Path of the Stars?"

"Yes... In exchange for Hao's news..."

"Why? Why is it always for Hao that you are hurt?"

"I love him, and there is no other reason than that. I wish to be in peace. Please, return to the mirror."

---End of Chapter4---

(Ok, Hao seems a little bit cruel, but he knows that Elwynn can take any damage without actually die or hurt. Why? Secret!)

Short chapter... I'm getting a little desperate... There isn't many people who reads or my story or what? Is it because it is not good enough? Or people just don't review? Until now, there are only seven people (in sense of different people) who reviewed... (And thank you, you guys! Really love you guys!) But I really don't know if I should continue since there aren't much people reading it...