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Chapter 2: Killing is my life!
Achilles' POV
When I was born my mother dipped me in the river Styx... MY father was a king and my mother a Goddess... Some say that I am immortal and cannot be killed... My question for you all then is: "Why would I bother with a shield if I couldn't be killed?"
Growing up I enjoyed fighting... I was always starting fights and was always the victor. No matter the person or the size I was always the victor. I knew that was who and what I was, this was why I was born... To fight war's and win them!
I became a warrior when I was 16... I fought for king Agamemnon... Though I hated that pig of a king... I wanted to be remembered for my abilities and my skills for war. I knew every tactic there was to know and I knew every weakness of my opponent before the fight even started. My skills were being recognized at last when I turned 17... I started winning all of Agamemnon's battle's... He ruled all of Greece because of me, there was only one country unconquered... Pylos, ruled by Nestor... Agamemnon was heading there tomorrow to claim Pylos as his own!
At the battle fields of Pylos
"Nice day for the crows!" Agamemnon said with a wide smile on his face.
"Remove your army from my land!" Nestor retorted angrily.
"NO! I like your land! I think I'll stay!" Agamemnon said and gave a childish laughter. "I like your men too!"
"They won't fight for you!" Nestor retorted glaring at the fat king in front of him.
"That's what the Ithacian's and Thessalonian's said!! And now they all fight for me!" Agamemnon stated with a haughty laughter.
"The world's too big Agamemnon! Even for you!" Nestor stated the obvious and smirked at his statement.
"We'll see about that!!" Agamemnon said, "Let's save some of our men! Your best warrior against my best warrior!"
"And what if I win?" Nestor asked carefully checking if he heard correctly.
"I will leave your lands and never return!" Agamemnon said with an evil smile.
Nestor smiled than screamed, "BOGARIUS!!!" men started chanting his name and cheering for their hero.
A big man appeared. He looked like a giant, he was that big!
"ACHILLES!!!"
There was silence for a while.
"I guess even your greatest warrior is afraid!" Nestor said and laughed.
"Be careful who you mock!" Agamemnon retorted.
A man on a horse galloped to the two kings.
"Achilles isn't here Milord!" The man stated.
"Well then where the hell is he?" Agamemnon said outraged.
"We sent a boy to look for him!" He said.
The messenger boy gallops at top speed to Achilles' tent. He walks to the tent and enters. He sees 3 sleeping forms. 2 women and 1 man... It has to be Achilles. Achilles has the second highest reputation for women chasing after him! The highest is none other than Prince Paris of Troy. The boy walked over to Achilles... his hands started towards Achilles but Achilles grabbed hold of his hands.
"I was having a dream!" Achilles looked over to his side and towards the girls next to him, "A very nice dream!"
"The king requests your presence!" The boy stuttered, obviously afraid.
"Tell your king that he can call for me in the morning!" Achilles yawned and turned back to his sleeping position.
"But milord... It is morning!" Achilles stares up at the boy, "They're waiting for you!"
Achilles got up and put on his war toga and armour and picked up his sword, shield and spear off the ground.
"They say that you can't be killed!" The boy said admiringly.
"I wouldn't be bothering with a shield than would I?" Achilles said sardonically.
"The man you're fighting! His really big! I wouldn't want to fight him!" The boy said in a slightly frightened voice.
"That's why no one will remember your name!" And with that Achilles rode off to the battle.
Whilst passing through the crowd of his fellow warriors they cheered him on and screamed his name.
"I should have your head for your late arrival!!!" Agamemnon growled.
"Than maybe you should fight for yourself then!" Achilles stated and started walking back.
"Achilles... Don't go, we need you! Spare all these men!" He said pointing at all the men, "Let them go back to their wives and family!"
As Achilles passed the kings, "Just imagine kings fighting their own battles... Wouldn't that be a sight?" With that Agamemnon sneered.
Bogarius turned to face his men and banged his fists against his big strong chest and started yelling and than turned towards Achilles. But his life flashed before him when Achilles jabbed a blade through his collar bone and he splurted blood out his mouth and than died there and than...
"Is there no one else?!" Achilles screamed hotly, "Is there no one else?!"
"Who are you?" Nestor asked flabberghasted while looking at his warrior lying dead on the floor.
"My name is Achilles... Son of Peleus!" Achilles said.
"I'll remember that name!" Nestor said respectfully, he handed a scepter out to Achilles, "This scepter is from the king of Pylos, give this to your king!"
"He's not my king!" Achilles said angrily and walked away without a word.
"Of all the warlords in the world, I hate him the most!" Agamemnon said hotly as Achilles walked passed him.
2 years later
Achilles was walking with his cousin Patroclus in the slave market.
Patroclus started wandering around into tents while Achilles waited outside. His cousin was going to choose the new slave.
Achilles peeped into one of the tents. There were two men and a slave girl. The one man standing outside the cage was obviously the salesman. He looked at the man buying the slave. He started touching her and you could see that she didn't like it... She hit him back... Achilles looked stunned for a moment... A slave hitting a buyer? Achilles thought to himself. He smiled at the thought. The buyer hit her and walked out, for some reason some part of him wanted to hurt that man very badly. The man left and Achilles saw the salesman walking over to her and saying something to her than hitting her. Achilles was out raged! But Why do I care? Achilles asked himself. He looked back, the salesman has finally left her.
Achilles walks over to the salesman, "I'll buy her!"
""But my good sir, she's a feisty one!" The salesman declared giving her a cold look.
"Did you not hear correctly? I said I want to buy her!" Achilles repeated more impatiently this time.
"Ok, but for you! 10 gold coins!" The salesman said very happily at this. Achilles threw the gold coins on the floor and walked over to the slave girl on the floor. He touched her tenderly.
"It's ok..." Achilles whispered, "I won't hurt you! I promise!" With those words he picked her up gently and carried her out of the tent. She fell unconscious in his strong arms.
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A/N – hey... I know the ending was exactly the same as the 1st chapter... sorry about that... Well, I just wanted to give a little bit of history from Achilles and Briseis... Sorry if you didn't like it... Well... I'll try to update as soon as possible... And the middle was sorta like the movie, well actually the words are way different and I'm so sorry for that!! But I only watched Troy once and that was 2 months ago so I've forgotten the words... not that I ever knew it... Well anyways... Please leave me a review and tell me what I'm doing wrong or if you enjoyed it... Well anyways... bye than... :)
