Hello! Here's the second chapter where you get to find out who was
compromised! (Well, sort of... You'll see what I mean. ^_^ [*grins evilly*])
Thank you to all who reviewed Ch 1! Miyo86: Thanks! Its ok, I like this story better too, honestly. ^_^ K-rock: Thank you!
Darkness and the smell of human waste were evident in the cell. A man sat amidst this,
and other prisoners, silently praying. Though everyone in the cell knew what he was in
there for, so he didn't need to be silent really. He was intolerant, disloyal to Carpathia
and the GC, and even worse than all the rest, he was a Judah-ite. He wore the name
proudly still, as he always had. Tomorrow he would be transported to Amman, Jordan
for imprisonment. He would probably have been executed right there in New Babylon
had he not been part of the Trib Force. He was sure they wanted information, but they
would get none from him. @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@
Rayford Steele had gathered everyone from the Chicago Trib Force together in the
main lobby of the Strong Building.
"I don't know exactly what's going on in New Babylon guys. All I know for sure is one of our own has been found out, but I'm not sure who it is yet."
"Seriously?" Buck asked, not quite believing what he was hearing.
"Yes." Rayford answered "And we're running out of time."
"Well, are we going to provide some kind of rescue mission?" Chloe asked.
"That's exactly the problem their facing in New Babylon." Rayford said. "No one wants to betray any more of us, and I feel the same way. And yet... I don't want to give up completely." @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@
*****'s eyes snapped open, as noises filled the cell. A great commotion, what could be
going on? ***** thought. Three GC guards came in and grabbed ***** by the
shoulders. Roughly, they hauled him up. They cuffed him and pushed him towards the
door, amidst the cheering of the other prisoners.
"Yeah, where's your God now?"
"Finally you rebels are getting what you deserve!"
"Long live Carpathia!"
"Shut up!" one of the guards yelled. That instantly quieted the crowd, and those it
didn't... well, let's just say they didn't yell anymore when the guards were through with
them. After all were quiet and calm again, in some way or another, the guards lead their
prisoner out the door.
"How ironic..." ***** thought, "that the place of my birth will be the place of my death as well."
Yea! Second chapter done, and this one was hard for me, so I'm glad its done. And yes, I didn't give out the name of the one who was compromised for a reason. I wanted to make you guys guess, though I only know of one member who was from...well, you know(see above fanfic) {If this isn't his hometown please correct me} Please review!!^_^
Poll! :
Do you want (insert name here) to be:
A) rescued? or... B) martyred? -I'm not sure how I want this to go yet, so feedback would be appreciated!
Thank you to all who reviewed Ch 1! Miyo86: Thanks! Its ok, I like this story better too, honestly. ^_^ K-rock: Thank you!
Darkness and the smell of human waste were evident in the cell. A man sat amidst this,
and other prisoners, silently praying. Though everyone in the cell knew what he was in
there for, so he didn't need to be silent really. He was intolerant, disloyal to Carpathia
and the GC, and even worse than all the rest, he was a Judah-ite. He wore the name
proudly still, as he always had. Tomorrow he would be transported to Amman, Jordan
for imprisonment. He would probably have been executed right there in New Babylon
had he not been part of the Trib Force. He was sure they wanted information, but they
would get none from him. @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@
Rayford Steele had gathered everyone from the Chicago Trib Force together in the
main lobby of the Strong Building.
"I don't know exactly what's going on in New Babylon guys. All I know for sure is one of our own has been found out, but I'm not sure who it is yet."
"Seriously?" Buck asked, not quite believing what he was hearing.
"Yes." Rayford answered "And we're running out of time."
"Well, are we going to provide some kind of rescue mission?" Chloe asked.
"That's exactly the problem their facing in New Babylon." Rayford said. "No one wants to betray any more of us, and I feel the same way. And yet... I don't want to give up completely." @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@
*****'s eyes snapped open, as noises filled the cell. A great commotion, what could be
going on? ***** thought. Three GC guards came in and grabbed ***** by the
shoulders. Roughly, they hauled him up. They cuffed him and pushed him towards the
door, amidst the cheering of the other prisoners.
"Yeah, where's your God now?"
"Finally you rebels are getting what you deserve!"
"Long live Carpathia!"
"Shut up!" one of the guards yelled. That instantly quieted the crowd, and those it
didn't... well, let's just say they didn't yell anymore when the guards were through with
them. After all were quiet and calm again, in some way or another, the guards lead their
prisoner out the door.
"How ironic..." ***** thought, "that the place of my birth will be the place of my death as well."
Yea! Second chapter done, and this one was hard for me, so I'm glad its done. And yes, I didn't give out the name of the one who was compromised for a reason. I wanted to make you guys guess, though I only know of one member who was from...well, you know(see above fanfic) {If this isn't his hometown please correct me} Please review!!^_^
Poll! :
Do you want (insert name here) to be:
A) rescued? or... B) martyred? -I'm not sure how I want this to go yet, so feedback would be appreciated!