Unwelcome Visitors

# Just a quick note, this story has not been beta'd so I apologise for the bad grammar and clashing tenses. I will try to get this finished soon, I've been working on another fic I just started and have been neglecting this one. My humble apologies and thank you to those who have given me the great feedback, I really appreciate it. #



Part 18

Jack cursed quietly, but still audibly,

"Fuck"

Teal'c arched an eyebrow enquiring without saying anything. Jack just looked at the chamber in front of them.

"Rings"

"Sir he must have a ship hidden on the surface somewhere"

"I know that major, how the hell did he get it here without us noticing"

Sam considered for a moment "A spell possibly, a cloaking device at the very least. We knew he must have come by ship there's no way he could have come though the Stargate."

Jack gestured irritably, he hated it when Sam stated the obvious,

"Ok ok it doesn't matter now, lets go in"

"Do you think that is wise O'Neil"

Jack deadpanned "No I don't think its wise Teal'c, but Daniel must be in there somewhere so we're doin it"

"As you wish O'Neil"

They strode to the centre of the room and Teal'c activated the rings, seconds later they were in the Goa'uld ship. They quickly hugged the walls, not wanting to attract the attention of the Jaffa that were sure to be around. The sound of booted feet running toward them had them retreating in the opposite direction. Just as they turned the corner, a squad of Jaffa entered the room to use the rings and disappeared down into the base. Silently Jack motioned for them to explore the halls heading back the way they came, Sg1 moved like ghosts slipping from room to room. They came to an ornate entranceway and heard sounds, carefully looking around the open door they came to a horrified halt. They were able to slip into an alcove inside the entranceway, a screen concealing them from the room's occupants. There in front of them was Daniel, a naked Daniel, on his knees his arms crossed behind his head. They could see the blood flowing from the many thin lines that crisscrossed his back. Jack choked back a cry, tears stung his eyes as Sam grabbed his arm restraining him from just running into the room and shooting the bastard with the whip. Jaffa lined the walls that they could see, too many for them to risk an attack. Sam saw Jack accept that fact, his face a grey mask as they watched, from further in the room they heard Xander's voice choked with emotion as the Jaffa raised his whip again.

"Stop it you fucking bastard, leave him alone. Isn't it enough that you've taken his mind you have to try and kill him as well"

Carefully moving around they could see the dark haired youth chained to the wall. Nefu stood facing Daniel, a cruel smile on his face. He turned and walked over to the young man, he trailed a hand over the naked body. Xander steeled himself not to flinch as Nefu beckoned for the Jaffa to bring him the whip. He took it and ran his hand down the length of the wicked looking leather letting the end go so it dangled from his hand. His voice was silky with an edge of steel as he assessed the naked man before him.

"Perhaps you'd like to take his place young one."

Xander blanched but then he scowled at the Goa'uld

"If you leave him alone, yes I will"

A mocking laugh and the cool voice resumed its baiting,

"Such courage, but I'm afraid my slave doesn't wish you to..replace him, just yet. Lets ask him shall we?"

Nefu turned towards Daniel, "Do you wish to be replaced slave?"

Daniel's head touched the floor, "Your will master, I live to obey"

Jack stifled a sob and Sam's hand tightened on his arm as she struggled with the scene being played out before them.

Jack couldn't take it any more, he had to get Daniel out of there. He motioned to Sam and stared her down when she shook her head. Reluctantly she agreed, Jack pointed to Nefu and Sam's face hardened.

She mouthed a word "No"

Jack shrugged silently "Why not"

Sam raised both eyebrows and pointed to his neck, Jack could hear the silent sarcasm "Crystal"

Teal'c watched the exchange without words and nodded in agreement, Jack gave them both a look that said "Whatever" and motioned to them to move out.

Fanning out they sighted on their targets and attacked, zat blasts and gunfire echoed around the room. The Jaffa instantly returned fire as their fellows were decimated, Jack smiled grimly as the Jaffa that had whipped Daniel fell dead to the floor. As soon as they had started firing Nefu had activated his shield, he stood tight-lipped watching as sg1 looked to be gaining the upper hand. Xander struggled with his chains, his wrists bleeding where he rubbed them against the steel. Jack had advanced to where Daniel still sat motionless, head touching the floor. He grabbed the naked man by the arm and pulled him back towards the door. Nefu took his crystal in hand, his voice rising above the sound of gunfire and men dying, the words make no sense to those who do not understand the ancient language. The chant rose and the power in the words caused a wind to whip around their faces, Sam realised that the spell he cast would have devastating consequences for them. She called for a retreat and Xander watched helplessly as Sg1 moved back dragging Daniel with them. Teal'c tried once more to reach Xander but was forced back by a bolt of green lightening, the boy resigned himself to his fate, voice grim as he yelled.

"Leave, get out while you can"

Nefu's deep voice is heard speaking words in Goa'uld, unexpectedly Daniel reacted, pulling his arm away from Jack trying to return to his master. Jack wasted no time, striking him across the back of the head and scooping him up before he can fall unconscious to the floor. Sg1 retreats, Sam and Teal'c returning fire as they run through the halls, finally finding the ring room and transferring to the base. Reaching the dark corridors of the Initiative complex, they skirt several running battles between Jaffa and soldiers. Jack orders his forces to retreat and they pull out, their numbers swelling as they fight a rearguard action. The green light outside the cave causes the humans to pause for a moment but the shock passes and they continue on till they are safely aboard the remaining humvees and on their way back to the magic shop.

Giles quickly brings a blanket to cover Daniel as Jack carries the unconscious archaeologist into the shop and placed him on the couch. Wrapping the blanket in place around the still form, Giles notices the green band around Daniels neck. Jack reached down to touch it but Giles brushed his hand away.

"No don't touch it, it could be spelled"

Jack pulled back, his manner stiff as he explained how they found Daniel and the circumstances that made it impossible to reach Xander. William's eyes filled with tears and he bowed his head, when he looked back up Radic had assumed control.

"William understands that it was not possible for you to rescue their mate, but the demon inside of us screams for revenge and violence, he is being difficult to control."

All talk is suspended as Daniel began to come around, sitting up and shaking his head. A sly looks crosses his face before he suddenly snaps into awareness and kneels on the floor, head bowed. The group is shocked, Sam and Teal'c go to pull him to his feet and he does not resist though he keeps his gaze averted. Jack comes before his lover taking Daniel by the shoulders and hugging him conscious of the stiffness of the man in his arms.

"Daniel, its ok you back with us now"

Silence

"Daniel speak to us" silence and then a soft "speak to me love"

Jack cups Daniels face and tips it up so he can see into those blue eyes, they stare unblinking back at him, carefully blank.

"Daniel"

Sam breaks in nervously "Sir I think that he may not respond to that name anymore, Nefu called him Slave and he answered to that designation. If he's been the subject of a spell, he may not know who he is anymore."

Heart breaking, Jack's mouth tightened into a hard line as he struggled with the concept of Daniel being a slave. Taking a deep breath he spoke the words tonelessly.

"Slave..are you alright, you're not injured"

Daniel bowed his head and kept his voice subservient as he answered, even though plans of escape flickered across his mind. He was careful not to arouse suspicions as he answered his captor.

"Master I am yours to command"

Jack gulped in a deep breath as unbidden flash of heat rises through him.

*No bad Jack, you don't want Danny like this, so why am I picturing him on his knees now, oh god*

Daniel didn't let the smile of victory he felt at Jack's reaction show, shrewdly he formed a plan. Jack exhaled slowly he just wanted to take Daniel away and show him how much he loved him, but that wasn't going to happen any time soon.

"Daniel do you remember me...at all"

"Yes master" Daniel answered guilessly "You are my master"

Jack swallowed, this wasn't going the way he planned. Giles broke in, touching Jack on the shoulder in sympathy.

"Slave where did you get your collar"

"My former master gave it to me"

"How did he give it to you"

"He spoke the words of power and it appeared"

"Can you take it off"

"I do not know master"

Willow came close and examined the collar with Giles, she quickly intoned a spell and the collar sparked but did not change. Daniel jumped back and feigned weakness, Jack immediately took his arm and held him up. Daniel leaned into him, letting the heat of his near naked body seep into the colonel.

"I think that's enough for now, why don't we let Daniel rest for awhile"

Giles took off his glasses and chewed thoughtfully on the end.

"Yes that's a good idea, why don't you take him to lie down in the back room and we'll work on a spell to get that collar off. Oh and Jack there are some spare clothes of mine in there he can put on too"

Jack helped Daniel out of the room and into a small room at the back of the shop, it had a low cot under the window that looked out on to the alley. It was sparsely decorated with only a crate for a side table and a stack of heavy books upon it. Off to the side there was a small cupboard with some clothes in it, he riffled through them and took out a plain blue shirt and a pair of track pants. Jack shut the door behind them and lay the clothes on the edge of the cot. He watched as Daniel lay down on the cot before he collected himself and moved to pull the shade down on the window.

"Well your settled now, there's some clothes for you, I'll just...leave.you to ...um.it"

Daniel swung his legs over the edge of the cot and sat up taking Jack's hand in his.

"Is that what you wish master"

Jack closed his eyes and tried to contain his body's soaring emotions. He felt his pants tighten as he opened his eyes to see Daniel's head on a level with his cock. He twitched as Daniel unwrapped his blanket and moved on to his knees in front of him.

"Oh god Daniel, don't ...your not yourself"

A secret smile and Daniel lifted his hand to caress Jack through his pants.

"You are my master, are you not? Why would I not want to please you"?

Sure hands deftly undid Jack's pants, exposing the hard length it found to the cool air. Jack cried out softly as Daniel took him into his mouth with one long slide. He found his hands tangled in Daniel's soft hair as his lover buried his nose in his belly. Agile tongue flicking around the shaft, Jack shuddered as Daniel swallowed around the head of his cock. Unable to take it anymore, Jack started to thrust, body shivering in reaction at the sure suction and heat of Daniel's unbelievable mouth. Daniel's hands pulled Jack's pants and boxers down his legs, his hand working its way between his legs till his fingers rubbed against his anus. One finger dipped in and out of the puckered rosette before delving further, Jack shook and tried to control himself as Daniel found his gland and stroked it mercilessly. He came with a choked cry into Daniel's greedy throat, his spent cock slipped out of Daniel's mouth and he slumped over. Daniel guided him to the cot and lay him down, Jack reached out and took hold of Daniel's erection stroking it firmly. The linguist smiled to himself as the colonel ordered him.

"Danny fuck me please. I need you"

"Master you wish me to pleasure you more?"

Jack frowned

"I wish for us to pleasure each other."

"As you wish my master, would you be more comfortable on your knees?'

"Sure sounds good, this cot is a bit narrow"

Jack moved off the cot and onto his hands and knees on the floor, Daniel knelt between his legs and smiled. He rubbed the tip of his cock over Jack's asshole and spat in his hand, using it for lubrication he slicked up his cock. Jack shuddered as Daniel breached him, slowly guiding his cock into Jack's tight channel. Fully seated they rested for a moment before Daniel pulled out and started an easy rhythm. Jack was in heaven as his lover took him by the hips and started to pound him harder, faster, it wasn't long before he felt himself tightening, his cock bouncing under his belly. The slap, slap of Daniel's balls hitting his, the tickle of his ass cheeks brushing the hair on Daniel's belly, he was gonna cum again soon it was like a tidal wave approaching. Suddenly he arched his back as he felt a warm hand grasp his swollen cock, Daniel started to pump him in time with his ever-increasing thrusts. Jack couldn't hold back any longer and came with a groan over Daniels hand. He could feel his ass pulsing with the force of his orgasm and then he felt Daniel thrust hard once more. The cock in his ass jerked and spat as Daniel spilled his seed before falling forward onto Jack's back. Daniel rubbed Jack's back with one hand while he reached to the nearby side table with the other. He picked up a heavy tome and waited until Jack started to pull away, his cock slid out of the colonel's ass as the older man turned around and Daniel hit him hard on the side of the head. Jack slumped to the floor unconscious and Daniel rose and grabbed the clothes off the cot, dressing quickly. Once clothed, he lifted the shade and carefully opened the window, looking out he saw no one in the alley outside. Daniel clambered through and dropped to the ground, he moved toward the end of the short alleyway and headed east, walking casually through the early morning crowd. He turned the wrong way once and his collar gave him a jolt, he quickly turned the other way and headed back toward the initiative base...and his master.

tbc