Hello I am Sun Princess. This is my first fanfiction so please be gentle. Tell me do you like it. Or does it suck? Review, review, review!!!!!!!! Do you have any comments? Tell me!!!!! Who should I pair Serena with?!
Disclaimer-I do not own either of the TV shows in this fanfiction. I do not claim the betrayal plot as my own. All I claim are the plot twists. If you see any similarities between my fic and yours please tell me and I will see what I can do. Please bare in mind that if I don't change it after you have asked it may be because I have it set up for a major plot twist
*Notes*
"......" - speaking '......' - thought *.....*- Author notes
*Ages* Serena- 16 Inners-16 Darien-20 Outers (except Hotaru and Setsuna)-20 Hotaru-14 Setsuna-100, 000,000,000,000,000... Trunks-18 Gohan-18 Goten-8 Adults- normal ages.
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Serena had just gotten out of school. ' Wow, everyone is going to be so surprised! I'm actually going to be early for the scout meeting.' * For once Serena didn't get detention! * ' Man the looks on there faces are going to be priceless!' ' Almost there just to more steps.' Serena walks over to Rei's door and is about to open the door. "Serena is such a dork!" Came Rei's voice. "I know. She actually thinks I love her!" ' What, it can't be! This is how Darien really feels about me!' Just then another voice brings Serena from her trance like state. "I know! I mean yesterday, she fell flat on her face! What do you think Amy, Lita?" It was Mina! "She shouldn't be the leader! I mean look at her." Came Amy's voice. "I agree! Lets kick her out of the group!" Said Lita's uncaring voice. 'Are these there true feelings?' thought Serena "Yes they are, but I already knew Darien was cheating on me, but the others!" ' Maybe its time for me to show them my true form. Yes I think I will. "Serena is probably going to be late again. Like always. She is such a" Rei was cut off mid sentence as the door opened. "It can't be." Came Lita's shaky voice. There standing in the doorway was Serena, but she looked different. Dangerous...
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Please tell me does it suck or do you like it? Who should I pair Serena up with? Should I kill the inners? Yes I'm going to kill Darien!!! Please tell me! This is my first fanfic!!! All reviews are welcome. If you have any questions ask them in the review. Thank you from Sun Princess!
PS Ten reviews for the next chapter!!! Or else!!!!
Disclaimer-I do not own either of the TV shows in this fanfiction. I do not claim the betrayal plot as my own. All I claim are the plot twists. If you see any similarities between my fic and yours please tell me and I will see what I can do. Please bare in mind that if I don't change it after you have asked it may be because I have it set up for a major plot twist
*Notes*
"......" - speaking '......' - thought *.....*- Author notes
*Ages* Serena- 16 Inners-16 Darien-20 Outers (except Hotaru and Setsuna)-20 Hotaru-14 Setsuna-100, 000,000,000,000,000... Trunks-18 Gohan-18 Goten-8 Adults- normal ages.
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Serena had just gotten out of school. ' Wow, everyone is going to be so surprised! I'm actually going to be early for the scout meeting.' * For once Serena didn't get detention! * ' Man the looks on there faces are going to be priceless!' ' Almost there just to more steps.' Serena walks over to Rei's door and is about to open the door. "Serena is such a dork!" Came Rei's voice. "I know. She actually thinks I love her!" ' What, it can't be! This is how Darien really feels about me!' Just then another voice brings Serena from her trance like state. "I know! I mean yesterday, she fell flat on her face! What do you think Amy, Lita?" It was Mina! "She shouldn't be the leader! I mean look at her." Came Amy's voice. "I agree! Lets kick her out of the group!" Said Lita's uncaring voice. 'Are these there true feelings?' thought Serena "Yes they are, but I already knew Darien was cheating on me, but the others!" ' Maybe its time for me to show them my true form. Yes I think I will. "Serena is probably going to be late again. Like always. She is such a" Rei was cut off mid sentence as the door opened. "It can't be." Came Lita's shaky voice. There standing in the doorway was Serena, but she looked different. Dangerous...
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Please tell me does it suck or do you like it? Who should I pair Serena up with? Should I kill the inners? Yes I'm going to kill Darien!!! Please tell me! This is my first fanfic!!! All reviews are welcome. If you have any questions ask them in the review. Thank you from Sun Princess!
PS Ten reviews for the next chapter!!! Or else!!!!