Chapter 16
((A/N: I checked....146 reviews and votes stand to...
BoA-Every Heart ((6 Votes))-You guys must REALLY like this song.....
Hikaru Utada-Simple and Clean ((2 Votes)).....hehehehe....anyone played Kingdom of Hearts? LOL!
Moulann Chang-Over Again ((2 Votes)) LOL! You guys are fun you really are. You guys like J-Pop! Coolio! I love J-Pop, it's all I ever listen to anymore. Moulann Chang is still an awesome artist...but I must admit Over Again didn't make as much sense with the story as much as Every Heart would. Now I reply:
Amy Shadows-Wait no longer my friend, and as you see Hikaru only has.....2 votes...o.o' But don't worry, Hikaru Utada rocks in my opinon? Have you heard the song Eternally? drools I love that song!
Aerin131-Okay...no more deaths... This one is less depressing than AFAMAD....and your still not over Arty's death in that one? Wow...and my next fanfiction? Well I'm working on two projects....One called Memories Unknown and one called Reflection. Sadly Reflection berely has ANY romance in the genre to it is so far Supernatural/Action/Adventure/Angst/Mecha, but it's still going to be an amazing work of art. I'm letting 2 people edit and chop and add with me. Elaine and Keiko if they're up to it. I estimating Reflection should be out in....Spring 2005. And Memories Unknown will be out after Switched maybe, I'm not exactly sure....I just know Reflection won't be out soon, the earliest realease to it would be about Feb.2005. But stick around for more info, I'll have bunches to give away real soon!!!!!
teenbibliophile12-Trust me you'll love the dance, the plot will get darker.....trust me....'
TkMacintosh-Here's you're next chapter.
Llama Child-Yeah it was short. The editor was acting evil with Ch.15.....it wouldn't listen to me. I took me EIGHT tries to get that blasted editor working...it might not even work on this chapter either. -.-' That'd just be evilness. I would've had 15 out sooner, but was acting evil. And you check everyday WOW! I have a loyal fan ne? Coolio! Well just keep on checking.
Hyperkitti-Trust me...Koboi causes some crap..not enough to screw up Artemis and Holly's realtionship so don't worry about that. And you haven't heard any of them? Well they're Asian Artists, BoA is from Korea...but she sings in English, Korean, and Japanese. Which is quite impressive don't you think? Hikaru Utada is from Japan I think, she's done things for the Rush Hour 2 soundtrack and the well known videogame Kingdom of Hearts. Moulann Chang is from Canada, sings in English, has a beautiful voice.. All of them are really good artists if you don't like alot of American Rap and R&B....and love meaningful lyrics. .
Keiko-Yeah you'll urge me to keep at it won't you? Heh, don't worry this story is for you and Elaine mostly...because I know you both read it and both of you are my partners in crime. ' Best wishes and happy reading koi!
Holly woke up by her music.....rolling her eyes.
"Dammit," she muttered, her leg pushed a button on her stereo remote amplifing the music to go louder. Oddly enough it had also flicked onto the radio at the same time. Evilness.
Holly who wasn't in the mood to listen to any music at all, hit the off button to the stero and rolled off the bed and was sprawled out on the floor. Whoopdedoo, another fucked up morning.
There was a ring from her communicator.
"Who is it?" muttered Holly sleepily.
"Heh, someone wake up on the wrong side of the bed this morning Artemis?" asked Foaly's entergetic voice.
"Hate to burst you bubble Foaly, but sweetie Artemis and I switched back," said Holly.
"WHAT? How?" asked Foaly who was stunned. Holly swore she heard a couple things crash in the background. She couldn't help but to let out a laugh.
"Um....it rained...Artemis and I were discussing what the hell we were going to do for that dance his mother is making him go to and it rained and we switched," explained Holly leaving out the hug part. There was NOWAY Holly was telling about that hug.
"So....how do you feel?" asked Foaly.
"Truly I feel like crap, I stayed up all night," muttered Holly.
"What? Awww...you miss Arty already? What did you two do last night to make you so tired?" teased Foaly.
"Foaly, shut up! NOW! I went home alone, I did not have any affair with Artemis.....none the less any contact when we switched back," screamed Holly, it was slightly a lie...she hugged Artemis...but who cares?!
Foaly chuckled.
"Whatever you say dear, now if you don't mind we need you at the Police Plaza, it's already eight thirty," he said.
"Alright, I'm coming, I'm coming," grumbled Holly.
Someone kept poking him.....Artemis tossed over to only here someone laugh.
"Okay who's poking me?" he muttered not even opening his eyes.
"It's me Artemis," whispered a voice..."You're only love....Holly."
Artemis toppled onto the floor to find Juliet standing above him laughing madly.
"Juliet you aggervating peice of-" began Artemis.
"Wow, you've changed..was it that you played your girlfriend's role for too long?" asked Juliet.
A pillow was thrown at Juliet who merely catched it in between her thin fingers.
"Holly and I don't have such a relationship," said Artemis.
"Why do you have to say things that you don't me...c'mon you wuv her," said Juliet innocently.
"Dammit Juliet, get out now!" screamed Artemis.
"As you wish Arty-Boy," said Juliet running out of the room.
Butler looked at his sister as she stepped out.
"What.....what did you do?" he asked stunned.
"Aw, I just made him come into realisation with his inner self," replied Juliet.
Butler looked scared....her sister was one TWISTED person...especially when it came to aggervating people and playing matchmaker.
Holly sighed as she got back to work, here went her normal life...
Root smirked.
"How's it feel back to be back in your own body?" he asked.
Holly glared.
"Foaly's been telling the whole world?" she asked venomously.
"No...actually he just told me...you know he'll keep his mouth shut for another 50 years," replied Root.
Holly rolled her eyes.
School, the ever tormenting day. 3 more days that dance would come..and Artemis was bombarded by bunches of people. But of course he was already taken by someone, and that's how he replied.
"It's someone from a different school isn't it?" asked one girl by the name of Cammie who was actually pretty nice....quiet and such...she was just very curious at sometimes.
"Yes," replied Artemis.
"I will tell you she's lucky," said Cammie.
"Actually my date didn't really want to go until now....," replied Artemis.
Cammie smiled.
"I wish you luck then," she said walking off.
The first girl in the whole high school who actually took "no" for answer and was nice about it. Not that Artemis had fallen in love with Cammie or anything, but at least she was nice about it and not throwing a hissy fit over it.
3 more days....that's all there was.....hating to admit, Artemis was nervous for some odd unknown reason. He shouldn't be though, he has known Holly quite well.....or was Juliet knowing something he didn't? Hmmm.....depending on what....it was....was she right about being in love with Holly.
((A/N:Sorries, it took me sooooooooooo long! But I'm getting major writers block and huge obessessions over CardCaptor Sakura ((I borrows manga Volumes 1-3 this week)) but good news! You guys get to do the dance scene...I'll do the darkest plot thing but you guys can write up the dance for me. All you have to do is:
1.Type up the following day of the dance and use BoA's Every Heart Lyrics in the chapter. YOU MUST USE EVERY HEART! LoL!
2.It must be 2 or more pages long....
3.It must have you name so I can give you guys credit.
4.You send the chapter to
5.Deadline is November 27th....so you guys have a week!! I'll pick the winner by the most romantic scence....details ect.ect.
You guys enjoy! BTW-For all of you who read Stuck, I'm rewriting it for your enjoyment, so don't think I'm stopping the typing. I'll do the last couple chapters so don't write up the part where Opal Koboi comes in and stuff. Just the dance. ENJOY!))
