It's the second chapter!I'll just skip to the reveiwer(s).
Burenda
I agree with everything you said. Thanks for advice!
(12:45 P.M.)
"Megaman!"Protoman cried in his sleep .He was turning in his bed so much that Dr.Light heard the noise and came to investigate .He woke the stirring robot. Protoman noticed that by the berly features it was Dr.Light.
"Protoman!What's wrong?!" Dr.Light was concerned.
Protoman was silent. He was looking through the window while Dr.Light was speaking.
"Nothing.Just a bad dream." He answered before going off to where ever he usually went to.
Protoman went to his favorite spot,a cliff outside of town. He usually went here when he wanted to be alone.He felt the wind pass by him. His bandanna flapped in the wind as would a flag would. He looked down at the town below. The lights looked like stars in the night sky.
He perched himself on the tree that was only a couple of meters away from the cliff.It was a Sycamore tree.He felt another wave of sleepiness come over him. He tried to resist, but he soon was sleeping soundly.
:::::::::::::::::::Dream Sequence:::::::::::::::::::::
The dreaded black void. He was here again.
"Megaman!" He called. His brother materilized in front of him. This time, he looked solid. "Do you have any idea what happened last time?!"
"None. I was kinda hoping that you could tell me."
"Atleast were you able to escape the black void?"
"I did. But I wasn't able to go far."
"How so?"
"Well after that weird happening, I awoke by your side. I tried to leave the room. But I couldn't get one meter away from you without feeling this strange burning sensation in my body. It got worse the longer I tried to resist it.When I got near you, it vanishes. As if it was never there."
"I wonder it could mean."
"I'm not sure of it myself. How long did Dr.Light say before I wake up?"
"Unfortunatly, a month."
"I can wait as long as you visit me. It's so lonely."
"Don't worry. I will be here waiting for you."
They void started to fade in to the familar tree that Protoman was sleeping on.
::::::::::::::::::::::End Dream Sequence::::::::::::::::::::
Protoman was wide awake.
Beep Beep-Beep Beep-Beep
His built-in communicater was beeping. He put his hand up to his helmet.
Static
"Proto here."
"Protoman! Dr.Wily is attacking the city! Can you stop him?"
"I will. I want to teach him a lesson."
"Just don't do anything drastic. Protoman? Are you listening?!"
Static
Protoman was indeed not listening. "Dr.Wily! You'll pay!" With that, he jump off the cliff.
(Back with Dr.Light)
Dr.Light was sitting next to Megaman.
Beep-Beep-Beep-
He listened to the the heart moniter. It assured him that the little blue robot was still alive. No. His son was stillalive.
"Rock, if you were awake right now, you'd be able to calm him down."
He could've sworn after he said that, that he felt a hand on his shoulder. It was even warm.
So, is this a improvement?Please reveiw! Before I forget, would anyone like to be my beta?
