Author= hello and welcome back to my story. I haven't done anything in a
while because I've been in Kansas(and if you didn't get what that KS thing
was last ch. KS is the abbreviation for Kansas{if you really didn't get you
need to take 1st grade again}) I would like to thank you for your reviews
people. I do take mild criticism and small flames but please no big ones
because its already hot in Arizona. I'll say it again like I said last ch.
No more people I don't want all these people running around my story( all
the people run around the story)HELP HELP I'm drowning in a sea of people
HELP.Ok I can swim now.
LVIAH= aren't you ever going to get on with the story?
Author=maybe later, anyway I will put in Nick Dickerson because if I didn't
that would be mean(EVIL EVIL evil grin spreads across face) you know I
think I will just leave him out MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA oops did I say that
aloud I mean you will be in the story ( no one will really know if he will
be in the story or not except me)
The guy that had the mindreader thingie in the first chapter= I know I know
[ I take mind reader thingie and destroy it]
Author= now you don't, anyway...
LVIAH=GET ON WITH THE STORY
Author=fine but I got to name you because CB told me to. How about little
annoying voice inside my head
LVIAH=no how 'bout BUSGKjkfbkjdhfjkalKGKJBdsbvh GHHVBGhjvbdshjvbshdgv
Author=[sweatdrop]O.O I can't remember that how 'bout Bus
LVIAH= bus?
Author= its at the beginning of your name
Bus=ok then BUT GET ON WITH THE STORY
people in the story so basically I own me and busBig narrating voice= as we last left off everybody was puking from jack
eating fish that has been in his backpack for a yearJack= yummy these fish are still good from when I caught them.
All=[puke] ewwww. That is nasty
KS=hey I found some black grass lets eat
All=yay
CB=will everyone please start talking loud
KS=no
CB=what?
KS=I said no
CB=I still can't hear you
{goes on for a long time, just going back and forth and back and forth and
back and forth and back and forth and back and forth and back and forth and
back and forth and back and forth and back and forth and back and forth
(I'm just going to stop now)}
KS= hey why are we arguing?(her ten minute long memory kicked in)
CB=what I can't hear you?
All=SHE DIDN'T SAY ANYTHING SO BE QUIET.
[something is happening to jack]
Doggie=bark(oh no its happening again Jack's going to the imagination side
everybody run!!)
All=ahhhhhhhh[start running away and the find somebody along the way]
Person=hello
[all stop]
CB=hello
CN=hello
FF=hi
KS=hi there
H=hillo
A=I guess I did put him in the story. So now all you people know that I did
put him in the story
J=[returns after being hit by a rock from doggie](just to tell ya'll you
didn't want to see him in is ima. Side it was really weird like he saw a
bunch of little demons holding a very VERY VERY big rock, the demons was
actually doggie trying to get him out of the I side)hello, hey do you know
the way out?
Person= hi
CN= whats your name?
Person=Nick
CN=I'm Chrae Neko
CB=I'm Cherry BlossomFastforward (I'm really lazy if you didn't know)J=I'm jack but do you know the way out?
N=yaaaano I don't
FF= Look theres a light up ahead
[all go]
KS= [shuts off flash light and goes]BOO
All=ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
hhhhhhhhhhhh
KS=[laughing hysterically]
J= why did you do that Kansas?
KS=MY name is Kijo-San not Kansas
J= but it says so in the initials the author writes for your name
[KS takes J to last ch and shows him the words in the parenthesis about her
name then she slaps him really hard he flies and hits H who hits CB who
hits CN who hits FF who hits Doggie who hits N who hits KS and a big fight
starts]
A=[sitting there with popcorn and pop] GO WHOEVER I'm ending this story so
please review and tell me how to make this story more funnier i'm running out of ideas and i am not i repeat I AM NOT putting anymore people in its already crowded.
bus=SHUTUP ALREADY I'M TRYING TO WATCH THE FIGHT
A= fine then, please put in your reviews who should win he fight good bye