Title: A sweet surprise
Author name: Trugeta
Disclaimer: This story is based on characters and situations created and owned by Akira Toriyama and Funimation. No money is being made and no copyright or trademark infringement is intended.
This story focuses on Gohan and Videl, and is set after the Majin Buu Saga. It's an AU, and Reviews are welcome and appreciated.
Chapter
31: Finding out
Last time...
After
all Z-Fighters had tested the GR out to their satisfaction, the usual
barbeque took place. Lots of meat was consumed, not to mention
beverage, they talked, joked, and, gladly, no pranks occurred. Even
Piccolo, who had by now come to terms with his Kami-duties, was
actually enjoying himself, even if with a glass of water. Something
he had forced upon Dende too, just to be on the safe side...
Gohan and Videl spend the evening
in each others arms, perfectly content and happy. Bulma had promised
that she would make Gohan a fair price for his inventions, and she
was known to keep her word. Yeah, the future looked bright, and now,
that the whole Dende-debacle was over they could finally concentrate
on Videl's pregnancy again...
Now
the continuation...
Finally
everything had returned to normal, and nobody was gladder than Gohan.
At last no more horror mood-swings, although Bulma had warned him
that now, as the baby was developing more and more and influenced
Videl's hormonal level to an ever greater extent, Videl's moods
might change again at the speed of light.
Gohan
had (of course) groaned, but Bulma had been able to assure him that
those normal mood-swings would be nowhere near as bad as the ones she
had already had. That had assured Gohan some, at least...
The
weeks passed by, and thanks to Gohan's new generation of GR the
Saiyans were making good progress in their training.
Much
to his chagrin Dende had already been fully included in the first
week after he had lost his Kami-powers, and the Saiyans had forced
him trough a compact trainings-program in 'How to use your KI
efficiently', consisting also of horrendous (for Dende) trainings
sessions and several (read: regular) beatings...
Bulma
had been right regarding Videl's mood-swings, for they occurred
again, but she had also been right regarding her prognosis that they
would not be as bad. They were in fact bearable.
Now
Videl was in her fifth month, and her belly was becoming visible. Her
hips had broadened too, and she was suffering from sudden energy
drops from time to time, something that annoyed her to no end.
Especially when it happened while she had one of her hunger-attacks
at the same time.
But there was one thing that made it all worthwhile: the incredible feeling of a life that was growing inside of her. That was like magic and repaid her for all the hardships.
For
today the ladies had planned to make a shopping trip, for Chi-Chi and
Bulma wanted to give Videl some tips what she would need for her
baby.
Videl
was all too glad, considering the fact that this was her first child,
and thus, naturally, she had no experience at all. She had never been
the type to play with baby-dolls, either, for she had always wanted
to fight, and thus she could not draw any experience from that
either.
Gohan
and the other Saiyans were spared from the fate to accompany their
wives to the shopping tour for this time, but the women had already
promised them that they would have to accompany them once they
actually wanted to start buying things.
The
demi-Saiyan also dreaded the day when he would have to go and buy
furniture for their new home, which would, by the way, be ready
within the next month. But alas, he had brought this upon himself
when he and Videl had decided that they wanted to furnish their home
by themselves.
Thus
the Z-Fighters spend the day training in Vegeta's new GR while the
women went onto their shopping tour, and everyone was perfectly
happy. The women had their shopping trip, something most women
revelled in, and the Saiyans had a satisfying day of training and
pushing their limits, something they revelled in. So fair game for
everyone.
Surprisingly
even Krillin, Yamcha, Tien and 18 had started training in all earnest
again. All had decided that training with this equipment was meant
how it had to be, and they swore to push their limits again, even if
they had no prayer in ever catching up to the Saiyans. But they
wanted to make a difference, and that was what counted.
Gohan
had assured them that he would built a new GR at Kame House for his
four friends, as that was the nearest location for all of them.
Naturally his friends had been delighted, and until then they would
train with the other Z-Fighters in the much bigger new GR of Vegeta.
Later
that evening the three ladies returned. The Saiyans had already hit
the showers and had agreed to meet with the onnas at Capsule Corp
again. Even Hercule would come, and meanwhile even the Saiyan Prince
had learned to tolerate that oaf (read: he would not blast him into
the next dimension at the first word).
Videl,
Chi-Chi and Bulma had already bought a baby carriage, and both Gohan
and Hercule could only approve to the choice of the women. Videl was
in good humours, and chatted animatedly
"... yeah, we decided
it would be way too early to buy baby clothes. We don't even know the
gender of the baby yet." Videl said, and the other two women
nodded.
Goku
however, had something to say to this, even if he said it to
himself.
"Well, if I remember correctly, there is a
possibility to determine the gender of the baby..." he said,
thinking loud.
As
Goku had not spoken very loud he was curtly ignored in favour of more
chatter. And after some more reports of their catches Videl had a
question.
"Hmm, and when will we finally be able to
determine the gender of the baby?" she asked Bulma.
Bulma
thought for a moment.
"You are in your fifth month. Hmm, with
the equipment I have here I should be able to determine this safely
with no failure tolerance at all in about 3 weeks." she said.
"Three
weeks??!" Videl exclaimed, nearly whining. "But I wanna
know now!" she whined, whereupon Gohan hugged her from behind
and gave her a soft kiss.
Goku
however disagreed with Bulma.
"I say we will be able to
determinate the gender of the baby in about one week." he
said, sounding quite sure of himself.
Chi-Chi
looked at her husband as if he had suddenly grown a second head.
"And
how do you plan to do that, oh great husband of mine? If Bulma, our
scientific genius," Bulma gleamed with pride at hearing this
compliment from her best friend, "is not able to determine the
gender of the baby earlier than in three weeks, then how do you wanna
be able to do so? she asked sarcastically.
Goku
just smirked self-consciously, something he did more and more often
ever since he had had his stand-up against his wife.
"Easy.
According to my basic knowledge of biology, the baby will have
developed far enough in about one week to SENSE its gender." he
said, smirking.
Hercule,
who had been relatively quiet throughout the evening looked at him
questioningly.
"What do you mean by sense it, Goku?" he asked.
Goku
explained.
"We, and that includes the Saiyans and nearly all
Z-Fighters can sense the KI, the energy of a person. This way
we know what for a power level the person has. And we get a whole
bunch of other information through those KI-scans, but that's not
relevant here. Once the baby has developed far enough we will be able
to sense its gender."
Hercule
nodded. Now he understood...
"Wow, that's awesome!"
Goku
grinned, and Bulma smacked her forehead.
"Of course! I could
have figured this out myself. You really are a smart one, Goku."
Chi-Chi
looked put out. Lately Goku really surprised everyone with his
depthness...
"Sorry for doubting you..." she said, leaning
forward and giving her husband a kiss which he returned gently.
Goku
smiled slyly.
"No offence taken. Your are most
welcome, my lady." he said, after they broke the kiss.
Vegeta
nodded.
"Yeah, Kakkarot, not bad. So you have a brain after all... who would have thought..." he taunted, but good-naturedly.
The
others snorted, and Videl commented first.
"Well, that's just
great! One week is still long enough, but better than three!"
she said, smiling.
"But the day afterwards we will go to the doctor nevertheless. Better check twice." she said.
Gohan
nodded.
"I'd say we go to the doctor the same day we find
out. You're right, better check twice and get the diagnosis from a
doctor too. Not that I do not trust our senses, but it is more
reassuring this way." he stated.
The
others agreed, and it was settled. Seven more days until they would
find out which gender the baby had....
One week later, Capsule
Corp.
Everyone
was gathered in the living room of Capsule Corp. This was the day
they would find out which gender the offspring of Gohan and Videl
would have. Each and every one was curious as hell...
"I
bet it's a boy!" Yamcha exclaimed, "1000 zeni that it's a
boy."
Krillin
grinned,
"I wager that it will be a girl, and I bet 2000 zeni.
Anyone hold the bet?"
Instantly
a betting pool was created, and everyone made a bet on the gender of
the baby. The predictions were quite equal in numbers for both boy
and girl, and soon they would know for sure.
Goku
looked at Videl.
"Videl, are you able to determine the gender
of your offspring by yourself? I will defer this to you, so we won't
try. Only if you are unable to we will. Okay?" he asked.
Videl
looked at him, giving him a smile that said so much as ‚Thank
you'.
„Wait a moment, I will try. Until a few minutes ago I was
not able to. It is not that I had not tried..."she said. „I will
now try again. Just stay patient for some secs."Videl said.
Gohan's
wife concentrated and tried to read her own KI. But gauging the
expression on Videls face she did not seem to be able to determine
the gender of her baby just by herself.
She
looked at Goku, then at Gohan.
"Sorry, but I am not able to.
Seems that my ability to read KIs is not good enough for the task."
she said with a sad expression on her face.
Gohan
took her hand.
"It's not your fault, hun. But if you allow
I'll try my luck." he said and gave her belly a fond kiss.
She
smiled and ruffled a hand through his hair.
"I'd be delighted,
my luv." she said.
Gohan
then concentrated and used his senses to scan the KI of his wife.
Suddenly his facial expression changed from concentration to utmost
joy.
He
looked at his wife.
"We'll have a girl! A little baby girl!
And she is as healthy and strong as a snake!" he exclaimed with
pride and embraced his wife in a soft and affectionate hug. "I love
you, you most wonderful woman in this world!"
The
others were happy too. Especially one particular woman who had always
wished for grandchildren...
„I am gonna be a grandmother of a
girl! A girl! A dream comes true!" Chi-Chi squealed, totally
beside herself with joy, and so excited that she nearly fainted.
„Yeah,
and I am gonna be the granddad of that little girl. That's so
cool!" Goku exclaimed, "I'll be a granddad! Woohoo!"
The
others laughed at this statement, and Goku even emphasized this by an
all-too-familiar gesture: he smiled his famous son grin. This caused
the others to laugh even more.
Goten,
who had been allowed to accompany his parents to C.C. because of this
special day despite his punishment, turned to Trunks and
grinned,
"Have you heard, Trunks? I will be the uncle of a girl.
Isn't that cool?"
Trunks
looked bored at first. He had a little sister, and she was not
interesting at all. But then he had an idea,
"Yeah, and wouldn't
it be even more cool if we taught the little one the art of pranks?"
he muttered.
Goten
grinned,
"You mean we could educate a whole new generation of
pranksters, eh, Trunks? And we would not get caught. That has its
uses..." he muttered back.
Trunks
looked astonished. Ever since when was his best friend so perceptive?
Was this Son intelligence which had made such a sudden display within
Goku contagious? That was spooky...
"Umm, yeah, that's what I
meant." he said silently, "But how the hell did you get so
perceptive, Goten? I mean, come on, normally you're quite clueless
and naive."
Goten's
grin broadened,
"Okay, Trunks, I will tell you. Our whole
cluelessness was an act dad an I put on to irritate our potential
enemies and lure them into a false sense of safety. We're actually
quite clever, and it makes no sense any more to hide our intelligence
as Gohan will soon be known as one of Earth most intelligent men.
Thus it would not do good to act as the dumb younger brother. And to
tell the truth, it always made so much fun to irritate you with my
antics." the chibi said grinning.
For
a moment Trunks only spluttered incoherently. That had all been an
act? Okay, Goten had said more complicated words in one
sentence than ever before in at least two years, and the whole air of
cluelessness that had surrounded him before had just disappeared.
Hell, that had been one efficient act!
"I can't believe it!"
he exclaimed, "I have been fooled by my best friend! Any more
secrets you want to tell me, Goten?" he asked disbelieving.
Goten
just grinned in response,
"Nope, not right now." The chibi
said, and soon they were engrossed in a deep talk, and Trunks noticed
for the first time just how intelligent his best friend really was.
Obviously the intelligence was running in the family, and not only
just in Gohan...
Meanwhile
Chi-Chi looked at her husband, a smile playing in the corners of her
mouth.
„I know exactly what you mean, sweetheart. It will be...
cool!"
Then
she looked at Videl.
„And, when do you plan to go to your
doctor? Have you made an appointment already?" she asked.
Videl
looked at her.
„Well, I made my appointment some time ago, and
its today at 3 p.m. at Dr. Banners practice. I figured it would make
sense to combine both 'finding outs'." Videl said.
That
relieved Chi-Chi.
"Dr. Banners practice? Very good! That's the
same doctor I went to when I was pregnant! He's excellent, even if
a bit jumpy. Don't really know why..." she exclaimed, and Videl
smiled at this. She had of course known this.
Chi-Chi
looked at the Z-Fighters
"It's not that I don't trust the
senses of you and especially that of my son, but better be safe than
sorry! Oh, one question, Videl..."
Videl
looked at the older woman
"Yes, Chi-Chi?"
Chi-Chi
smiled.
"Mind if I come with you? I'd
like to see the first ultra-sound picture of my future grandchild..."
she said, wiping away tears.
Vegeta
rolled his eyes at such an open display of emotions, but the others
found this so sweet.
Videl
nodded and said
"Sure, Chi-Chi. I could use some womanly
support."
Naturally
Chi-Chi was all smiles...
As
this was decided, Gohan, Trunks and Goten voted to join Vegeta and
Goku for a trainings session in the GR at the Briefs. They had taken
Vegetas' advice to heart, and stayed out of harms way as often as
possible. Sure, Vegeta had said that those mood swings would abate in
a month or so, but they had to SURVIVE during this time first...
They
only stopped by for some lunch at 12 p.m. They had worked quite a
sweat, for Goten and Trunks had fused into Gotenks and had given the
others quite a challenge...
So
they continued the trainings session after they had eaten at top
speed. The ladies had reminded them that they needed to take a shower
before going to the doctor, so they'd be able to train for only one
hour. But better than nothing...
They
had as recently as finished their meals when they winked at their
wives and departed towards the GR....
3
p.m., doctor Banners' practice.
Gohan
and Videl entered the practice, whereas Gohan looked around
curiously. It had been a long time since he had been to a doctor...
They
were greeted by a receptionist, a friendly woman about 20 years
old.
„Ah, Mrs. Son."Videl gave her a look. „Of course I've
heard that you've married Gohan Son here. The son of the world
famous Son Goku. Well, everyone has heard of your marriage.
Congrats!" she said.
Videl
was taken aback for a moment, but recovered quickly enough to
say
"Well, thank you." she said, whereas Gohan smiled amused.
However,
the receptionist continued.
„Well, you can go right in. The doc
is ready for you."
Videl
nodded. That was perfect. If she hated one thing more than anything
else, then it was waiting.
„Thank you. One question..."
„Yes?"
asked the receptionist.
„Could
my mother-in-law", Videl pointed towards Chi-Chi, „accompany us?"
she asked.
The
receptionist nodded.
„Yes, that is possible. But you must give
me a written declaration of consent." She saw Videls' look.
„Yeah, I now..." the receptionist said, „bureaucratics..."
and took a formulary.
After
signing it they could enter the doctor's office. He was already
waiting for Videl.
„Ah, Videl, it is nice to see you. And now
not any more Videl Satan, but Videl Son. Well, tempus fugit... and of
course I know you about your marriage, Videl. I've been your family
doctor for how long? Fifteen years?" he asked, and Videl nodded.
Then he looked at Gohan. "Ahh, Mr. Son. Well, congratulations to
your marriage!" he said and shook first Videl's hand and then did
the same with Gohans.
Gohan
and his mother surveyed Dr. Banner in the meantime. He was a
friendly-looking man in his mid-fifties, tall but a bit chubby. Yeah,
he was easily likeable...
Dr.
Banner looked at Chi-Chi.
„And you are Mrs. Chi-Chi Son, if I
remember correctly..." he asked.
Chi-Chi
took his hand.
„Yes, doctor, Chi-Chi Son, nice to meet you
again. I am also Videls' mother-in-law."she explained.
Dr.
Banner smiled. Although it was a forced smile. He knew all too well
what this woman was capable of...
„Well, it's nice to meet
you, too. Now to you, Videl. What is the reason of your visit? You
haven't been here in a while..." he said.
Videl
nodded.
„Well, doctor, I am pregnant. That's why I am here."
Dr.
Banner nodded.
„And what leads you to this assumption? Have you
done a pregnancy test yet?" he asked.
Videl
shook her head.
„No, but the evidences indicate it. Morning
sickness, severe mood swings," Gohan nodded vigorously,
„intolerableness, missing period, swollen belly..." she listed.
Dr.
Banner nodded again.
„Well, dear Videl, then let's check up."
He said.
Some minutes later
Videl,
Gohan and Chi-Chi glued their eyes to the monitor that revealed what
the ultrasound was reading. Gohan of course, was looking for extra
appendages both in the front and the rear.
"Well Mrs. Son, it
looks that you were indeed right. You are pregnant, in the fifth
month already. Do you want me to tell you the gender of the baby?"
he asked.
Videl
and Gohan smiled. Although they already knew it could not hurt to get
a confirmation...
"Sure." They replied in unison.
Dr.
Banner looked at them.
„You will be pleased to hear that you are
pregnant with girl, Mrs. Son. And she is as healthy as a snake." He
said.
Both
future-parents smiled.
„You betcha!" they exclaimed in unison.
Dr.
Banner smiled.
„But there is one thing... I noticed something
during my examination..."
Gohan
said
„Yeah, doc, what is it?" already knowing where this would
lead.
Dr.
Banner looked at him.
„I noticed that both your baby has some
extra appendages at the rear. It seems to be some kind of tail..."
he said.
Gohan
grinned. As did Videl and Chi-Chi.
„Well doc, this is normal for
us." he said.
This
caught the poor doc by surprise, and he had to sit down.
„Normal?
'For us'? Could you..." he trailed off.
Gohan
nodded.
„Of course. We," he pointed at himself, „as well as
some of our parents and other siblings are part of a race called the
Saiyans. We live now here on Earth and belong to Earth special
forces. You may have heard of us... we are the Z-Fighters." He
said.
The
doctor nodded.
„Yes, I have. But I would have never guessed that
you are from another world!" he exclaimed. „Well, the green one
was rather obvious, although they claimed it was someone with fake
full-body-make-up, but you..." he trailed off.
Gohan
nodded.
„Yeah, I know what you mean. We don't look exactly
like aliens. Well, as the home planet of my father, Vegeta-sei, was
destroyed, only few of our race survived. My brother and I were born
here. The same applies for some others. But you must keep this
information secret. It is classified, and only few people now about
it."
The
doctor nodded.
„That explains a lot. And the fact that Hercule
Satan let his only daughter marry one of you Saiyans shows me that
you are honourable people. I know I can trust you. Your secret is
safe with me." he said, and they could tell that he meant that.
Then he pointed at the tail. „And those extra appendages are normal
for your race?" he asked.
Gohan
and the others nodded.
„They are." they answered in unison.
„Intriguing."
Dr. Banner said. „Well, now back to your examination, Videl." He
addressed Gohan and Videl.
"Well, Mr. & Mrs. Son, it looks
like everything's going well. But Videl, you need to eat a little
more however. The little girl is sapping the nutrients out of you
faster than you're taking them in."
Videl
nodded.
"Okay, that shouldn't be a problem." she said.
Gohan
nodded, too. He would see to that...
"Yup." He said. "I will
see to that."
Videl
glared at him.
"Excuuuse me? YOU will what?" she asked,
shooting daggers.
Gohan
gulped.
'Oh oh...' he thought, but it was already too
late.
Videl
was radiating fury, and the doctor and the others took several steps
back.
"I AM VERY WELL CAPABLE OF DOING SO ON MY OWN, GOHAN
SON! I DON'T NEED YOUR HELP!" she yelled, and Gohan cringed
visibly, covering his ears while his mother smirked. He had it
coming...
In
order to defuse the situation Gohan apologised, putting his pride
aside for the time being. Luckily it was only a few more months...
The
poor doc however, who was not used to such extremes, wiped quite some
sweat from his forehead. These people, their family and friends were
all very dangerous. He had personally attended to Chi-Chi Son and
then Bulma Briefs during their respective pregnancies.
Now
he was assisting Videl in her own, and her coupling was part Son on
top of it. Even worse, the father was the son of Chi-Chi Son, the
worst fury he had ever encountered...
Getting
through this one would surely prove to be the most challenging task
in his entire career. He only hoped that he had retired once any more
offsprings of those families would be ready to have their own kids...
TBC...
Gohan and Videl finally know that their baby will be a healthy girl.
Understandably they are as happy as one can get. COMING SOON: the new
house is finally ready, and Videl is most eager to explore it. And
Gohan has a surprise for his wife...
As always very special
thanks to my beta Rose Vaughn, who is doing a great job! Thx, Ash!
Author's
Note: some of you may say 'Just why the heck did you make Goku and
Goten clever?', but honest, I never thought that they were meant to
be dumb. Naive, okay, but naivity only lasts for so long. And
Gohan can't have gotten all his intelligence from Chi-Chi only now,
can he? If you don't like my view on things, well, your
choice. This is, after all, an AU.
SSJ3MysticGohan:
Grounded? Eep! Now that's bad! Hope it wears off soon...
And
thanks! I'm glad to hear that!
Tootsy:
Yup, and hopefully my last. Hope his head hurts from your frying pan
slinging, I saw it was a hit. Thanks for sticking with me.
And
thank you! I like to think that I have a good imagination. Yup, the
Z-Fighters are eager to train, and train they will. As for Goku, you
saw that I did not only keep it up, but I deepened it. Goku ain't
dumb, he's just naïve. And naivety only lasts for so long...
GOGI:
Via plain old KI-sensing. The others all relayed too much on Bulma
and forgot that there are other ways. Glad that you liked the
chapter!
nick-lover1991:
Nasty? Roasted? And I thought I had kept my temper in check...
:)
That guy indeed wrote a flame, namely this:
O.o your
really horrible you know that. this is a really stupid story. you
have problems. writing all these words. what do you do all day, you
sit on the computer and type all day. this is your life? go do
something with yourself. go outside you nerd.
That was totally
uncalled for, and I'm glad that a lot of ppl noticed and stuck with
me.
Glad that you liked the chapter and the inventions, and I'll
stick to the series in the regards that Gohan and Videl will get a
Pan. As for more kids, that will come later. And nice way of saying
bye... :)
HieiLuver1:
Thank you! Goten is 8, and Trunks is 9 in this story, whereas Bra
(that's her name in the English version of Z, whereas Bulla is the
Japanese name) is 1 ½. Didn't mention her often, for she
does not play that much of a role...
Mr.Staypuft:
Glad to hear that, and thanks!
PanBraSaiyin:
Thanks, I like to think that this story is one of those places where
it's fun to compliment. Hope you also liked my explanation for
Goku's and Goten's intelligence, for honestly, Gohan can't be
the only one in the family who's intelligent now, can he? I mean
look at the Saiyan race, they were all very clever. Nope, Goku was
just naive, not dumb. And ever so slowly he looses his naivity, as
well as Goten, who's influenced by Trunks. As for the method, no,
it was plain KI-sensing...
Son
Oliver: Thank you for the compliment! Glad that you liked the GR
and the necklace. I put a lot of thought into it, and I'm glad that
its liked. Yeah, Chi-Chi had calmed down now, and now Gohan can
concentrate on training and his wife. As for more kids and the
Z-Fighters getting stronger, I have something planned, yeah, but
first things first, first of all I'm gonna finish my 'Afterlife'
storyline. Will do my best to 'keep up the good work'! Thanks!
Candy
the Duck: Glad that you liked it, and I'm a bit of a Trekkie
too, that's where I got my inspiration. :)
Saiyan-of-the-Seas:
As for this question, I have not yet decided if Vegeta will go SSJ3
in this story or the next. But he will go SSJ3, that's a promise!
Laurenke1:
As you saw this very chapter, you did not have to wait very long...
:)
Marshmellow13Dragon:
WHAT??! Why did they delete 'Not here'? An outrage! I wanted to
know how it ended! One of my fav stories, and they take it off! Any
reason why? Grrr...
But I'm glad to hear that you liked it, and
I'm sure Dende would not want to meet Mr. Super Giant Mallet...
Rejhan:
Thank you! Glad that you like the new GR, and I'm glad to hear that
the headache is gone.
Yeah, I want one too. Too bad that we can't
build one here. As for Vegeta, well, that is the Slytherin in me,
being subtle and all. Good to hear that you like where I'm headed.
goldfighter:
Thanks! Glad that you loved it, and thanks for sticking to me!
Updates as always on Wednesdays... :)
Kitty86:
Thank you! I'm glad that you liked it. I always try to make my
chapters and ideas as detailed as possible, and I liked to think that
I managed to do so. Also thanks for sticking to me and for the help
with the terminology. Tardis fits so much better! Will do my best to
'keep the good work' up!
Saiya-jin
Queen: Glad that you love them, and yeah, I too wished I had
something like that to train in...
I guess we all feel kinda sorry
for Dende, but our Ex-Kami had it coming...
Rose
Vaughn: Thanks, Ash! That's exactly what that baka should do.
And if he shows his face again, our Saiyan sides will get some
exercise...
And glad that you loved the chapter! I aim to
please... :)
animeprincess1452:
Thank you for the compliment! Yeah, Gohan has done a good job, hasn't
he? I'll do my best to 'keep the awesome job' up!
Pikachu90000:
Thanks! And good to hear that it made sense. I always try to make my
theories as believable as possible. :)
Princess
of the Saiyans 16: Heh, thanks that you think the GR idea is
great, but I doubt that Funimation would buy it. Those bakas screwed
GT up, and I doubt that they would make any more Z-Episodes. But I
appreciate the praise. Thanks!
zfighter1989:
Thank you for the compliment! I love technology too, and I had a lot
of fun planning the GR. Finally a decent way to improve for our
Z-Fighters, and improve they will!
Joou
Himeko Dah: Thanks, and I don't worry about that baka, but he
had that comment coming. As for Dende, he brought that upon
himself...
zara
m: Yup, I agree, both to the great job Gohan has done as to the
expected results. As for Veggie, I have not yet decided if he will be
a SSJ3 in this story or later. As for your question, I have as good
as decided that I will make my own version of GT after this story,
once I have finished the 'Afterlife' story. Right you are, I have
already applied a lot of changes, and from there on I will lead the
story further.
Heh, glad that you have DG in check for now... :)
felinoel:
Thanks! Well, I write usually in the train after uni, and it is an
excellent method to relax. Being creative is cool... :)
Cappucine:
Thank you! Yeah, I put a lot of detail in it, and I'm glad that it
paid off. There's no chance now that the Z-Fighters (and that
includes the humans and even Videl) will slack off any. Rather the
opposite...
ElectraBlack:
Right you are, it was complex, but from the feedback I'd say it was
easy understandable. And yeah, you had quite an update rush lately.
Loved the chapters!
And thanks for sticking to me. Idiots like
'Hey...' should be simply forbidden...
cosmictwilight:
Yup, funny name he has, eh? And obviously can't take some critics
himself...
I agree, Gohan the Inventor has a nice ring to it.
Inventor and warrior, that's how it's meant to be (in my
opinion)...
Till
next Wednesday. Ja ne!