Ibble ibble- I hope you like this. I tried hard on this song-based poem in the eyes of Hiei. It is based on Crossfade's songs, 'Starless', 'The Deep End', and 'Colors' and any other song they did.

Everyone else- Enjoy! Hard-core rockers, I'm sure you can relate with the music. Well review and give me suggestions. You can use any pairing you would like.

The Dark Deep Hole

It's so hard to hold on to this sharp cliff. I'm falling.

I'm ready to fade, now. I might have already disappeared before.

I can't feel you. This pain hurts too much to even hear you. It is only pain inside of me.

I wonder why I don't give in.

Colors. The only ones that exist in me are black and gray. But I sometimes wish I were pure white.

Hemorrhage. I've seen it too many times and made it. But only this time it's inside of me.

Sometimes I wish someone would blow me away. Do it quick but let it burn inside of me. I want to see how bitter and cold I've become.

My life is a fake. I'm a thorn inside of you… piercing your heart and tearing at your soul.

I see the black hole and I'm going off the edge, gonna hit the bottom at any moment. I fear I'll be too late to save, but I deserve it. I just want to see your smiling face one more time

I'm numb and even the cuts of knives won't hurt me. What happened to me? I can't live like this. I wish your life were mine. I only wish you didn't have to see me like this.

Alcohol will sure knock me out a day. But I'm not sober anymore. I'm experiencing something you can't pause with more pain.

I hide my feelings and myself under my heart. I have to save myself but I have to push you away. I have to be around no one. I may fall, but hey, hey I will not fall without effort of getting back up… this deep dark hole.

Review and I'm coming up with a more positive sequel. It's important to read it 'cause then you'll see what happens to him. Then there is going to be a sequel to that. This is my first poem so I want many suggestions. My sentence structure sucks but it is supposed to be emotional and not to rhyme. Hey and some things may not be true. Remember it's just an inspiring from songs. And I'm not like this at all.