I'm sorry!!!!!! I've been really busy so even tho this has been ready awhile I've had no time to type!
(Raven) It's not your fault school has kept you busy.
Should've made time!
(Me and Raven)SHUT UP!!!!!!!!!
Hmph
Disclaimer: own plot, own shadow, own raven, no own yu yu hakusho. Clear?
"speech"
'thoughts'
shadow to anyone
raven to shadow
They are unaware of our presence, sister. Yes but they also have no reason to look. They think themselves sake here. Now? Now. With her brother on her shoulder, she strode out of the trees they'd been hiding in. The Tantei only then picked up their presence.
"There's someone coming" noted Kurama calmly. "Yes, and I don't think luck's on our side this time. They're both powerful." Genkai agreed. "There's more than one?" Yusuke asked grimly. "Yes, dimwit, 2 in fact." Genkai confirmed. "Hey! Watch it Grandma!" Yusuke retorted. When are you going to tell them we're here? "About now." Raven answered, raising her voice. "You can relax. We're not here to hurt you. We're here to guide you to the heart of the conflict." Abruptly, shadow left his sister's shoulder for the rafters. "Who are you?" asked Yusuke. "I am Raven. My twin, Shadow, is in the rafters." Raven answered the dark haired teen. "We have more visitors." Kurama said smoothly. I'll go see who it is." Not alone you're not! It isn't safe to confront strangers alone now. Shadow dropped to Kurama's shoulder as he stepped outside. As the Tantei and company listened, they heard the staccato snaps of a whip and wet, meaty thuds. The whip was Kurama, were those thuds Shadow?
The sounds stopped as they went outside. The scene was totaled and Kurama was nowhere in sight. Shadow shifted painfully form where he'd been wrapped around a tree rather forcefully, it seemed, due to damage to said tree. They…they got Kurama. Don't know why they didn't take me as well. He gasped over his link to his sister as she gently unwound him from the tree. "You tried," she whispered soothingly "you tried."
Yay!!!! Chapter 2 is here!!!!! Thank you Sakurasango for reviewing! You're the only one so far! ::gently pulls Kurama from grasp:: And go easy on Kurama! He's in enough trouble! ;)
Finally we make an appearance! It's about time!
Oh, quit your bellyaching. It's not like I forgot you!
Chapter 3 when I find more typing time! ::wanders off::
Hmmm……now where did I put it?
(Raven) ::sighs:: While she goes looking for that, review please!