Guys, I got what I think is a flame today. The person's review and my response to it is at the bottom of this Author Note.
NordicaVB
I don't see how you could get reported for that. It's about what you would get in a R rated movie...maybe even a little less. Interesting chapter...glad they finally talked things through...and Inuyasha finally felt what he did to Kagome so many times. Well, can't wait to see what happens the next day!
Haunt: To you and everyone else that assured me: THANK YOU SO MUCH! :D It's nice to know that others think I shouldn't get in trouble...I mean, the reason I was unsure was because a lot of people with very mild lemons--and I mean very mild--have their stories deleted. In any case, thanks all!
SensesFail26x
Wow. That was a really cute chapter. I like how you ended it with them finally being together. I'm sick, so I decided to find a story, and I came across yours. And Inuyasha sounded like a really idiot before, but its probably what most people would do, who knows?
Well update soon, Jewel
Inuyasha: How many people read what we did?
Haunt:...Um. Sixteen?
Inuyasha and Kagome: ::blush::
KantoTheSlayer:
That. Was. Awesome.
All things considered, this chapter was as intense and suggestive as a lemon, without being one at all. Emotions are such a powerful tool that they can make up for everything else.
In any case, good write.
Inuyasha: See how good things can get when you actually tell her what you feel?
Kagome: So then, he's yours. Question is, what will you do now?
-Kanto The Slayer
Inuyasha: ::glances at Kagome and smirks::
Kagome: Ummmm...live with him? I dunno...
Rinicat:
I agree with the sentiments you had at the end...sniffs...put me in tears it was so pretty...believe me I won't rat you out liek what was done to me, for I did something similiar and I got booted for a bit.
Man I am still crying...Inuyasha you dunderhead...you finally listened...sniffles...
Haunt: ::wags tail::
Inuyasha: I'm not a dunderhead!
Yoroy:
That really isn't a lemon. I do agree with the athur on the subject of the lemon. I may not be trusted for my opinion yet, but when your I.Q. is 179, then talk to me about wether a story is good or mot! Great story, exelent plot and charecters placed in apropreat places. Great read, wright more or I wont back you up when you could use.
Haunt: Thanks for your support!
Zarbok:
VERY GOOD!
This was very well written!
So the Hanyou and Miko finaly got together... about damn time!
To Inuyasha: Well well well, so you finaly stoped running and listened and look what it got you.
Your no longer alone, you have a wonderful woman that in all likelyhood will stand by you throu thick and thin and loves you very deeply and to top it all off (sorry but I gotta say this) you got laid!
So I am gonna lower your baka rateing to almost none but if you hurt Kagome in any way it is gonna sky rocket. That said I wish you and Kagome a happy knight and I pity you because your going to have to put up whith Miroku's teasing and the queen bitch Kikyo trying to split you up.
To Kagome: Mayby he would've listened if you would've told him earlier...truth he wouldn't listen but what about before that, all the chances you had, you gave up before you got started ,so the blame is not all his that it took so damn long for you 2 to get together.
To surmize this was a good update and it is damn good to see that Inuyasha finaly stopped running and listened.
Signed
Zarbok
Kagome: Yeah, I know.
Inuyasha: Er. Thanks? I think? And damn, I forgot about that lecher of a monk...Kikyo's dead, by the way...
Haunt: Yeah, I killed her off before the story even began ;)
This next review is what I think was a flame.
Inugirl450:
Unlike me, they had someone who loved them dearly. I did like/love this one boy, but he didn;t like me and it broke my heart badly. I wondered why when I realized that I loved him. But he didn't love me back. Now everytime I see him my heart aches severly and all we do is look at each other eyes. Just so you know my emotions change like every five to ten minutes. I'm going to kill Kagome for taking my man, Inuyasha. I love him, and he's so cute. and I love when he get's angry. And that bastard Kagome slept with him. It would have been him and me instead of her, in some alternate universe you know. How could she do that she is such a slut. Not that I have a problem with Inuyasha doing it. but with her oh hell no. She better back off my man before it cost her her life. Cause I love bloodshed. Personally I love Inuyasha and everything about him. And that fact that he is so cute/finne. And I'd like to play with those dog ears too.
Inuyasha: ::snarls and places a hand on Tetsusaiga::
Kagome: Um...why am I a slut...?
Haunt: This review is NOT appreciated, m'dear. ::scowls::
THANK YOU FOR YOUR SUPPORT, EVERYONE! xD
-.-.-
Someone was blowing in Kagome's ear.
And she knew who it was. Hunching her shoulders and giggling, the girl mumbled, "Stop it, Inuyasha."
"Get up, wench. We've gotta get going."
Opening one eye, the miko caught sight of the hanyou's face very close to hers. "I don't wanna..."
She felt his chest move as he laughed. "Come on."
A whimper escaped the girl as Inuyasha pulled away. She curled into a ball, wrapping his haori tighter around her. "I'm cold."
"Then get up and put your clothes on."
Smiling evilly, Kagome stood and laid his haori on the ground. Catching his gaze, her smile widened as he whined. "Are you sure you want my clothes back on?"
The hanyou tore his gaze away from her and slipped on his hakama. "Get dressed and quit your teasing, wench." he replied, but his tone was huskier than normal.
Kagome giggled and dressed herself, tossing the hanyou's pyro-nezumi haori to him. There was a rustle of fabric as Inuyasha donned the haori, and she looked around at him.
"Where'd Kirara go?" the inu-hanyou asked her quizzically.
Blink. "I dunno."
"Mrew?"
Ah. There she was! The cream-colored pyro-kitten poked her head out of Kagome's overstuffed knapsack, crimson eyes blinking brilliantly in the morning air.
"How'd my bag get here?" the miko questioned, kneeling beside the monstrous yellow sack.
The kitten let out another mew and hopped down to earth, bi-tails swishing.
"You?" the hanyou asked, raisin an eyebrow at Kirara. The neko nodded.
"She must have brought it after we...you know..." A faint flush filtered over the girl's cheeks, then she smiled and hugged the pyro-neko. "Thank you, Kirara!"
The cat squirmed away and transformed in a flash of flame, looking at them expectantly.
Kagome's eyes widened. Inuyasha smirked and said, "She wants to take us back to the village."
The girl rose, heaving her backpack over one shoulder. "Let's go, then!"
-.-.-
Once in the air, there was silence for the first fifteen minutes of the ride. Then...
"I'm sorry." The hanyou mumbled from behind her.
Kagome glanced back at him. "Hm? For what?"
"For all that stuff with Kikyo. I shouldn't have..."
"It doesn't matter anymore." The miko smiled to reassure him. "And I'm sorry too; all this time I've been taking Koga's side...and I shouldn't have ever kissed him, on the cheek or not."
"Hm." The hanyou laid his head between her shoulderblades.
The girl smiled.
-.-.-
"Kagome!"
"Shippo!" the girl greeted, catching the kitsune as he launched himself at her.
Inuyasha hopped down from Kirara and lifted the miko down too, settling her on her feet. Kagome giggled and smiled down at Shippo.
"You're back!" The kitsune cheered, emerald optics glittering up at the girl. She nodded, then paled as the kit sniffed at her.
Shippo wrinkled his nose, sniffed again, then queried, "Kagome, why do you smell like Inuyasha?"
"Erm..."
"Don't ask questions, runt," the hanyou snapped.
Thank you, Inuyasha...
As if on cue, the houshi padded up, Seibai's rings jangling with each simple step. "Kagome, Inuyasha! You're back!" he greeted, smiling at them.
Kagome nodded. "Hi, Miroku. Sango-chan!"
The taijiya trotted up, wearing her normal green kimono and lugging Hiraikotsu over her shoulder as always. "Hello, Kagome-chan! You found Inuyasha!"
"Yeah, she found me. And what are you staring at, monk?!" Inuyasha snarled, brandishing his claws at the houshi, who'd been gazing intently from Kagome to the hanyou the past few moments.
"Kagome, Inuyasha...why are your auras different?" Miroku asked slowly.
The miko looked at her new mate and was shocked to see that his aura was now a flaring, blazing violet: it matched hers exactly. "Um...well..." she stammered, a blush creeping into her cheeks.
Inuyasha was red enough to make his haori look white. "None of your business."
A mischievous glint came into the perverted monk's violet orbs and he smirked. "Did the two of you..?"
"Did they what?" the kitsune asked, looking confused. Chancing a glance at her female friend, Kagome saw that Sango's eyes were wide with understanding.
We're so busted... "W-well..."
"It's none of your business!" the inu-hanyou snarled.
"You did!" the houshi exclaimed with a triumphant grin. "You two--"
"Houshi-sama!!" the taijiya hissed. "Don't talk about it in front of Shippo!"
Both miko and hanyou were blushing enough to set the monk's robes aflame. And oh, how they wished they could do it. All it'd take is a little spark and the hentai houshi would be burnt to a crisp...
The kitsune still looked confused. "What did they do?"
"Nothing," Sango assured him hurriedly.
Kagome shot her friend an appreciative smile, then looked around as Kaede sauntered up to them.
"I see you're both back," the elderly miko said.
The girl nodded. "Yes, we are. Miroku's, um, bothering us..."
The old woman laughed. "I can see why."
Can everyone tell what we did?
"Erm."
"Shut up about it." Inuyasha grated.
The old miko held up a pacifying hand. "I'm not going to tease you about it, Inuyasha. However, Houshi-sama." Kaede turned on the monk. "What they do is none of your business and I would appreciate it if you did not bother them about it."
The houshi blinked. "Yes, Lady Kaede."
Kagome let out a sigh of relief, and heard it echoed by the hanyou.
A sudden sense of vertigo swept over the miko and she clutched her stomach, wincing. "Oooh..."
The inu-hanyou's hand touched her shoulder and his worried voice echoed in her ears. "What's wrong, Kagome?"
"Kagome?"
"Kagome-sama?"
"Lady Kagome?"
"Kagome-chan?"
The voices of her friends as they clustered around her were not helping the tingling in the back of her throat. "Um...I think I'm going to..." She gagged, and all of a sudden...
Splat.
The girl continued to hold her stomach, trying vainly to stop the churning. Miroku staggered backward, the front of his robes splattered by brown-green bile. Not that he didn't deserve to be vomited upon, but...
"Morning sickness..." Kagome mumbled, still feeling distinctly ill.
"Kagome-chan!" Sango gasped. "You must be pregnant..."
"I already knew that...your scent's been different all morning." the hanyou muttered in her ear.
The miko groaned. "Mama's going to kill me..."
"Come on, Kagome, let's get you back to the old hag's hut." The hanyou took her by the elbow and led her away. Glancing at him, she saw that Shippo was now perched on his shoulder.
"Houshi-sama, I'll help you clean off your robes." The taijiya led the dazed monk away from the scene.
Kaede followed behind the hanyou, miko, and kitsune, chuckling to herself.