Ok, I'm back with a new story, that........(drum roll please)..........has a plot. I
was rethinking my writing style and, I decided to write this as a test to
see if I improved it, also, I have more writer's block. It's a curse, what
can I say?
Ok, here's the summary for this story:
Basically...........Some aliens from space are going to try to take over the world. They just so happen to hit a little snag in their plans. An experimental weapon of theirs has escaped and landed near Tokyo-3. Big surprise right? Any ways, said experiment just so happens to cross paths with NERV and the Eva Pilots. The Funny thing is, so do the Aliens. Find out what happens in this little semi-AU story of mine. Staring............Rei. Well.............it stars her whenever I found I could make her the key role without making the story seem dull.
So, for those of you who, weren't scared off by such a crappy summary.......... Here's the story.
Disclaimer: I don't own NGE, if I did, it would be AIRing AROUND THE GLOB, and there would be NEW EPOSODES for it too. HINT, HINT for any Gainax staff that could be out there.
Chapter One:
Escape.
"Where is it?" asked an alien soldier, wearing an important looking uniform.
"I don't know sir. It's almost like it knows where the troops are moving. And even when it is seen, it avoids everything we throw at it, or blocks it with some kind of energy barrier. Sir, it would be helpful if you told us more about what it is, apart from the fact that it's an escaped experiment," replied another soldier.
"No, I can't do that, captain. I will only tell you what you need to know to retrieve it, after your little bungle a while ago."
"But sir, if you told us what it is designed to do, maybe we can stop it."
"Very well. But, if you fail me again, you better hope the experiment kills you. Because if it doesn't, I'll kill you myself. Understood!"
"Yes sir."
"Now........the experiment is 1/3 of our new weapon. This particular part, is designed to be the ultimate defensive unit, able to fight off any kind of attack. It was given the ability to predict any tactic the enemy might use against it. And it's shield that it can create is the result of energy testing to improve upon it's original design. It is the most valuable of our 3 prototypes that were used to create our weapon. Now, stop wasting my time and go get it!"
"Yes sir!"
The soldiers ran off leaving their commander alone.
Else where, on the ship, a dark figure ran through a variety of halls. It never once changed it's pace, not even when a group of soldiers opened fire on it with laser cannons. It simply deflected the beams back to the source, then jumped over the dead soldiers.
Soon, the figure stood next to a large computer bank, and a door, that was locked. The figure stared at the computer keyboard for a moment then, it keyed in 39 keys in rapid succession, then hit the enter key.
The door opened, revealing a small escape pod, which the figure entered, and used to blast off into space.
"Well captain?" asked the alien commander impatiently.
"............It.........um..........got away sir......it was headed towards......at least......we think it was head towards......the only planet with a breathable atmosphere near by.....which is.......a planet called..." said the soldier while sweating bullets.
Bang.
The soldier fell to the ground. With blood oozing out of a hole in his head.
Bang. Bang. Bang.
Still more blood issued from several more holes in the dead soldier's chest.
"Let that, be a lesson to the rest of you. You fail me, you die. Because of this," the commander kicked the dead soldier, "we have to risk making contact with a planet we where planning on destroying in a few weeks time. You four, I want you to clean up this mess," he kicked the corpse again, "and the rest of you, suit up, because you WILL retrieve our experiment BEFORE we arrive," he then quickly pointed to a random figure, "You,"
"........Me.........sir...." squeaked the soldier in question.
"You are in command of the recovery operation. Do not fail me."
"No sir, I will not fail you."
"Now get moving captain!"
The group hurried off, and the commander was again, left standing alone.
On the planet known to all of us as Earth, a small capsule crash- landed into the side of a mountain, in between Tokyo-2 and Tokyo-3.
A figure emerged from the flames and following an odd urge, began to watch he mountainside from the safety of a treetop.
A/N:
Ok, so, these won't be my longest chapters but, I'll try to update often, that is until I can break my writers block. Because, as you might have guessed from my opening comments, this story is nothing more, nothing less than a time waster, which I am using to find a writing style you picky reviews like.
And on the topic of reviews..............you might want to look in my profile and read and review some of my other stories. As much as I would like you to review my NEG/ZOE saga, I might want to look at my plot-less story, I've been told it is good. But, hey, what do I know? I'm just a kid who passes off stuff as stories online.
Ok, here's the summary for this story:
Basically...........Some aliens from space are going to try to take over the world. They just so happen to hit a little snag in their plans. An experimental weapon of theirs has escaped and landed near Tokyo-3. Big surprise right? Any ways, said experiment just so happens to cross paths with NERV and the Eva Pilots. The Funny thing is, so do the Aliens. Find out what happens in this little semi-AU story of mine. Staring............Rei. Well.............it stars her whenever I found I could make her the key role without making the story seem dull.
So, for those of you who, weren't scared off by such a crappy summary.......... Here's the story.
Disclaimer: I don't own NGE, if I did, it would be AIRing AROUND THE GLOB, and there would be NEW EPOSODES for it too. HINT, HINT for any Gainax staff that could be out there.
Chapter One:
Escape.
"Where is it?" asked an alien soldier, wearing an important looking uniform.
"I don't know sir. It's almost like it knows where the troops are moving. And even when it is seen, it avoids everything we throw at it, or blocks it with some kind of energy barrier. Sir, it would be helpful if you told us more about what it is, apart from the fact that it's an escaped experiment," replied another soldier.
"No, I can't do that, captain. I will only tell you what you need to know to retrieve it, after your little bungle a while ago."
"But sir, if you told us what it is designed to do, maybe we can stop it."
"Very well. But, if you fail me again, you better hope the experiment kills you. Because if it doesn't, I'll kill you myself. Understood!"
"Yes sir."
"Now........the experiment is 1/3 of our new weapon. This particular part, is designed to be the ultimate defensive unit, able to fight off any kind of attack. It was given the ability to predict any tactic the enemy might use against it. And it's shield that it can create is the result of energy testing to improve upon it's original design. It is the most valuable of our 3 prototypes that were used to create our weapon. Now, stop wasting my time and go get it!"
"Yes sir!"
The soldiers ran off leaving their commander alone.
Else where, on the ship, a dark figure ran through a variety of halls. It never once changed it's pace, not even when a group of soldiers opened fire on it with laser cannons. It simply deflected the beams back to the source, then jumped over the dead soldiers.
Soon, the figure stood next to a large computer bank, and a door, that was locked. The figure stared at the computer keyboard for a moment then, it keyed in 39 keys in rapid succession, then hit the enter key.
The door opened, revealing a small escape pod, which the figure entered, and used to blast off into space.
"Well captain?" asked the alien commander impatiently.
"............It.........um..........got away sir......it was headed towards......at least......we think it was head towards......the only planet with a breathable atmosphere near by.....which is.......a planet called..." said the soldier while sweating bullets.
Bang.
The soldier fell to the ground. With blood oozing out of a hole in his head.
Bang. Bang. Bang.
Still more blood issued from several more holes in the dead soldier's chest.
"Let that, be a lesson to the rest of you. You fail me, you die. Because of this," the commander kicked the dead soldier, "we have to risk making contact with a planet we where planning on destroying in a few weeks time. You four, I want you to clean up this mess," he kicked the corpse again, "and the rest of you, suit up, because you WILL retrieve our experiment BEFORE we arrive," he then quickly pointed to a random figure, "You,"
"........Me.........sir...." squeaked the soldier in question.
"You are in command of the recovery operation. Do not fail me."
"No sir, I will not fail you."
"Now get moving captain!"
The group hurried off, and the commander was again, left standing alone.
On the planet known to all of us as Earth, a small capsule crash- landed into the side of a mountain, in between Tokyo-2 and Tokyo-3.
A figure emerged from the flames and following an odd urge, began to watch he mountainside from the safety of a treetop.
A/N:
Ok, so, these won't be my longest chapters but, I'll try to update often, that is until I can break my writers block. Because, as you might have guessed from my opening comments, this story is nothing more, nothing less than a time waster, which I am using to find a writing style you picky reviews like.
And on the topic of reviews..............you might want to look in my profile and read and review some of my other stories. As much as I would like you to review my NEG/ZOE saga, I might want to look at my plot-less story, I've been told it is good. But, hey, what do I know? I'm just a kid who passes off stuff as stories online.