I'm so sorry I didn't update this in a while. I am such a procrastinator! Also, I'm trying my best to fix the formatting problem.
Also even if you think you know who the murderer is you probably will be wrong. Some smashers won't have the right weapon, others no motivation. I have a feeling I made this one too easy.
Also, a side note. Humor is in my blood. Don't be surprised if you find some things funny. ******************************************************************
Disclaimer: I don't own this. Stop bugging me.
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Overview: Ness was on the verge of beating all the smashers in a row. He only needed to beat Mario and Kirby. He beat Mario just before Ness was to battle Kirby. Ness was stabbed in the back the night before his battle with Kirby. Nana was Ness's girlfriend. Now the smashers were looking for Ness when Nana screamed.
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Day Two, 9:17 am, Dead Person's bedroom, in his house.
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Everyone (even the tall ones) ran into Ness's bedroom. Popo got there just in time to catch Nana as she fainted. "I'll call a doctor! " called Roy, even though he was in the back and couldn't see into the room. Which was just as well, because the scene was horrible. Ness's face-down body, which had a clear puncture in it, was next to a pool of blood. Kirby expanded across the door frame so no one could see or enter into the room. When Dr. Mario arrived at 9:30 am Nana was still in shock. She kept mumbling to herself. She wouldn't respond to any one. She just sat there curled up in a ball, crying. When Dr. Mario went into Ness's bedroom Nana got up and followed him in. "What seems to be-a the problem?" asked Dr. Mario. "YOU MORON! CAN'T YOU SEE HE IS DEAD?" Nana replied fiercely. "Hmm, looks-a like he died when someone stabbed him-a in the back," Dr. Mario said continuing his examination. "WELL, AREN'T YOU DR. OBVIOUS!!" Nana was taking this very hard. "Do you know-a who did this?" questioned Dr. Mario. "WOULD ALL OF US STILL BE HERE?" Nana snapped back. "Well, we need-a to find-a the murderer and arrest-a him or her" Dr. Mario concluded. As Nana calmed down, she said, "That's the first smart thing you've said since you got here!"
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When the hired detective arrived, he suddenly writhed in pain, and died. Dr. Mario assessed that he had a heart attack. "NOW WHAT ARE WE GOING TO DO?" Nana said trying to keep her cool. Kirby waddled over to the detective and swallowed his magnifying glass. "He has become Detective Kirby!" a voice that came out of nowhere said. Suddenly everyone looked around franticly for who ever said that. "Everyone back to your homes! I shall visit all of you, question you, then announce my results as soon as I come to a conclusion. Now go off! The game is afoot." Kirby announced in an old 18th century English voice. There was a murmur in the crowd as they left Ness's home, and went to their own.
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Author's Note: You will see everything Kirby sees, hear most things he hears, and Kirby will be given enough evidence to find who the murderer is. Pay very close attention to every speck of detail, sometimes down to even what they're wearing.
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Mario's + Luigi's house
When Kirby went to the door, he could hear the two brothers shouting at each other. "You-a shouldn't have done that-a!" one bro. said. "Shut-a up-a! What-a was I supposed to do-a then? Sit-a back and let him push-a everyone around?" the other shouted back. "Why'd-a ya do that?" the first one said again. "Last-a time we played-a, he beat me-a, remember?" the second one said. When Kirby stepped in, he could hear the music of a Mario Kart game abruptly stop as the brothers realized that Kirby came into their house. "I only want one of you at a time. Be off Luigi, I shall come for you later." Kirby announced. "Alright-a Kirby," Luigi said, "I'll be-a at Falco's." "Fine, come back in 23.42 minutes. I'll be done by then" Kirby stated.
As Kirby and Mario walked through the house, Kirby noticed multiple 'trinkets' from the brother's travels. These included; a P-Wing, a Beanbean Kingdom coin, Prince Peasley's rose, a spike from Boswer's shell, a Magic Whistle, a frog suit, a bill blaster fragment, a fragment from a blue Yoshi shell, a magic potion, a spiked blue winged shell, and a bunch of mushrooms. Finally Mario and Kirby sat in two Yoshi chairs (The two Yoshi's were standing up strait with their tongues sticking out. You sat on their tongues.)
"So-a? What-a now?" Mario asked. "Simple, just answer my questions quickly. And try not to have such an accent. It can get annoying." Kirby replied. "First question. Did you have any relationship to Ness? Any at all! Even if you're just related to Nana, Ness's girlfriend." Kirby questioned. "No-a!" Mario laughed, "Although... I think-a there may be-a some link-a, like my grandpa's, cousin's, grandson's, son or-a something." "Okay," Kirby replies, "Question two. Where were you on the night of Ness's death? Fortunately due to the doctor, we can estimate the time of death to be around 12:00 midnight." "We-a were playing Mario Kart Double Dash!! Just-a ask-a my brother." Mario replied. "Hummm, yes. And last question. How did you know Ness?" Kirby then said. "Well-a, we used to talk, but after he went-a power crazy, he forgot-a all about-a everyone except-a Nana." Mario said. "Very well, you may now leave. I won't bug you any more. Please leave and get you brother. Please work on getting rid of that accent." Kirby said, ushering Mario out.
As Luigi walked in, Kirby noticed he was sweating and all nervous, like he had seen a ghost. "Ye-e-s-s-a M-m-m-m-r. K-k-k-ir-b-y" Luigi said shaking. "Calm down I'm not going to bite! First question Luigi. Did you have any relationship to Ness? Any at all! Even if you're just related to Nana, Ness's girlfriend." Kirby said. "N-n-n-o-a M-m-m-m-r. K-k-k-ir-b-y" Luigi said, still shaking. "Ah. Question two. Where were you on the night of Ness's death? Fortunately due to the doctor, we can estimate the time of death to be around 12:00 midnight." S-l-e-e-e-p-ing M-m-m-m-r. K-k-k-ir-b-y" Luigi replied. "Hum. And last question. How did you know Ness?" Kirby pondered. "I DIDN'T KNOW HIM AT ALL! YOU CAN'T MAKE ME ADMIT ANYTHING!" Luigi yelled. "Wah!" Kirby yelled back, startled. "Well, your brother would seem to disagree." Kirby stated "So I need to ask you one more question, if you're calmed down enough." "Yes, I am." Luigi said calmly. "Okay, did you and your brother stay up late playing Mario Kart Double Dash!!?" Kirby asked. "No-a Kirby, I'm-a semi-afraid of the dark-a. Mario might-a, but I don't know." Luigi said, trying to keep calm. "Thank you, you've been a great help." Kirby said as he left the Mario house and headed to Peach's house.
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So how do you like the second chapter? Please review if you want to keep reading this!
Watson Dee
Also even if you think you know who the murderer is you probably will be wrong. Some smashers won't have the right weapon, others no motivation. I have a feeling I made this one too easy.
Also, a side note. Humor is in my blood. Don't be surprised if you find some things funny. ******************************************************************
Disclaimer: I don't own this. Stop bugging me.
******************************************************************
Overview: Ness was on the verge of beating all the smashers in a row. He only needed to beat Mario and Kirby. He beat Mario just before Ness was to battle Kirby. Ness was stabbed in the back the night before his battle with Kirby. Nana was Ness's girlfriend. Now the smashers were looking for Ness when Nana screamed.
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Day Two, 9:17 am, Dead Person's bedroom, in his house.
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Everyone (even the tall ones) ran into Ness's bedroom. Popo got there just in time to catch Nana as she fainted. "I'll call a doctor! " called Roy, even though he was in the back and couldn't see into the room. Which was just as well, because the scene was horrible. Ness's face-down body, which had a clear puncture in it, was next to a pool of blood. Kirby expanded across the door frame so no one could see or enter into the room. When Dr. Mario arrived at 9:30 am Nana was still in shock. She kept mumbling to herself. She wouldn't respond to any one. She just sat there curled up in a ball, crying. When Dr. Mario went into Ness's bedroom Nana got up and followed him in. "What seems to be-a the problem?" asked Dr. Mario. "YOU MORON! CAN'T YOU SEE HE IS DEAD?" Nana replied fiercely. "Hmm, looks-a like he died when someone stabbed him-a in the back," Dr. Mario said continuing his examination. "WELL, AREN'T YOU DR. OBVIOUS!!" Nana was taking this very hard. "Do you know-a who did this?" questioned Dr. Mario. "WOULD ALL OF US STILL BE HERE?" Nana snapped back. "Well, we need-a to find-a the murderer and arrest-a him or her" Dr. Mario concluded. As Nana calmed down, she said, "That's the first smart thing you've said since you got here!"
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When the hired detective arrived, he suddenly writhed in pain, and died. Dr. Mario assessed that he had a heart attack. "NOW WHAT ARE WE GOING TO DO?" Nana said trying to keep her cool. Kirby waddled over to the detective and swallowed his magnifying glass. "He has become Detective Kirby!" a voice that came out of nowhere said. Suddenly everyone looked around franticly for who ever said that. "Everyone back to your homes! I shall visit all of you, question you, then announce my results as soon as I come to a conclusion. Now go off! The game is afoot." Kirby announced in an old 18th century English voice. There was a murmur in the crowd as they left Ness's home, and went to their own.
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Author's Note: You will see everything Kirby sees, hear most things he hears, and Kirby will be given enough evidence to find who the murderer is. Pay very close attention to every speck of detail, sometimes down to even what they're wearing.
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Mario's + Luigi's house
When Kirby went to the door, he could hear the two brothers shouting at each other. "You-a shouldn't have done that-a!" one bro. said. "Shut-a up-a! What-a was I supposed to do-a then? Sit-a back and let him push-a everyone around?" the other shouted back. "Why'd-a ya do that?" the first one said again. "Last-a time we played-a, he beat me-a, remember?" the second one said. When Kirby stepped in, he could hear the music of a Mario Kart game abruptly stop as the brothers realized that Kirby came into their house. "I only want one of you at a time. Be off Luigi, I shall come for you later." Kirby announced. "Alright-a Kirby," Luigi said, "I'll be-a at Falco's." "Fine, come back in 23.42 minutes. I'll be done by then" Kirby stated.
As Kirby and Mario walked through the house, Kirby noticed multiple 'trinkets' from the brother's travels. These included; a P-Wing, a Beanbean Kingdom coin, Prince Peasley's rose, a spike from Boswer's shell, a Magic Whistle, a frog suit, a bill blaster fragment, a fragment from a blue Yoshi shell, a magic potion, a spiked blue winged shell, and a bunch of mushrooms. Finally Mario and Kirby sat in two Yoshi chairs (The two Yoshi's were standing up strait with their tongues sticking out. You sat on their tongues.)
"So-a? What-a now?" Mario asked. "Simple, just answer my questions quickly. And try not to have such an accent. It can get annoying." Kirby replied. "First question. Did you have any relationship to Ness? Any at all! Even if you're just related to Nana, Ness's girlfriend." Kirby questioned. "No-a!" Mario laughed, "Although... I think-a there may be-a some link-a, like my grandpa's, cousin's, grandson's, son or-a something." "Okay," Kirby replies, "Question two. Where were you on the night of Ness's death? Fortunately due to the doctor, we can estimate the time of death to be around 12:00 midnight." "We-a were playing Mario Kart Double Dash!! Just-a ask-a my brother." Mario replied. "Hummm, yes. And last question. How did you know Ness?" Kirby then said. "Well-a, we used to talk, but after he went-a power crazy, he forgot-a all about-a everyone except-a Nana." Mario said. "Very well, you may now leave. I won't bug you any more. Please leave and get you brother. Please work on getting rid of that accent." Kirby said, ushering Mario out.
As Luigi walked in, Kirby noticed he was sweating and all nervous, like he had seen a ghost. "Ye-e-s-s-a M-m-m-m-r. K-k-k-ir-b-y" Luigi said shaking. "Calm down I'm not going to bite! First question Luigi. Did you have any relationship to Ness? Any at all! Even if you're just related to Nana, Ness's girlfriend." Kirby said. "N-n-n-o-a M-m-m-m-r. K-k-k-ir-b-y" Luigi said, still shaking. "Ah. Question two. Where were you on the night of Ness's death? Fortunately due to the doctor, we can estimate the time of death to be around 12:00 midnight." S-l-e-e-e-p-ing M-m-m-m-r. K-k-k-ir-b-y" Luigi replied. "Hum. And last question. How did you know Ness?" Kirby pondered. "I DIDN'T KNOW HIM AT ALL! YOU CAN'T MAKE ME ADMIT ANYTHING!" Luigi yelled. "Wah!" Kirby yelled back, startled. "Well, your brother would seem to disagree." Kirby stated "So I need to ask you one more question, if you're calmed down enough." "Yes, I am." Luigi said calmly. "Okay, did you and your brother stay up late playing Mario Kart Double Dash!!?" Kirby asked. "No-a Kirby, I'm-a semi-afraid of the dark-a. Mario might-a, but I don't know." Luigi said, trying to keep calm. "Thank you, you've been a great help." Kirby said as he left the Mario house and headed to Peach's house.
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So how do you like the second chapter? Please review if you want to keep reading this!
Watson Dee