Kakkhan: Giendonese Saiyan Warrior
Disclaimer: I don't own Dragonball/Z/GT, but I do own Janden, the Laniins, the other races not including Human, the planet Giendon, a few techniques, the unfamiliar languages, and a handful of other things that are my creation alone.
Allati: Hi everyone! As you all know, I'm the muse for Kakkhan: Giendonese Saiyan Warrior. I convinced AAS that 'cause I'm the muse, I get to host an author's note every once in a while. So here I am! Applause from reviewers Blushes Thanx u guys. Okay, the news flash from SP:
Hey everyone! No doubt as Allati has told you, she has managed to twist my arm to allow her to host the author's note. Mutters about manipulative muses Anyway, this chapter is one of the few that Binki, my laptop, recovered and gave to me that I still need for Kakkhan. I'm glad for all of the chapters, but most of them are already incorporated somehow into the story. Thanks Binki!
Moving on! I had to rearrange and re-experiment with this chapter, but I'm very pleased with the overall effect of this chapter that I got in the end. It wasn't bad before, but it definitely was out of plot. That's entirely my fault, I decided to change the plot around after I apparently "lost" the files. Of course, I didn't, but the damage has already been done. But now the chapter is in plot, so I don't have to worry about this chapter now. Yay!
I'm also so sorry guys that I took so long to update this fic. I didn't realize that I hadn't updated chap. 17 yet, and so that's why. I thought I had! I'm sorry, I'm sorry!!!! Whimpers in authoress' seat Don't hurt me! Stops whimpering
Well, I think that's enough jabbering for this chapter already. It's on to the next one! Oh wait, gotta fix the chapter number. Not fifteen… Deletes chapter number Types in correct number Seventeen! There! Now, enjoy! Don't be afraid to give my muse a hard time if she doesn't help you out enough! Winks SP out.
Allati: Oh thanks a lot, SP! Glares at authoress in background, who merely smiles sweetly Hmpf! Anyway, on with the story!
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Chapter Seventeen: Cries of the Past
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Kakkhan returned to his own timeline in time to alleviate the worries of the Z-senshi just as they were beginning to form. The fighters and non-fighters greeted him enthusiastically, never mind that they knew almost nothing of him. After all, he was on their side, right? And a right powerful warrior too! The Kais were indeed smiling upon the Z-senshi.
MKakkhan and MTrunks told the group that they were leaving for their timeline the next day, so preparations were being made for the farewell party. Through the midst of it all, the women were busy doing their jobs and the men were feeling useless. It was this ennui that prompted the fighting Z-senshi to turn to Kakkhan and badger him with questions. Some of these questions were natural, but some wouldn't have been asked under different circumstances.
Yamcha asked the first question. "Kakkhan, what was the attack that you used to beat Cell? I recognized the Kamehameha Wave, but you used another attack with that. What was that?"
Kakkhan smirked slightly before answering, as if proud of his creation. "The attack I formed before combining it with your Kamehameha Wave was the Grinasheare Bomb. It was created to be an energy bomb to blow up enemies or any other obstacles. I knew that Cell would just recover from the Grinasheare, so I decided to combine it with the Kamehameha. I was not sure if it was going to work, but I am glad it did."
The others nodded in vigorous agreement. Krillin posed the next three questions. "So that was your first time using that attack in combination? Or was it your first time using the Kamehameha as well? How do you know the Kamehameha, anyway?"
Kakkhan chose to answer the third question first. "Kakka—Goku taught the Kamehameha to me, in return for the Instant Transmission technique. And yes, it was my first time using the attack in combination. I'm just glad it didn't backfire on me like the Laurenarena Ring." Winces accompanied the vigorous nods this time, and Kakkhan continued.
"It was not my first time using the Kamehameha Wave though. I used it against Goku many times in the Hyperbolic Time Chamber." Goku Grinned™ in verification of the statement, and it continued. Yamcha, however, made the mistake of touching upon Kakkhan's past without careful consideration.
"Hey, Kakkhan. It sounds like you led a pretty good life before us. Why'd you come here?
Silence greeted Yamcha's statement as well as a Glare of Demise™ that knocked Yamcha's knees together. Kakkhan, in an extremely cold voice, said, "I will not answer that question. I will ask you to not comment on my life and how good or bad it was. I will also not tolerate questions about why I came here or why I have not left yet. I will not answer them, nor will I ever forgive the person who asks them without consideration. Now, let's move on."
They did. Hours later, a grand party was thrown for the Future Heroes, and none but Mirai Kakkhan noticed as a shadow slipped across the wall and out of the house. Kakkhan was nowhere to be seen five minutes into the soiree, but after Yamcha's disgrace, it was small wonder why.
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Kakkhan walked throughout Gohan's life. He had no idea what would have gone on in his life had he remained Gohan. He was immortal, so he had forever to contemplate his life as Gohan.
Kakkhan saw Gohan kidnapped by Radditz. He saw Gohan's training with Piccolo in the wild for a year. He saw Vegeta and Nappa arrive. He remembered what he knew and compared the different lives. He saw Gohan and Krillin travel to Namek with Bulma. He saw Goku defeat Frieza. He saw the planet of Namek blow up, and SS Goku's struggle to get off of the dying planetoid. He oversaw the return of Gohan and Krillin to Earth and the fight there to keep Garlic Jr. from overtaking the Earth. He saw the year of emptiness without Goku, and then Goku's return. He saw the doom of Bojack and of Cooler as each fought the Z-senshi, and as each lost their lives.
Kakkhan witnessed the fall of Goku to the rare heart virus. He knew now the full extent of the world of Mirai Kakkhan and Mirai Trunks. Kakkhan did not step in to prevent the Androids' coming, for this was all part of his original life. The immortal dimension traveler also beheld the vicious Dark Androids and the destruction and woe they brought with them. This is where we step in ourselves, four years after Goku's death, four years of wanton Dark Android destruction.
Kakkhan stood between two miraculously intact buildings. He had kept tabs on the Androids through the way the kis of the innocent citizens kept winking out all around him and their laughs as each ki group died. Kakkhan didn't blink, didn't move, didn't falter as the ki blew away. You could almost say he didn't care. But Kakkhan did care. He just hid it behind his solid emotionless shield. (Hmmm sounds like Veggie-chan.)
The Dark Androids floated in front of two intact buildings juicily full of ki. But it just seemed to them like there was a person missing or something.
Dark 17 drifted around to the sides where the edifices faced each other. There. A boy with black spiked hair and an emotionless expression stood in the alley. Dark 17 smirked and drifted back to Dark 18.
He yelled to her, "Hey 18. I found something. It's this boy just standing there in the alley."
Dark 18 smiled sanguinely. "Well, well, well. It seems like we'll be wiping out one more person next to this lot." The Dark twins smirked at each other gleefully. They formed ki in their hands and flew to the opposite side of the building on Kakkhan's right. Kakkhan watched them go and prepared his ki shield for impact.
The deadly spheres came without warning, followed by the chortles of the Dark Gemini anticipating the death of so many. Dark 18's ki ripped through the first building and through the other building, narrowly missing Kakkhan's shield. More ki blinked out as Dark 17's ki orb followed. It was at more of an angle than his sister's, designed specifically to land on Kakkhan and kill him too. Bad, bad, baaaaaaaad choice.
Dark 17's ki ball fell down and supposedly destroyed the boy. But the Dark Androids didn't feel any ki wink out. Weird, that wasn't supposed to happen. They gravitated down to the top of the rubble and stared.
Instead of hitting Kakkhan, the ball had bounced off his shield twice and struck the construction on Kakkhan's left, obliterating the lone survivor in its ruins. But now Kakkhan was angry, even if his face didn't show it.
The Dark Androids watched the boy turn and face them. Too late they felt the effects of the deep dread of the unstoppable warrior staring straight at them. They buckled down under the dread, managing to keep standing, but even that was wobbly in nature.
Kakkhan stared at them some more with his Glare of Demise (No, not a Death Glare™, that's Vegeta's signature. A Glare of Demise is different.) before walking off. He jumped onto the top of another building, abandoned this time, and watched the Z-senshi approach with eleven-year-old Gohan in their midst. The immortal stood on the corner of his abandoned building, one foot on each one the upraised parts of the roof that rises up from the floor in order to keep people from falling off. In other words, Kakkhan stood on the upraised parts with the corner jutting out from between his feet.
The Dark Androids also sensed the arrival of their "playmates". Vowing to take care of the other person later, the Dark twins turned to their first priority with something akin to relief.
Kakkhan watched the Z-senshi battle the Dark Androids. He saw that they had almost no chance of winning, if they even did. He thought that the Z-senshi knew this too, but they battled on anyway. He admired their courage, however hopeless it may have been.
The Dark Androids slew Vegeta and moved on to Krillin. They murdered him too, causing Gohan to power up to Super Saiyan in his rage. Kakkhan could tell this was the first time that Gohan had gone up to SS from the way that it took a long time to fully achieve that power level and its features.
Gohan and the Dark Androids battled. While it was true that Dark 18 and Dark 17 had a bit more of a difficult time keeping up, they still had the advantage over him. Yamcha, Piccolo, Tien & Chiaotzu toned down their disadvantage by distracting the Dark Androids every chance they got. But by the time the Dark Androids decided to finish for the day, Gohan was badly injured and could barely walk, much less punch or kick.
Kakkhan grimaced. MKakkhan had had to go through seven years of this without returning to Giendon once. He could definitely relate to that now. Kakkhan shook his head. He felt really sorry for his future self. Speaking of his future self, Kakkhan wondered how MKakkhan and MTrunks were doing. Was their world rebuilt? It depended on the year that Kakkhan traveled to in their dimension. Ah but this wasn't the future. This was the past, for him anyway, and it was his duty to watch it through.
Gohan passed out and was dragged to Capsule. Bulma hooked him up to a heart monitor and did everything that she was supposed to do to make him comfortable and ready for the next time that the Dark Androids attacked. Krillin and Vegeta were buried appropriately. Bulma wept for her mate and one of her best friends all night.
That night Gohan was visited in his dreams by an esoteric person who looked exactly like him but was not he. This Gohan wore four earrings in his left ear cartilage that were gold (the one in his lobe was silver too), and three in his right ear cartilage that were silver. The stranger (A/n: Again Kakkhan is a stranger gaah) was wearing an armband of silver and gold, and when he talked, Gohan glimpsed a tongue barbell of silver. The enigmatic was holding a necklace that looked vaguely familiar, with the ends of its black leather ready to be tied together. A crystal pendant glittered at him, an energy radiating from the necklace that told of hiding and of concealment, much like the person who held the jewelry.
The Gohan look-alike said in a soothing voice, 'Hello Gohan. I know you just want to sleep now to heal up, but this may help you. I hold in my hand a ki damper necklace. It hides your ki when you put it around your neck.' The person said to his doppelganger. Seeing that Gohan was still regarding him with suspicion, Kakkhan simply held out the necklace for Gohan to take.
Gohan mistrustfully looked at the vaguely familiar necklace. It seemed to be harmless, but then again so did the Dark Androids, somewhat. And what about the person holding it? Was he here for something he wanted from Gohan? Gohan narrowed his eyes.
'Is that necklace for making me a slave to your orders?' Gohan's fingers were itching to grab the necklace for some bizarre reason. Gohan told them to behave and waited for his double to respond.
Kakkhan shook his head. 'No it is not. I'm sorry you feel that way about me. I don't mean any harm, but then again, living four years with Androids dogging your tail all the time, you're bound to change.' Kakkhan didn't miss the look of surprise on Gohan's face, but he chose to ignore it. 'I guess I'll respect your wishes and just leave you alone. Good night, Gohan.'
Kakkhan turned away and disappeared. Gohan didn't call him back. He was too shocked by the statement about four years of being tortured by the Dark Androids turning him into something else. But Gohan didn't want to be something else. He wanted to be home with his family, his whole family, and be happy. He didn't want to fight. But the Dark Androids had come and changed him from a happy-go-lucky fighter into a distrusting and suspicious warrior who had grown up way too much faster.
Gohan sat down hard. He yelped in sudden surprise and removed the offending thing from his seat. The instant his hand touched it, Gohan knew what he held.
The little warrior brought out the crystal necklace. It sat in his hand, innocent looking in the callused hand it resided in. But Gohan knew there was more to it than met the eye. It still radiated that aura of hiding, even with the occult person gone. But Gohan was no longer suspicious of that person. He knew that whoever that person had been, his intentions had been good. Good enough for him to leave it behind for Gohan to pick up and make his own deductions.
Gohan sighed. He cleared his head of the thoughts of his look-alike and studied the necklace again. Tracing the crystal, Gohan's curiosity finally overwhelmed him. He took the ends of the ornament and placed it around his neck. Shifting the end to the front, Gohan tied the strings together, snugly fitting the necklace around his throat. He rotated the piece of jewelry so that the front was in the front and relaxed.
Immediately his back straightened. His head snapped up and his eyes regained their hopeful twinkle. A smirk crossed his face as his ki disappeared under his necklace's power. Gohan felt…invincible. It was like he and this necklace had been destined to be together.
But then he started to feel bad about the person who had tried to give the necklace to him. So he said his next statement, hoping that the person would hear it and forgive him.
'I'm sorry.'
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Kakkhan smiled slightly as he felt Gohan's ki disappear. Just the fact that Gohan had even tried on the necklace to sate his curiosity made Kakkhan feel friendlier towards his past self. But the next thing he heard from Gohan totally surprised him.
'I'm sorry.'
Kakkhan was floored. He certainly hadn't expected this from Gohan. Cocking his head, Kakkhan smiled imperceptibly again, settled down on his perch on the abandoned building from earlier, and awaited the next day.
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Gohan woke up the next day all fired up and ready to go. For a while, he wondered why, but then he remembered his dream. He gasped and felt his throat. His fingers met leather and crystal pendant instead of scarred skin. Gohan's jaw dropped as he felt the leather sitting there. He also realized that his ki had disappeared too, just like his double had said it would. His ki was so efficiently out that he was surprised that the Z-senshi hadn't stormed into his door to find out if he was dead or not.
Remembering the Z-senshi, he also remembered that Krillin and Vegeta had been killed by the Dark Androids. Rage swelled up in him again and Gohan let it run through him. His hair changed inconsistently from black to yellow, black to yellow, black to yellow. But the destined necklace was made for this purpose, so his ki level still wasn't detected. Gohan doubted that any power level he gained, be it Super Saiyan or something else, his necklace was not designed for.
Gohan traced the crystal again, pondering its familiarity to him. He was confused as to why the necklace would seem familiar to him. He had never seen it before, but it felt like he had known it since forever. Now why was that? It didn't look like anything he had ever seen before. Gohan frowned, remembering something from his short youth. His mother had told him once of finding a necklace tucked into the blankets of Gohan's crib when Gohan was still a baby. She had described it very much like this one, but Gohan was not sure of the exact details. Still, it was probably safe to assume that they were the same.
Gohan was going to think more, but then he smelled breakfast cooking in the air. Gohan brightened up and dashed down the stairs like he hadn't done for four years. His necklace had given him a feeling of being invincible that Gohan had never felt before and that had buoyed up Gohan's enthusiasm for life.
Gohan jumped into his chair and waited impatiently for his mother to bring him his food. He tore into it like lightning and gobbled up all the food. He didn't ask for more, however, knowing that their food had to be rationed for future years. Who knew when the Dark Androids were going to be defeated? But Gohan's tummy did complain a bit to him about only being half-full. Gohan didn't realize it, but it had been three and a half years since his stomach had even remotely done that kind of thing.
Gohan smiled at his mother and at a haphazardly pregnant Bulma who had just come down from her bedroom. The two women stared at Gohan and the sight they had not seen for almost four years. Chichi frowned and started to say something, but Gohan cut her off by starting to stretch and otherwise prepare for another day with the Dark Androids.
Gohan finished his stretches and walked outside. He was certain that the Dark Androids were going to strike today. He just needed to know where.
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Kakkhan woke up slowly. He was slightly confused on the subject of where he was, but he didn't forget for long. Kakkhan stood up languidly and yawned. He stretched and bent his knees, waking his body up to join his mind.
At last he turned around to see the hulking figure behind him. Kakkhan coolly regarded the Dark Android standing in that place. He heard a whirring sound as the Dark Android scanned him for his information. Kakkhan smirked inwardly as he heard the mechanical monotone voice say, "I do not have any information on this person. I will just kill him then."
Kakkhan shook his head at the Dark Android's self-confident comment. The Dark Android started forward, but it was stopped by Kakkhan's question, "Before you kill me, what is your Android number?"
The Dark Android muttered something Kakkhan didn't want to repeat, then said, "I am Android 19. Prepare for your doom."
Kakkhan cocked his head. "Well, Dark Android 19, you prepare for your doom. Goodbye." A single blast went right through the weakling 19's body and disposed of that one. Kakkhan crushed 19's head on instinct and went back to his chosen lookout post.
He felt the kis of many people go out in Blue Star City, so he flashed over there to observe the action. Blue Star City wasn't so far away from West City and Capsule Corps as Ina City had been, so Gohan and the remaining Z-senshi definitely got there quicker. Yamcha came quicker to his ruin that day as the Dark Android twins got tired of his Wolf Fang Fist and finished him off. Gohan reached a new sub-level of Super Saiyan that day. Now he was in the middle of SS1 power.
Kakkhan saw it all. He also destroyed another Dark Android by the name of 20. That was the good thing he did that day. The bad thing was that Dark 20 was much faster than Dark 19, so Dr. Gero's self-androidalization (My own word! Yippee!) managed to get in one ki blast before being demolished. That ki ball bounced off Kakkhan's ki shield and went straight into the air. It would land on Capsule Corps.
Gohan was doing better with the Dark Android twins this time around, but when he felt the kis of his mother and Bulma and her baby she was pregnant with just fizzle out, he was so taken with horror that he froze. Dark 18 took advantage of Gohan's hesitation and knocked his brains everywhere. Dark 17 punched the demi-Saiyan wide into the air and into an already ruined building. That building can now be more accurately described as ravished rocks.
Gohan climbed out of the rocks with fire in his eyes and grief-stricken rage singing in his blood of the Saiyans. He didn't have enough rage to go to the next sub-level of SS1, but his power was certainly enough that he was just below the level of Dark 18, even if his necklace did not show it.
Tien and Chiaotzu followed Piccolo smartly out of the way of the vengeance-wreaking angel that was Gohan. Dark 17 followed their gaze and spotted the bruised and bloody Gohan marching up to them. His razor-like gaze was almost scary, but not as dread-awakening as the other person they had met. Come to think of it, Gohan looked exactly like that boy. But he didn't have the stature that his identical had, nor did he have that terrifying Demise Glare that the unknown person had given them.
Dark 17 and Dark 18 pretended to be scared of Gohan, fueling his fire even more. Gohan really was mad now. He swept into their faces a flurry of punches and kicks that were almost too difficult for the Dark Gemini to block. But block they did, and finally the Dark twins beat him in a combo attack that no Saiyan, or any fighter, for that matter, should have to block. Gohan was sent flying into the ground. The Dark Androids were pretty beaten up themselves, but they had the temerity to laugh at the beaten Gohan panting in the crater. Then they looked up at Piccolo, Tien, and Chiaotzu, and grinned evilly.
Gohan closed his eyes as he felt the kis of his mentor and his father's friends flicker out. Son Gohan of Son Goku and Son Chichi of Chikyuu-sei was now the only survivor of the original Z-senshi on planet Earth.
The Dark Android twins flew back to their headquarters. They had much to discuss, especially yesterday's events. Perhaps it was time to awaken another one of their old comrades again. Perhaps Dark Android 16 could take out the person who had come only yesterday.
Gohan felt the Dark twins' shadows fly over him and knew they were leaving. After a while, Gohan determined he could get up without getting beaten half to death. Gohan crawled painfully out of his crater and stood up shakily. He looked up directly into Piccolo's severed head. Gohan grimaced and looked away into Tien's three-eyed stoic gaze. Gohan stared in a different direction only to be tortured by Yamcha's bleeding face. Gohan eyed the last direction and got what he expected, Chiaotzu's silent mouth open in a pleading position.
Gohan hung his head. A single tear dropped onto the ground, splattering the dusty broken cement with new liquid. Another tear, from the opposite side of his face, followed and splashed onto an untouched place. Two streams of tears strayed down his face as he looked toward the sky. Gohan, suddenly overtaken with rage, yelled, "WHY? WHY DOES THIS ALWAYS HAVE TO HAPPEN TO ME?!?! HUH?! TELL ME! TELL ME! TELL ME!!!!!!!!!!!"
Gohan dropped to the ground. "Tell me…Tell me why I have to go through this all the time. Tell me…" whispered he. His shoulders palpitated as his body was wracked with sobs. This continued for some time, Gohan finally crying out of tears twenty-seven minutes later.
Gohan got up and walked out of Blue Star City. He leaned onto a wrecked building in West City, knowing what he was going to see when he got to Capsule. He rested there for a long while. Finally Gohan pushed himself off of the vestiges and stumbled around it. He didn't think about anything, just let his feet find the path for him.
All too soon, Gohan stood in front of the chaotic remnants of what had once been a gloriously huge domed building labeled Capsule Corps. Gohan still wasn't thinking, but as he looked around the rubbish, he spotted a hand and part of an arm poking out of it. Gohan sighed and trekked over. Kneeling, he dug around the rocks, not wanting to touch the hand or arm. But the rocks kept filling in his hole, blocking whatever sight Gohan might have had of the person's clothes below.
Patiently, Gohan kept tunneling. Frustration dotted his features as the little rocks evaded his firm control and kept jumping back on in. Finally, Gohan simply grabbed the cold flesh and yanked out the human within. He turned the corpse over and stared dully at the surprised features of Son Chichi.
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Allati: Ooh, what's Gohan going to do now? Find out next time on Kakkhan: Giendonese Saiyan Warrior! Even I know what's going to happen, for a change! Yeah! Reviewers groan at evil cliffie Oh, cheer up, you'll find out next chappie! Grins
Oh, this just came in. It's another news flash from SP. I'll let her on. Opens window
Hey guys, it's me again. I almost forgot to tell you this, but Kakkhan: Giendonese Saiyan Warrior is the first fic in a trilogy. I told DBZ Chick1 this, but I don't know if everyone knows. I'm not going to tell you the names of the fics, that would give the plot of Giendonese Saiyan Warrior away, but you'll know them as part of the Kakkhan trilogy when you see them. Don't worry about that. Heheh, I'm not that creative. But anyway, I don't have anything else to say, so I'll leave it to Allati to handle things around here again. Good luck with her. Snickers SP out, and Binki too.
Allati: HEY! Thanks a lot for the vote of confidence, authoress! Jeez! Well! The trilogy idea certainly sounds interesting. Long live the Legendary Lord, fanfiction literally! Hehe! I know that was bad, but I couldn't help it. Chuckles
Onto the sneak preview and reviewer responses!
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SNEAK PREVIEW OF: Gohan's Grief
Gohan said aloud, "Was it you who did this?"
Kakkhan sighed. He had been expecting this. He walked up beside Gohan and looked at the face of Chichi himself. "No. But it was my fault."
Gohan grunted. Kakkhan tensed himself in preparation for Gohan to do something the semi-Saiyan would probably regret later. Gohan bowed his head and cried inside. He had run out of tears crying for Yamcha and the others, so he couldn't cry on the outside for his mother. How ironic. He cried out all his tears for people he didn't even know all that well, except for Piccolo, and now when it came for the big occasion, Gohan was all out.
::REVIEWER RESPONSES:
ShadowObscurity: OBSCURITY!! HI!!! You reviewed!!! YES!! Jumps around What do you mean, I don't have to review for yours? OF COURSE I DO!!! I LOVE THAT FIC!! Btw, UPDATE! Glowers I updated! My email's not disclosed because it's blocked, so what's the point of disclosing it when I'm not able to get any emails?? Raises eyebrow
Nice having you back!! YEE!!!
wizardmon92: Gohan wouldn't. Kakkhan would, and still does. That's what it is. AHH! So many people are confused by this issue!!! What is it that you don't understand about the past changing for Gohan but NOT Kakkhan that you don't understand!!!!? Throws hands up in exasperation
Nooka: You're confused. Still. OK. I think I'll leave you like that. LOL! :D
DBZ Chick1: No, I did not get your email. It's past April, so I'm going to be around sometime soon and review your stories. I've already taken a sneak peek, but I haven't reviewed yet. Sorry! I updated!
SSJ5 Tigger: SSJ5, just shut up and make ALL of our lives easier, ok?
[NO WAY!!!!!!!!]
Glowers at SSJ5, pulls out chibification ray Don't make me use this, SSJ5.
[O.O]
Thank you. Thanks Tigger for your compliments! I updated! And yes, you do repeat yourself. That's what makes you, you! LOL! Enjoy!
Trunks' Brat Baby: HI! LOL! That was the point, for you not to understand it until the last paragraph. LOL! Nice to know I did a good job! =P -- Nice face! Can I use it? =P LOL! I updated!
ShadowObscurity (16): LOL another review to respond to! Yes, Kakkhan was the shadow. Don't worry about that. Yes, you do think too much and end up confusing yourself. It happens to me too. XP LOL!
Simbarulz: Poor, poor Amber-chan. LOL! Yes, the "angel" was there for you on Beebee. Hahaha! Sorry Amber! YEAH! What's with the a's? I mean, my pen name used to be an A-name! What's with all the a's around here ppl?!?! I updated, though not soon! TWO MONTHS!! AHHHHHHHH!
SS2 Megami-sama: Who's S-chan? Tilts head Poor Legolas. Being named "Leggy." Winces Thanks for the loan of Kyoku. He's so cute! Hugs Kyoku
IT IS OFFICIAL PEOPLE! I AM A MEMBER OF THE (what's it? Oh yeah!) 'Falcon's Club for Gohan worshipers and Mary-Sue Murderers!' JOIN ANYTIME YOU WISH! YOU MUST TAKE A BADGE, HOWEVER!!!! MUST TAKE BADGE! MUST STATE IN BIO! MUST STATE IN BIO! (Which applies to me, too LOL) MUST LET PEOPLE KNOW OF THIS CLUB!!! Pants heavily Falcon pats SP on back Thanks, Falcon.
I UPDATED!
Hiaburi: Another update! Two months, no less. Hee... Sweatdrops Sorry! Didja like Vigilante Angel too?
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Thanks to ShadowObscurity (8, 15, & 16), wizardmon92, PROVIEW, Nooka, DBZ Chick1, BlackFireDragonK, SSJ5 Tigger (15 & 16), Trunks' Brat Baby (15 & 16), simbarulz, SS2 Megami-sama and Hiaburi for their reviews!
SP: EXTRA! This just came in! Binki's fixed! So now the floppy disk drive will work again! YAY! This means I don't have to retype! YAY! SP out! GO BINKI!
Allati: All right! Go Binki is right! Well, it does look like there's anything else, either from the muse or the authoress, so…
Nia furm!
Allati, (and, more distantly, TheShadowPanther) from AASN
AASN; Writing is what we do for you at AASN. Enjoy.
SP: Don't forget to review! And ignore the spelling mistakes and the confusion in the author's note where the authoress does something and it's not enclosed in twinkle-stars. The Quick-Edit thingy totally obliterates those, so we may as well get used to it. Rolls eyes REVIEW!