I am so sorry this took so long to update. This would be updated a lot
sooner if I had a co-author to help me or at least a few ideas. I
appreciate those who actually reviewed with Ideas or at least sent me
positive reviews. But unfortunately the idea reviews are in the minority.
Well what I'm trying to say is that it may take awhile for me to update but
I refuse to quit. I will see this story to the end. But I'm sure at this
point you are getting bored so I'll shut up now and start the chapter.
Disclaimer: the only character in this whole story I own is Nox (Well sort of, but we'll get to that later) no one else do I own. You name em, I don't own em.
Chapter 5: Nox
Computer: ALERT!!!!! 4 life forms detected in the building.
I switch the computer off. It seems my guests have arrived. I walk out of the control room and down the hall. I eventually enter the living room. In the room are my guests. A boy and girl are sitting together on the couch. The most noticeable thing about the boy is his long red hair. If 1 did not know better they would say he was a girl. The he appeared to be asleep. The girl sitting next to him had long brown hair and was somewhat skinny. She kept glancing at the boy. It was easy to tell by the way she looked at him that she had a bit of a crush on him. There was another girl sitting at the table playing with a moose doll. She had shorter black hair. You could also tell by her looks that she was a bit of a tomboy. On the boy's shoulder was a red-tailed hawk. It spotted me first and gave the boy a light peck on the head. The boy woke up and saw me.
Boy: Hello sir. My name is Kurama, this is Hermione and that is Jade, what's yours.
Nox(Monotone): My name is Nox. I am your new leader. Has the 4th member not arrived yet.
Kurama: He's here.
Nox(monotone): Then where is he? Do not play games with me Kurama.
Kurama(points to his shoulder): Right here.
Nox(AN: OK, this is getting redundant, so I'm going to say here and now that unless I say otherwise Nox is going to speak in monotone): Are you trying to tell me your pet bird is the 4th member of this team.
???:yes, But I am not his pet. My name is Tobias.
Kurama: silly me. I forgot to introduce you. --U
Nox: Whatever. Now it is time to see whether you are worthy enough to join. Follow me.
We walk out of the living room. And down the hall. Finally we arrive at a door labeled "TRAINING ROOM". I open the door and they follow me inside.
Inside the room is the training course with various robots traps and other machines on the other side of the course is a red flag. Next to the course is a door that leads to the controls.
Nox: this is the training course. The object is to get to that flag as fast as you can without losing. Everything is set to stun so it is completely safe. Now, who wants to go first?
Please R & R
Disclaimer: the only character in this whole story I own is Nox (Well sort of, but we'll get to that later) no one else do I own. You name em, I don't own em.
Chapter 5: Nox
Computer: ALERT!!!!! 4 life forms detected in the building.
I switch the computer off. It seems my guests have arrived. I walk out of the control room and down the hall. I eventually enter the living room. In the room are my guests. A boy and girl are sitting together on the couch. The most noticeable thing about the boy is his long red hair. If 1 did not know better they would say he was a girl. The he appeared to be asleep. The girl sitting next to him had long brown hair and was somewhat skinny. She kept glancing at the boy. It was easy to tell by the way she looked at him that she had a bit of a crush on him. There was another girl sitting at the table playing with a moose doll. She had shorter black hair. You could also tell by her looks that she was a bit of a tomboy. On the boy's shoulder was a red-tailed hawk. It spotted me first and gave the boy a light peck on the head. The boy woke up and saw me.
Boy: Hello sir. My name is Kurama, this is Hermione and that is Jade, what's yours.
Nox(Monotone): My name is Nox. I am your new leader. Has the 4th member not arrived yet.
Kurama: He's here.
Nox(monotone): Then where is he? Do not play games with me Kurama.
Kurama(points to his shoulder): Right here.
Nox(AN: OK, this is getting redundant, so I'm going to say here and now that unless I say otherwise Nox is going to speak in monotone): Are you trying to tell me your pet bird is the 4th member of this team.
???:yes, But I am not his pet. My name is Tobias.
Kurama: silly me. I forgot to introduce you. --U
Nox: Whatever. Now it is time to see whether you are worthy enough to join. Follow me.
We walk out of the living room. And down the hall. Finally we arrive at a door labeled "TRAINING ROOM". I open the door and they follow me inside.
Inside the room is the training course with various robots traps and other machines on the other side of the course is a red flag. Next to the course is a door that leads to the controls.
Nox: this is the training course. The object is to get to that flag as fast as you can without losing. Everything is set to stun so it is completely safe. Now, who wants to go first?
Please R & R