Disclaimer: I do not own Kim Possible and I never will

ps. Bonnie must die.

Chapter 1 the trip

"Bye mom I'm leaving for school" said Kim going out the front door.

"Have a good day at school Kim"

As Kim got out the door she saw Ron waiting for her as normal.

"Hey kp whats up"

"Nothing really"

"Hey I was wondering if you would like to go on a trip with me and my parents" Said Ron.

"Where" asked Kim with an unhappy look on her face. "I hope it isn't like last time when you took me to a bug museum"

"Naw were going to Hawaii"

"If my parents will let me"

Later that day during lunch.

"So your really going to Hawaii Ron"

"Yep" said Ron with a grin.

"whats this Ron Stopible gets to go to Hawaii" said Bonnie.

"Your not going Bonnie"

"Meet me in front of the girls locker room after 5th period" wispered Bonnie in Ron's ear.

"what did she want" seathed Kim.

"nothing" Kim just gave him an uneasy look.

outside the girls locker room 5th period (no one is around)

"Hello"

"Hey there sexy"

"Whoa"

She grabs Ron's hand and then places it on her butt"

"You wana take me now?" inquired Bonnie.

"ummm"

"How about now?" then the takes Ron's other hand and places it on here boob.

"Ummmm, I gota go!!" said Ron running the other direction away from Bonnie.

That day after school when Kim got home she asked her parents if she could go with Ron to Hawaii.

"Hey mom you look really nice today" said Kim

"Ok what do you want" said Kim's mom.

"Ron invited me to a trip to Hawaii. Can I go PLEASE!" begged Kim giving her mom her famous puppy dog pout.

"O no not the puppy dog pout. O all right you can go"

"You're the best mom ever"

"Just don't forget be safe there could be alot of bad people in hawaii"

"all right mom"

later that day at the airport

"H-Hey Kim t-theres something I wanted to ask-"

"flight 128 to Hawaii is now departing please start bording the plane" said the speaker.

"Awww man"

"Lets go thats our flight" said Mrs. Stopible

Wile on the plane

"hey kp I wanted to know if you would go out-"

"So Kim do you plan on having a fun in Hawaii" asked Mrs. Stopible

(a/n) end of chapter

I though this rewritten chapter 1 was better than the orinagle.

Thanks to KP4me I thought i would rewright this chapter and no this will not be a death fic.