Hi there! I know that my writing so far hasn't been perfect, but I believe you should know that I am working on it.
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On a windy day he came home from a trip to Las Vegas. He brought back a necklace for his oldest daughter, a ring for his middle child and a bracelet for his youngest. Each girl loved the gift with all sincerity. The necklace was of a silver sword with three skulls aligned in a triangular position upon it. The ring was made of gold and had etched writing on it that had faded with time. The bracelet was made of some type of metal none of the well knowledge family could recognize, but all the same it was beautiful. The girls wore them as much as they physically could. The oldest, Rouki, would ware it even when she slept. The trinket became very close to her heart. To the point ware she would not ever take it off no matter what. The same happened to the other girls, Akita and Lorenta, they would never take their gifts off.
Soon the girls became very snappy and quite possessive toward everyone, even me. Rouki became very quiet and lost track of everything which was not like her. She kept bringing knifes and all kinds of things that could kill to school. Numerous times she attempted slitting her wrists. Her life had turned around 180. She started to honestly scared me. Then after all her friends had ran away she stopped going to school. I found out that she had started smoking and doing drugs. She also had acquired a criminal record, along with three kids. I just did not know what was happening to her. The best friend I had known had completely changed.
The same thing had happened to her sisters. All their rooms were now total messes, and their lives were very screwed up to the point of no return. Rouki's parents called the Police. They took Rouki away to a mental institute. The institute did tests on her and they couldn't come up with a reason. But when they were undressing her to put her in the scrubs of the institute, they noticed the necklace.
"Hey, look at this." said Krissy the personal nurse for Rouki when she saw the necklace. "This necklace, is kinda disturbing, lets get this off of you." The second Rouki realized they were going to take her necklace off, she went into a powerful rage no one could control. finally they just shoved her in to a room with soft, white, squishy walls, She began to calm down once she was sure she was alone.
After a while, she cautiously fell asleep. When the staff noticed this, they stuck her with a needle full of sedative. She was now practically unconscious and if she did know what was going on, she had no muscle control due to the medicine. The nurse took the necklace off and saw that there was a bloody cut, oozing and bursting, rotting flesh coating the outer edge. The nurse flinched violently, and jerked backward. Her help looked at the mess around her neck in the place where necklace lie. He saw that where the pendant had been there was a plant like thing that seemed to be sucking at her chest in the area of ware her heart is supposed to be.
He noticed her breathing beginning to slow, she was dyeing.
The man rushed her to the hospital wing. The doctor had seen nothing like this it scared him and made him flinch too.
Mean while in Rouki's mind...
"NO! NO! NO! Don't hurt me please, I've done nothing wrong and I have not failed you! NO! NO! NO!" She trailed off. At the feet of a tall man with an evil grin is ware she laid sprawled out on the floor bloody and obviously beaten to the point where she should be dead. Her left arm was laying on the floor a few feet from her. It was in prices and through all the blood it was hard to tell what it actually was.
Suddenly the man said a few words and she became engulfed in flame. Her scream rang through the infinity of nothingness. It was a blood curdling scream that could crack windows. The power behind it was beyond words. She did not die though. Once he put out the flames. She was now not only bloody but had skin burning. The air smelled of rotting and burning flesh. The man took one smell of the stench and said, "I shall give you one more chance. But remember, the very second that you put the necklace on your soul was mine. There is no turning back now! I am what keeps you alive. That necklace is your only hope of survival. Be gone."
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Well what cha think so far. Hey I got tons more Idea's but I wanna see what you all think. Ok thanks for reading! Please reveiw!
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On a windy day he came home from a trip to Las Vegas. He brought back a necklace for his oldest daughter, a ring for his middle child and a bracelet for his youngest. Each girl loved the gift with all sincerity. The necklace was of a silver sword with three skulls aligned in a triangular position upon it. The ring was made of gold and had etched writing on it that had faded with time. The bracelet was made of some type of metal none of the well knowledge family could recognize, but all the same it was beautiful. The girls wore them as much as they physically could. The oldest, Rouki, would ware it even when she slept. The trinket became very close to her heart. To the point ware she would not ever take it off no matter what. The same happened to the other girls, Akita and Lorenta, they would never take their gifts off.
Soon the girls became very snappy and quite possessive toward everyone, even me. Rouki became very quiet and lost track of everything which was not like her. She kept bringing knifes and all kinds of things that could kill to school. Numerous times she attempted slitting her wrists. Her life had turned around 180. She started to honestly scared me. Then after all her friends had ran away she stopped going to school. I found out that she had started smoking and doing drugs. She also had acquired a criminal record, along with three kids. I just did not know what was happening to her. The best friend I had known had completely changed.
The same thing had happened to her sisters. All their rooms were now total messes, and their lives were very screwed up to the point of no return. Rouki's parents called the Police. They took Rouki away to a mental institute. The institute did tests on her and they couldn't come up with a reason. But when they were undressing her to put her in the scrubs of the institute, they noticed the necklace.
"Hey, look at this." said Krissy the personal nurse for Rouki when she saw the necklace. "This necklace, is kinda disturbing, lets get this off of you." The second Rouki realized they were going to take her necklace off, she went into a powerful rage no one could control. finally they just shoved her in to a room with soft, white, squishy walls, She began to calm down once she was sure she was alone.
After a while, she cautiously fell asleep. When the staff noticed this, they stuck her with a needle full of sedative. She was now practically unconscious and if she did know what was going on, she had no muscle control due to the medicine. The nurse took the necklace off and saw that there was a bloody cut, oozing and bursting, rotting flesh coating the outer edge. The nurse flinched violently, and jerked backward. Her help looked at the mess around her neck in the place where necklace lie. He saw that where the pendant had been there was a plant like thing that seemed to be sucking at her chest in the area of ware her heart is supposed to be.
He noticed her breathing beginning to slow, she was dyeing.
The man rushed her to the hospital wing. The doctor had seen nothing like this it scared him and made him flinch too.
Mean while in Rouki's mind...
"NO! NO! NO! Don't hurt me please, I've done nothing wrong and I have not failed you! NO! NO! NO!" She trailed off. At the feet of a tall man with an evil grin is ware she laid sprawled out on the floor bloody and obviously beaten to the point where she should be dead. Her left arm was laying on the floor a few feet from her. It was in prices and through all the blood it was hard to tell what it actually was.
Suddenly the man said a few words and she became engulfed in flame. Her scream rang through the infinity of nothingness. It was a blood curdling scream that could crack windows. The power behind it was beyond words. She did not die though. Once he put out the flames. She was now not only bloody but had skin burning. The air smelled of rotting and burning flesh. The man took one smell of the stench and said, "I shall give you one more chance. But remember, the very second that you put the necklace on your soul was mine. There is no turning back now! I am what keeps you alive. That necklace is your only hope of survival. Be gone."
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Well what cha think so far. Hey I got tons more Idea's but I wanna see what you all think. Ok thanks for reading! Please reveiw!