I Will Kill You Jak!!

Inu65: hey all. I know it was a big shock that Rayme died.

Jak: no shit….

Daxter: what the hell's wrong with you?

Inu65: nothing. Well, yeah.

Snowy Fox: thanks for reviewing and keeping track of this story. I am really glad you like it. Don't worry. I'm planning to keep this story goin and I have an idea for a sequel, so you're just gonna have ta stick around!

I Will Kill You Jak Chapter 10, Tear Me Down

"Oh, I see you got my device. Thanks!" Vin said taking the device from Jak. "Hey, uh, weren't there four of you?" Vin said looking over the three.

"She-" Jak began. "She fell behind." Keito interrupted Jak, walking to the far end of the room and crossed her arms across her chest, and hung her head. "Oh…..well……I'm sorry to hear that…..well, you guys haveta get back to work I suppose….thanks again." Vin said turning away and began pushing buttons, pulling levers and so on.

"Come on Keito. Let's go take that package to Krew." Jak said placing a reassuring hand on her shoulder. Keito nodded and headed for the door. "Hey kid. You doing ok? Hmmm? You doing alright? You wanna soda? Hm? You wanna soda?" Daxter asked jumping onto her shoulder. No answer. "Oh screw it. I tried." Daxter said crossing his arms across his chest. Jak smirked a bit.

They walked back to the Underground and hopped onto the Zoomer and headed for Krew's. Shortly after they took off, Krimzon Guards began to chase them. "Shit…" Jak said making a sharp right turn. "Dax, get out my gun." Jak said making another sharp turn. "Gotcha pal!" Daxter said pulling Jak's Blaster. "Jak, we'd go a lot faster if we didn't have so many people….elves…..things on." Keito said looking back at the Krimzon Guards who were eliminating the space between them. "And how are we going to do that?" Jak asked. "Like this!" Keito said jumping off and started running towards Krew's. "KEITO!!!" Jak yelled, braking a bit. "Jak, she sacrificed her self, so lets go! We'll get her later!" Daxter said. Jak looked back at Keito who was running for her life, then he slammed the gas and flew out of there, Krimzon Guards still on their heels.

"OH SHIT, OH SHIT, OH SHIT!" Keito cried running for dear life. "HAULT IN THE NAME OF THE KRIMZON GUARD!!" one of the guards shouted. "YOU'LL NEVER TAKE ME ALIVE!! AAAAHAHAHAHAHAAA!!" Keito yelled running faster. "GET HER!!" another Krimzon Guard shouted.

"GOD DAMNIT! THIS IS LIKE RUNNING THE MILE! AND I SUCK AT RUNNING THE MILE! OOOOH FUUUUUCK! FUCK ME, FUCK, ME, FUCK MEEEEE!!!" Keito shouted, running like a bat out of hell. The Krimzon Guards were easily catching up, as Keito began to slow down. She looked back to see angry Guards on her tail. "OOOOH SHIIIIT!!! WHY DID I HAVE TO JUMP OFF!!! I WILL KILL YOU JAAAAAK!!!" she shouted forcing a burst of speed.

"GET ON!" came a voice from besides her. Keito looked over to see Torn stretching out his arm. Keito grabbed it and flung herself onto the Cruiser. "Thanks." she said, breathing heavily. "I knew I shouldn't of trusted you four." Torn said. "Speaking of which, where's the other one? With Jak?" "No…..she-Rayme fell behind." Keito said in between gasps for air. "Damnit…." Torn mumbled steering back towards the Underground.

Jak finally pulled up to Hip Hog Heaven. "Uh, hello?" Jak said looking around. "Hello eh?" said a rather low voice from behind. Jak turned around to see a huge fat man floating in some sort of chair. "Uh, you Krew?" Daxter asked. "It depends on who's asking." the fat man said. (FAT MAAAAN! starts da-ing the old T.V. show Batman theme) "Look, we're here to deliver this." Jak said tossing the bag to the fat guy. "Ahh. Yes. Thanks." he said.

"What the hell happened back there?" Torn snapped once they got back to the Underground. "We went to deliver whatever you needed us to, to that fat man in the chair!" Keito said. "And why the hell did you come and save me?! I thought you hated us!" Keito snapped. "Because you were taking so damn long!" Torn said after a short while. "Ever heard of doing more important things?!" Keito shot back. "Like what?!" "LIKE GETTING SOMETHING FOR THAT COMPUTER GUY TO KEEP THE COMPUTERS FROM CRASHING, SAVING ALL OF OUR ASSES!" Keito shouted, pointing in the direction of Vin. "And let me guess, that's were your little friend 'fell behind'?" Torn said leaning over the table. Keito glared then punched Torn in the nose. "Don't you ever, EVER bring up were Rayme died, or else I'll do more than just give you a bloody nose. That you can count on!" Keito said acidly, turning away and walking to a corner and began to cry softly. Torn held his nose and cursed.

"Listen, I'm sorry. I didn't mean it." Keito said after a while of crying. "Just, don't do that again." Torn said, looking at his hand. "Ok…. Ugh, I feel icky….gotta shower somewhere here?" Keito said. "It's in the back. It's right through those doors." Torn said pointing to a set of doors. "Thanks." Keito said hugging Torn briefly then jogged over to the showers.

A few minutes later, Keito came back out, hair dripping wet. "Aaaaah. Much better. Domo arigato Torn-sama." Keito said. "Is Jak back? Hey, that kinda rhymed! Well, not really, but you get my point. "No. Krew probably had him do one of his money pick ups." Torn said sitting down with a heavy frustrated sigh. "oh. Well, in the mean time, wanna play a game? It's a card game." Keito said walking over to the table and sitting down across from Torn. He raised an eyebrow. "What game? And do you have cards?" Torn asked. "Yup. It's a game called Gin Rummy." Keito said pulling out a deck of cards and taking the two Jokers out. "Ever played?" Torn shook his head 'no'. "Haven't even heard of it." he said. "Oh, well then. I'll teach ya!" Keito said happily, shuffling the deck.

She passed out 7 cards facedown to Torn and herself. She put the rest of the cards down in the middle of them, and drew a card from the deck and laid it besides the rest of the deck, face up. "Ok, look at your cards." Keito said looking at her cards in her hand. She had a 4 of Spades, Ace of Spades, 6 of diamonds, 6 of hearts, 8 of Spades, 2 of Diamonds, and a Queen of Hearts.

Torn looked at his hand. He had a 9 of Hearts, Queen of Spades, Jack of Clubs, 9 of Spades, 4 of Diamonds, 10 of Diamonds, and a Jack of Hearts. "Ok, now what?" he asked. "Ok, since I delt, you either take the card that is face up, or you draw a card from the deck." Keito said pointing to the turned up card and to the deck. Torn thought a while, looking at his deck, then finally drew a card from the deck. "Ok. Now what?" "Alright, don't show me your card, and place it into your deck. Then, you have to throw a card out. You can only have 7 cards in your hand." Keito said. Torn nodded and threw out his 4 of Diamonds on top of the card that was discarded from the delt. Keito grinned and pulled both cards. "Wait, wait, wait! You can't do that!" Torn said. "Yes I can. I needed the 2 of Spades, which is the card that was left from the delt. If you need a card that's under a card or cards, you have to take that card, plus all of the other cards on top of it. That's the only exception of having more than 7 cards in your hand. Now, I have to discard one." Keito said discarding her Queen of Hearts.

"What's the point of the game?" Torn asked. "Ok, if you have 3 of a kind, four of a kind, a straight in the same suit, you keep them in your hand until all your cards are, well, until your hand has no spare cards, except for one, which you have to throw down. Like lets say you have a 3 threes and 3 Aces, in your hand. You can lay your hand down and discard your last card. That's how you win." Keito said. Torn nodded, drawing a card from the deck. "And what if I don't need it?" Torn asked. "Do I just throw it down as my discard?" Keito nodded. Torn set down his newly drawn 5 of Diamonds. Keito took it right away. "Thank you." Keito said rearranging her deck in her hand and set down her 8 of Spades. Torn took the 8 of Spades and discarded his 10 of Diamonds.

Keito drew the 5 of Hearts, then discarded it. Torn pulled the 5 of Spades and discarded it. Then Keito took Torn's discarded 5 and put it into her deck. Torn drew the 3 of hearts and discarded it. Keito drew the 3 of Diamonds and discarded the 6 of Hearts. Torn drew a 3 of Clubs and set it down. Then Keito drew a King of Diamonds and threw it down. Torn drew the same card, but only of Clubs and set it down. Keito pulled a King of Spades, and set it down. Torn sighed heavily and drew another card. It was the 3 of Spades and set it down. Keito took it the instant that it hit the other cards.

"I win." she said lying down her 1-5 of Spades and her 2-5 of Diamonds and discarded her 6 of Diamonds. "You cheated!" Torn yelled. "I DID NOT!" she yelled back. "IT'S JUST THE LUCK OF THE DRAW!" Keito shouted again. "I CHALLENEGE YOU TO ANOTHER ROUND!" Torn said. "Fine….only this time….let's make it interesting." "How so?" "Strip Gin Rummy?" Keito said pulling her sweat shirt on. "But first, let's get all the layers of clothing we can, but we have to be able to move freely." She said. "Speaking about that, my clothes are dirt, got any spar stuff that'll fit, and won't show off too much skin?" Keito asked looking at her dirty sweatshirt in disgust.

"Yeah. There's bond to be something that'll work." Torn said rummaging through boxes. He threw Keito a blue shirt with one long sleeve, and the other sleeve was a glove type thing, that went up a little higher than her elbow, brown pants, and three leather type belt things. "Thanks." Keito said trotting off towards the showers again.

Two minutes later she came out all tangled in the leather belt thingies. "Umm, what are these things for?" she asked. "This one, goes around your waist, like this." Torn said. "Ooooh…." "and the other two go across your shoulder. They act as a brace for a gun…..but you don't have one anymore." Torn said fixing the two leather straps across her shoulder, crossing them on the right shoulder. "Thanks. I would never have guessed. Now, anything bigger to put on over this?" she asked. Torn smirked and dropped a huge box full of old clothing onto the table. "Whoa…… that's a lot of shit."

"Let's get started shall we?" Keito said pulling out a large brown shirt. Torn shrugged and started pulling articles of clothing on.

End

Inu65: FINALLY THIS CHAPTER IS DONE!!! I was on a serious writers block until I got an idea from school to do Strip Gin Rummy.

Jak: I don't wanna see that….I seriously don't…….

Torn: you mean she and I are going to play a stripping game?! NOOO!!

Inu65: oh shut up. Someone's gonna win before anything revealing is taken off, of any kind. Sure, a few layers are comin off, but not the very last layer. No, nononononono. WHO DO YOU TAKE ME AS?! I'M JUST AN INSANE GODDESS OF PIRACY AND WAR!! DO YOU PEOPLE THINK I'M THAT SICK?!

Jak: technically you are sick….

Inu65: yes, I know I have a little head cold, but not perverted sick.

Torn: ok good….I feel a little safer now….

Ashelin: oh man. I would love to see you without your shirt off.

Torn: 0.o I think not.

Inu65: well, that's it for now.