*** Chris- Hello all! Weel, for a while now I've been looking up my reviews
and i notice one thing... my spelling must really suck because everyone
complains about it, lol! Im just sitting here like five minutes before this
and i start laughing because of how many people complain about it. I
shouldnt be laughing, i know, i think its rather amusing though. (And i
should probably start capitalizing my i's shouldnt I? O_O) Well, ya'll got
a reason to complain! Im lazy! Mwahahahahaha! (That and this stupid writing
program doesnt have a cursed spell check! What program doesnt have a spell
check! Come on!)
In other news, other then my crappy spelling, as I said before I got my Gravitation movies. YES!!!! I wish they had Gravitation as a fanfiction link on here... darn them! _ But, on ebay, I just bought two amplifiers for my brother, fun fun, spending over $100 on him... You should all hear the sarcasm. I also, just for the heck of it, bought Gravitation, both OAV's! YES!! They will be coming later in the week, so I will be all filled with happiness by then. If any of you people, not many though because I dont think this is a lovable subject, love singing, rock stars wearing little NC-17 clothing, all male, and the main characters are both gay, you should watch the show. Its pretty funny actually... *Starts daydreaming...* Um, sorry about that. Well, I really should get going with this story... So Review all, and sorry about all the stupid errors... for I am lazy... yeah... ***
Chapter 7
Sora gasped for breath as he raced down the road, eyes never closing. Slight gusts of wind wipped at his face as he ran, his feet slipping out from under him everyonce in a while from the recently fallen rain. Blood trickled down from the cut inthe side of his forehead, the crimson liqued slowly drying into one of his eyes. He could barely see anymore, couldnt hear. He didnt even know if the older man was still running after him, or if he got sick of running and grabbed the car. He didnt even know if he gave up. All he could think of was running.
His legs felt like they had bricks attached. The world began to blur and he slipped, crashing to the ground. Cool rain water splashed over him, coaking the boy to the bone. He didnt feel it though, only feeling the dizzyness from blood loss. Resting his head on the ground he gave in, allowing the darkness to swallow him up.
***
Bear smiled, walking down the street. His trench coat was soaked, the remains of a down pour that only ended minutes before hand. His hat dripped a little past his nose, sometimes hitting it and causing his to wipe the drops away with his sleeve.
He had been surprisingly happy these last few days. No idea why. Maybe it was the fact he got his house cleaned, maybe it was the odd intruders just a few days prior, or maybe it was the falling rain...
^*^
" Honey. We will come and get you shortly, dont worry." He heard a young woman say into the phone, her voice as beautiful as polished crystal.
Bear smiled. " Thank you babe. I will just wait by the Hobering Cafe."
" Ok." Then a click.
He waited, his eyes looked out the window of the small cafe. The smell of warm coffee and hot chocolate filling his nose. Rain slowly began to fall outside, the begginning of a pretty good storm...
^*^
Bear shook his head, walking slightly faster. He didnt need them coming back, those memories, those...
A body layed in the middle of the sidewalk. Eyes scanning the person for a moment, he realized it was a kid. The child couldnt be any older then nine or ten,. he could tell just by looking at the size.
' And he doesnt look like hes moving.'
He quickened his pace, noticing how little people were out this late at night. No one would have been able to see the young child with his dark clothes on in the sidewalk at two a.m. Bending down, Bear turned the child over ever so carefully, checking for a pulse.
' Good, now lets see...'
These seemed to be a few bruises on the boy. A large cut was on the left side of his forehead. It bled, but it didnt look too deep. Some more slight wounds and bruises, but it didnt look as if the boy was majorly hurt.
Slowly and cautiosly Bear picked up the child, cradling him in his arms. The child breathed deepling, burying his head into Bears coat trying to get warm. Holding him close, Bear hunched over, trying to make sure no cold air breezed onto the boy. He turned, and headed for his home on the hill.
***
Sora moaned and rolled over, his head killing him. He could feel a warm pillow under his head, and his eyes shot open.
' Father!'
He sat up in a second, eyes searching wildly. Darkness covered the whole room, barely enough to even see the front of his hand. His breathing became deeper as panic set in.
Suddenly the light flickered on. Wincing from the sudden fash, Sora held an arm ovr his face, trying to sheild it as much as possible.
" Why good morning little one, your finally awake."
The boy looked up, large eyes widening as he stared up at the man in front of him. This person was nothing like his father. Dark hair and eyes, and much taller, a bit more muscular. And his house, it looked like a palace from where he was sitting.
He seemed to be in what looked like a living room, his body now sitting on the couch. A fireplace stood across from him in the giant room, stuffed firs of animals looming over him. The whole room looked to be like a hunting ground. He could never imagin living in a place where things were now lurking, once alive, but no more.
Finally Sora nodded. The man smiled at him and walked over, throwing a match into the fire place. Withen seconds the fire ignited, senidng the room into much more brighter light. He walked back over and turned off the seiling light, the fire from the fire place profiding enough as it was.
" Are you alright? I dont know if I checked you out properly." The man mumbled while he threw in some wood.
He nodded again.
" Well speak boy, do you not have a tongue?"
Sora was a bit taken back at this statement, and a bit nervouse, until he saw the man smile again, his face bright and happy. For some reason he felt relaxed around this man, almost like he was...
" Thank you." Sora finally managed to say.
The man nodded. " Whats your name boy?"
" My name is Kyoutchi Sora. And yours?"
The man looked away into the fire and chuckled. " If you must know, my name is Ikaro Bear."
*** Chris- That went rather well. I dont know if the chapter was short or not... but thats ok. My friend is coming to sleep over, yes! Well, I hope this didnt cause any confusion, but in case any of you didnt know, I refere to them by saying their last name first because that is how the Japanese do it. I dont want any confusion to those who are new to the Japanese customs. You wont see many Japanese words used in my stories though, maybe some. I tend not to use them becuase I remember when I was new to animation, I had no idea what all these words meant when people wrote them in their stories. Of course when I was reading back then no one put up an explination bar at the end of their chapters. The other reason is I dont think two languages should be mixed with eachother. It gets a bit confusing. Thats just my personal opinion though, so if you think I'm foolish, aw well. Of course then I have to ask myself, who is gods name is actually taking the time to read all this odd stuff I put up here... Well, like usual, if you have any comments, concerns, personal problems or questions, feel free to contact me at residentevilfan267@cartooners.com . I love to here from you all, and its so enjoyable to read e-mails from fellow anime fans and writers. Well, review all! ***
In other news, other then my crappy spelling, as I said before I got my Gravitation movies. YES!!!! I wish they had Gravitation as a fanfiction link on here... darn them! _ But, on ebay, I just bought two amplifiers for my brother, fun fun, spending over $100 on him... You should all hear the sarcasm. I also, just for the heck of it, bought Gravitation, both OAV's! YES!! They will be coming later in the week, so I will be all filled with happiness by then. If any of you people, not many though because I dont think this is a lovable subject, love singing, rock stars wearing little NC-17 clothing, all male, and the main characters are both gay, you should watch the show. Its pretty funny actually... *Starts daydreaming...* Um, sorry about that. Well, I really should get going with this story... So Review all, and sorry about all the stupid errors... for I am lazy... yeah... ***
Chapter 7
Sora gasped for breath as he raced down the road, eyes never closing. Slight gusts of wind wipped at his face as he ran, his feet slipping out from under him everyonce in a while from the recently fallen rain. Blood trickled down from the cut inthe side of his forehead, the crimson liqued slowly drying into one of his eyes. He could barely see anymore, couldnt hear. He didnt even know if the older man was still running after him, or if he got sick of running and grabbed the car. He didnt even know if he gave up. All he could think of was running.
His legs felt like they had bricks attached. The world began to blur and he slipped, crashing to the ground. Cool rain water splashed over him, coaking the boy to the bone. He didnt feel it though, only feeling the dizzyness from blood loss. Resting his head on the ground he gave in, allowing the darkness to swallow him up.
***
Bear smiled, walking down the street. His trench coat was soaked, the remains of a down pour that only ended minutes before hand. His hat dripped a little past his nose, sometimes hitting it and causing his to wipe the drops away with his sleeve.
He had been surprisingly happy these last few days. No idea why. Maybe it was the fact he got his house cleaned, maybe it was the odd intruders just a few days prior, or maybe it was the falling rain...
^*^
" Honey. We will come and get you shortly, dont worry." He heard a young woman say into the phone, her voice as beautiful as polished crystal.
Bear smiled. " Thank you babe. I will just wait by the Hobering Cafe."
" Ok." Then a click.
He waited, his eyes looked out the window of the small cafe. The smell of warm coffee and hot chocolate filling his nose. Rain slowly began to fall outside, the begginning of a pretty good storm...
^*^
Bear shook his head, walking slightly faster. He didnt need them coming back, those memories, those...
A body layed in the middle of the sidewalk. Eyes scanning the person for a moment, he realized it was a kid. The child couldnt be any older then nine or ten,. he could tell just by looking at the size.
' And he doesnt look like hes moving.'
He quickened his pace, noticing how little people were out this late at night. No one would have been able to see the young child with his dark clothes on in the sidewalk at two a.m. Bending down, Bear turned the child over ever so carefully, checking for a pulse.
' Good, now lets see...'
These seemed to be a few bruises on the boy. A large cut was on the left side of his forehead. It bled, but it didnt look too deep. Some more slight wounds and bruises, but it didnt look as if the boy was majorly hurt.
Slowly and cautiosly Bear picked up the child, cradling him in his arms. The child breathed deepling, burying his head into Bears coat trying to get warm. Holding him close, Bear hunched over, trying to make sure no cold air breezed onto the boy. He turned, and headed for his home on the hill.
***
Sora moaned and rolled over, his head killing him. He could feel a warm pillow under his head, and his eyes shot open.
' Father!'
He sat up in a second, eyes searching wildly. Darkness covered the whole room, barely enough to even see the front of his hand. His breathing became deeper as panic set in.
Suddenly the light flickered on. Wincing from the sudden fash, Sora held an arm ovr his face, trying to sheild it as much as possible.
" Why good morning little one, your finally awake."
The boy looked up, large eyes widening as he stared up at the man in front of him. This person was nothing like his father. Dark hair and eyes, and much taller, a bit more muscular. And his house, it looked like a palace from where he was sitting.
He seemed to be in what looked like a living room, his body now sitting on the couch. A fireplace stood across from him in the giant room, stuffed firs of animals looming over him. The whole room looked to be like a hunting ground. He could never imagin living in a place where things were now lurking, once alive, but no more.
Finally Sora nodded. The man smiled at him and walked over, throwing a match into the fire place. Withen seconds the fire ignited, senidng the room into much more brighter light. He walked back over and turned off the seiling light, the fire from the fire place profiding enough as it was.
" Are you alright? I dont know if I checked you out properly." The man mumbled while he threw in some wood.
He nodded again.
" Well speak boy, do you not have a tongue?"
Sora was a bit taken back at this statement, and a bit nervouse, until he saw the man smile again, his face bright and happy. For some reason he felt relaxed around this man, almost like he was...
" Thank you." Sora finally managed to say.
The man nodded. " Whats your name boy?"
" My name is Kyoutchi Sora. And yours?"
The man looked away into the fire and chuckled. " If you must know, my name is Ikaro Bear."
*** Chris- That went rather well. I dont know if the chapter was short or not... but thats ok. My friend is coming to sleep over, yes! Well, I hope this didnt cause any confusion, but in case any of you didnt know, I refere to them by saying their last name first because that is how the Japanese do it. I dont want any confusion to those who are new to the Japanese customs. You wont see many Japanese words used in my stories though, maybe some. I tend not to use them becuase I remember when I was new to animation, I had no idea what all these words meant when people wrote them in their stories. Of course when I was reading back then no one put up an explination bar at the end of their chapters. The other reason is I dont think two languages should be mixed with eachother. It gets a bit confusing. Thats just my personal opinion though, so if you think I'm foolish, aw well. Of course then I have to ask myself, who is gods name is actually taking the time to read all this odd stuff I put up here... Well, like usual, if you have any comments, concerns, personal problems or questions, feel free to contact me at residentevilfan267@cartooners.com . I love to here from you all, and its so enjoyable to read e-mails from fellow anime fans and writers. Well, review all! ***