HEY! That's just for attention. Anyways, I've decided one small thing. For those who have reviewed every chapter, I'm going to request a drawing of Shaman King from them! (Whether it is in the story or not) You can even ask for specific scenes! I'll try my best to draw it... If I can't (cuz I can only draw certain positions), I'll just have to say sorry... Hehehe! Hope that it won't happen! Anyways, this time, there were two people: Winner-Loser and Michi! So if you want to request anything, please e-mail me ) at or post it on review... (e-mail may be better). I'll do this every 5 or 10 (It depends...) chapters, so... Please review! HAHAHA!
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LadyDragonfly23: I try to make them as innocent as possible. Especially for Hao. I want him to at least have something "cute" in his life! He seems a little out of character, but hey, does it really matter? Hope not! They, fall in love again? Maybe! Hehehe! Let's hope so!
winner-loser: Thanks for reading my story ar!
wingweaver22: Glad that you like them! They are sketches, to be true. I didn't even put the shadows yet... (I never color them...) Well... if you read what's above this message, you'll know if you can have a request or not! Hehehe
Michi: It doesn't matter if you sign up or not (B4, I didn't know that anonymous people can't write so... Just day it's you and it'll be fine! I was hoping to make them sweet together! Glad that you like it! And yes, I am Chinese. I always put 'ar' in the end of sentences... Habit of mine. Thanks for your comment for my picture ar! (You are Chinese too, right?)
Helena-Jeanne-Chibi : I know that he's ooc... But I figured that it'll be cute to put an innocent childhood for Hao. I mean, I don't want him to be cold like that forever... It'll just be for the past that he'll be like that, and with Ely. Cuz in the anime, it didn't really talk about his childhood, so I want to put some good things in Hao's life.
Cindy Asakura: Thanks! Each time I see your name, it reminds me of Yoh (JustYoh, not Hao though) ... Don't know why... (Maybe it's the family name....)
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Disclaimer: I do not own SK characters, the only things I own is my story and my original characters.
This story happens few months after the end of SK anime. I have no clue what the manga is about so.... Please stick with the anime story line!
"..." Talking
Blablabla: narration
Blablabla: (Italic) thinking
(...): my notes
...---Chapter 6---...
Not human?
I suddenly woke up out of terror. In my dreams, I saw my first meeting with Hao... But then... NO! It mustn't happen in that way! That future mustn't become the reality.
She held her aching heart harshly and convinced herself that it wouldn't come true. However, deep inside, she knew it would come true for all the dreams that she had will become reality.
I must change it, even if it meant to kill Hao... Yes... Kill him.
Just the thought of killing Hao brought her tears. She wanted to swept it away but stopped when she saw the sun appeared. This sunlight seemed to be brighter than the usual one. Without wanting to look at it, she rise up and went to find Yoh.
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A sunny day at Yoh's house... what danger laid there? One world said it all: Anna.
"We'll start the day by doing 888 laps, 888 push-ups, 888 sit-ups, 888..."
"Anna... Why all 888?"
"According to Chinese, the number 8 means rich. Get going now, or you will be running to Patch."
Poor Yoh...They all thought (That means, Chocolove, Ryu, Ren, Faust VIII, and HoroHoro).
"Why are you all standing here? Get to work!"
"HAI!"
That was the scene that Elwynn saw when she arrived there. She laughed teasingly at Anna. Yoh was the first one to discover her.
"Elwynn! You came!"
"Elwynn! Have you come to visit me? Oh I knew you'd understand my love for you!"
"Kisama."
She slowly descended from the sky in her soft white dress. She smiled at them. Unlike other ones, Yoh, Ren, and Anna remained at their original position. Chocolove tried to amuse her with his boring jokes, while Ryu tried to prove his love. Faust was examining her to see if he was mistaken about before. HoroHoro looked at her, and his saliva fell.
"Hum... Can I please talk to Yoh, alone?"
"No." Anna replied her.
It was a strange image. Elwynn was smiling, and it seemed flowers were behind her. On the other hand, Anna looked like a cold witch who wanted to empoison others.
"Why can't I?"
"I said no."
"So I really can't?"
"Yes."
"Ok."
She took out her star mirror and faced it at Anna. As if she was prepared for this, she took out her blue beads and chanted a blinding spell. It immediately blinded Elwynn. The blond one went to the pinked haired one and took away her star mirror.
"Why are you blinding me?"
"Prepare to be sealed, you evil spirit."
"Spirit? I am flesh and blood."
"If you are not a spirit, I couldn't have possibly blind you.
"I see that you have been hearing from either Asakura family or the ten Priests."
"But a simple spell as this will not do much..."
"I took away your mirror. That's the source of your power. Without it, you are nothing but a normal spirit."
"Are you just going to see me being caught like this? Aren't you going to help me?" Elwynn said when she looked up in the sky.
"Do you need my help?" A voice from elsewhere said.
"No." She answered surely.
Elwynn simply used her furyoku and broke the spell.
"How... I thought that without your mirror you couldn't use any furyoku..."
"Maybe the people who told you are mistaken. I am human in flesh and blood."
"..." They won't lie to me...There must be an explanation.
"There is. I am human."
"You..."
"I can read mind. I normally choose not to."
"Then answer me this: how could you have lived more than 1000 years under a simple seal?"
"I do not need to reveal you my secrets."
Elwynn handed out her hand, and her mirror went back to her.
"Come out."
All her five spirits came out. They surrounded Yoh in form of a pentagon star.
"You, who respect the law of time, open your eyes to the nature itself."
Five shining lights shot at Yoh. He felt great strength rising in him. It wasn't anything he felt before. After few seconds, she stopped. She did not fall down but barely stand up. Anna ran to Yoh to see if he was alright, so did the others. Seeing them like this, Elwynn just disappeared without saying one more word.
I mustn't want to have friends... All those who get near me will have nothing more than pain. I must stop this feeling of wanting to be loved or cared... I mustn't...
She walked in the street and stopped somewhere in the middle.
"Hao, if you do not wish to be killed, please do not appear in my sight an ever again."
"You? Kill me?" Hao appeared.
"Yes..."
"Not this sure, aren't you? First you are not as strong as I. Second, you will never dare to hurt me, the one you vowed to love for the rest of your life."
"I said so, and I will do it."
"Ok, I'll give you a chance now." He gently smiled at her. "You can do one thing to me now, and I will not stop you. Anything, even if you kill me."
"Hao..."
"After this, you will vow never to hold back on me."
"There won't be any after..."
"We'll see."
He closed his eyes, and she carefully examined him. He still hadn't changed. He was the same as always: the same arrogant face with the same sweet smile. However, when she looked carefully, she realized that his smile seemed to be...fake... He didn't smile like that long ago... No, not like that at all... It seemed as if he was compressing all his emotion behind this smile... She didn't want him to be like this... No... Not like this... This wasn't the Hao she knew! He changed, and this was all her fault.
"Ely, I am still waiting."
She used her oversoul, her mirror as her medium and all her five spirits was in there. A large bow, which was about her height, appeared. She touched the middle of the bow and went backward till she pulled the string of the arc. An arrow appeared, and she was ready to strike. All she had to do was to let go of her hand... That was all she had to do... But...
Tears fell from her face to the ground. She couldn't! She just couldn't kill the one person she loved! She cancelled her oversoul, approached him, and gently pressed her lips to his. He could feel the cold tears on her face. He gently held her, and tenderly pulled her toward him. He enforced that kiss started by her. How they wished that this moment would last forever... After this short moment, they would be enemy, until one of them was...dead... That thought caused more of her tears to fall down. Hao just held her the most softly he could as if he was scared to hurt her.
Then, he let her go. She turned herself not to face him and ran away from him. He tried to catch her but... He couldn't touch her! His fingertips just passed through her! She didn't seem to notice this and flew away.
Ely... What did you exactly do to yourself? Are you really a spirit now?---------
Elwynn found an isolated place and rested for a while before entering the mirror. As soon as she entered, all the spirits, including Christopher, went to her.
"Elwynn, are you ok? You didn't waste too much of your furyoku, right?" asked Hailey.
"Elwynn-sama, how are you feeling? Is there anything we can do?"
"Elwynn-chan, why did you block the gate to outside the mirror? What if Hao hurts you like last time? You can't afford constantly be hurt..."
(Yeah, Edward will call her Elwynn-chan from now on. I'm too lazy to label who is talking, and who is not.)
"Bree!"
"Brooum!"
"Everyone, let me talk with Wynn Wynn for a minute alone, please."
"But..."
"We will."
Edward pushed and pulled everyone out of Elwynn's sight. After making sure that they were all gone, Christopher gave Elwynn a place to sit. He tried to touch her, and he couldn't! Not even here! In the outside world, he was a spirit. Therefore, he couldn't, and it was normal. But here was not the same! Here was where spirit could take he form they liked! He could actually touch Elwynn here!
"Wynn Wynn, what happened?"
"I..."
"Hao, is it? The only one who could ever make you this sad is he."
"...Sorry..."
"Sorry? Why? You shouldn't be. The link between your body and soul is very weak now. You shouldn't overload your emotion, ANY kind of emotions. It'll only weaken the link. One thousand years are still too much for a human being, even for you, the ancient High Priestess. Try to avoid Hao, please, I am begging you. If you do not wish to de this for yourself, do this for me."
"Chris... I can't... The only reason why I'm still here is he... There is nothing else I rather have except to be with him, no! Just to see him smile like before once more! I am willing to do anything for it... Anything..."
"Wynn Wynn... Please... Don't cry... I..."
"Why can't I be with him... Why?"
"Because you are Elwynn Eleanor. This is fate."
"I want to defy fate, once, only once will be enough! I love him... I just love him, and no one else..."
The sound of her crying echoed throughout the whole place.
I love you, and I always will. If my love is reaching to you, please, tell me where is your heart? If I find it, can I make it mine? Please, tell me, where can I find the heart of yours that I once lost...I want to make it mine once more...Hao... Can you hear my voice?
The end of chapter 6
Here it is a short sweet moment and Ely's weak side that she only shows to Christopher. She is really REALLY sad. I hope that you guys like the sweet moment, and after this, I think that I'll put some actions. There is not much real fighting actions now but.... I'll do my best for the future! Muhahaha!
If there is anything that you guys don't like, tell me! And I know that chapter 5, Hao is OOC, but I just want to give him a childhood... If there are too many people who don't like it, I'll rewrite it or something like that...