Chapter 3: Trains, Planes, & Ridepods
Max & Monica ride forward into the train tunnel ahead of them & into the semi-dankness, & suddenly the Ridepod says without warning "We fight!" which makes Monica jump, as she forgot it can talk.
"Max" says Monica, breaking his concentration "can you turn off the voice please?"
"Why?" says Max back "It scaring you?"
"NO!" shouts Monica back, "It just..."
"Just what?" asks Max inquisitively
"In the dark" says Monica "& with the Ridepod voice echoing, it sounds like Monsters are everywhere."
Max nods reluctantly, & leans to where the Core is to switch off the Voice, When Monica screams
"LOOKOUT!!!!" screams Monica, pulling Maxes head up so he can see ahead.
The lights on the front of the Ridepod light up the gloominess, & clear ahead of them is the back of a box, & Max pulls on the reverse & the brake, but it only slows them enough to give them a few more seconds until they hit it
"JUMP FOR IT!" he shouts, "NOW!!!!"
He grabs at Monicas arm & jumps from the Ridepod with her pulled with him, barely getting clear as the Ridepod hits the Box & explodes, shocking Max.
"How?! Where?! WHY!!!!" Max says, shouting the last word, filling the Tunnel with noise, & several expletives follow from him (NB If I typed what he said, it wouldnt be a G Rating), shocking Monica as she didnt know he knew those words.
"Max" Monica says, covering Maxes mouth with her hand, stopping the swearing lad "Calm down, please?"
Max nods with the hand still over his mouth, & Monica moves it gingerly, & Max sighs. "What we hit, anyway?" asks Monica, looking at the Box
Suddenly, a voice comes from left of where they look, making both Jump "What the hell hit my train?!" asked the voice, a light shining from where the voice is towards Monica, missing Max "& who the hell are you!"
"Im Monica Reybrandt!" says Monica standing up, moving so she stands in Maxes way so the voice doesnt see him "& who are you to be asking me?
"My name" says the voice "is..."
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I now want audience participation for this part, so listen.
I want the readers to give me the person who finds Monica, & there are 2 conditions needed (just like building the Georama i guess);
The person is Male, from anything (film, tv, game)
The person has trains relating to him (be it he has stood on one, fought one, etc)