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Please note that I made up these Tameranian words. No one bother me about them being incorrect. They are made up. If you can't accept that, please don't read this. I do not want anyone spamming my review box about this.
Chapter2: It gets Worse
[Pure Water's POV]
I touched the foreign objects sticking out of my head. I heard Robert call them antennas before. But even I knew that these things were exclusive to Ennions (bugs) or other strange alien life forms. I never saw a Tameranian with these antennas before and I knew that wasn't a good thing. We were not very open to things really unusual to us. The common Tameranian's might accept my new appearance, but at the same time they were the ones who didn't uphold the laws and hold our Tameranian upbringing in high regard or with unwavering obedience. I couldn't accept the thought of being ostracized by my own kind and forced to receive care from commoners who were only degrees from Earthling savagery because of their Tameranian upbringing. I had to be able to fit in with my own class.
"Pure Water," I heard my mother call to me from not too far away, "are you and Dark Water in the Collection Room (Attic)?" she asked curiously, "it's nearly the time of glow less purity (darkness\night)," she said in a concerned voice, "do you and Dark Water have your Ennion Litee Tegrases (little animals that light their way- animal lamp)?" she asked.
"Yes mother, birther of two Tameranian females that are Pure Water and little Dark Water," I responded, "mother can you please bring forth your presence to your older daughter?" I asked trying not to sound too nervous, "I would like to put forward something that I'd like you try and answer (question)," I said formally.
"No problem," my mother said simply and I winced at her use of Earth language, "I'll be in your presence in a moment Pure Water, the older of the two females which I've birthed," she said and I heard her starting to type in the code.
*Clear Water, birther of two Tameranian females. How can you so blindly be pulled into the very Earth culture that you hate? I just hope that it has not changed you enough to make you not realize the badness of my current status. * (Pure Water's thoughts)
[Clear Water]
I stepped into the side room to see what negative emotions could be troubling my older female offspring Pure Water. I dusted off a few stray pieces of dirty particles (dust) off my puffy red dress, which nearly reached my toes. But when I saw Pure Water, I let out a squeaky cry of horror (scream) and hurried back out again. What were those horrible things sticking out of her forehead? It was too early for her to have her transformation. Not that it was unheard of for Tameranian girls to sometimes transform early. But what were those horrible things sticking out of her head? She had read up on books about transformations that were different, but never had she heard of or seen one as bizarre as what her female offspring had sticking out of her head.
*Keep feelings of no fright (calm) Clear Water, birther of two Tameranian females. You need to keep your in feelings of no fright as well. Oh negativity! I must have scared my older offspring by making brisk movement of disappearance (running). * (Clear Water's thoughts)
I slowly took in airy sustenance and reentered the room. I saw that Pure Water's eyes were filled with waters of sadness (tears). I quietly sat beside and tried to figure out the happenings of this strange occurrence (source of the problem).
"Pure Water," I said softly, "where did these umm pointy Enion like extensions come from?" I asked and Pure Water closed her eyes and shook her head.
"I know not the source," Pure Water said honestly, "am I really that hideous, mother?" I asked daring to use an earth term myself.
My brown eyes widened in fright. Had my act of fright made her feel that ugly? I ran my hand through her bright orange hair that was the same colour as my own.
"You are not hideous my older female offspring," I said honestly, "but you should stay our place of residence (home) for a while," I instructed as my offspring looked at me curiously, "your transformation has started early and I prefer you to stay in place of personal resting (her bedroom) until I can fully understand what your transformation will be," I said frankly.
Pure Water nodded in agreement. I loved it so much that my daughters listened to me with unwavering obedience. Even though I was going to let Dark Water spend less time with that boy from that savage Earth planet. Yesterday she actually refused to sing our daily folk song because she felt like singing an Earth Pop song that she heard Blue Sky listening to in Robert's room. I felt so sorry for Blue Sky and Red Sky (Blue Sky's mother). They were being drawn deeper and deeper into the barbaric culture of that Earth Planet. I only hope that Pure Water will break her friendship with that Tameranian girl school so that I don't have to involve myself into it (intervene).
"I shall go to my place of personal resting (bedroom) now," Pure Water said formally and rose to go, "may I take this with me?" she asked as she held up a book.
"Just this occurrence," I said firmly, "remember to place it back in place of original assignment (position) when you return it here," I said seriously and she nodded.
I felt better as my older female offspring left the room. Things could only get better after this.
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(One Week Later)
[Pure Water's POV]
I woke up and my hands went upright (stretching) as my mouth released the sound of tired awakening (yawn). I heard some chatter outside my personal place of rest.
"She's not going to indent your flesh with marks from what she uses to eat," Blue Sky said firmly.
"Don't you mean bite?" Robert asked sounding slightly confused and my cheeks rose in temperature upon hearing his voice, "but it's still her room and I don't feel comfor...." he protested but was stopped when Blue Sky rudely opened my door without requesting entrance.
"Hello Pure Wa....!" Blue Sky cried unnaturally and unnecessarily loudly but at least she sounded happy.
But my best friend suddenly stopped and started to let out cry of horror (scream) the moment that she saw me. Robert's eyes bulged and he and Blue Sky held each other as they suddenly took several backward steps away from me. Blue Sky's light green eyes and Robert's dark brown eyes both mirrored fright and this brought to raise negative emotions within me.
"What is incorrect?" I asked and started to rise but Blue Sky squeaked and jumped into Robert's arms.
"I think that you should check yourself in that small mirror," Robert said in a slightly fearful voice as he pointed to my small imageniser (mirror) resting on what he liked to call a 'night table'.
"Okay," I said slowly and reached for it, but when I saw my face I let out a blood-curling cry of horror and threw the imageniser away from my current position.
All the other occupants of the house ran to where they heard my piercing cry of horror. I heard gasp and tiny cries of horror when they saw me.
Meanwhile I was looking in a downward position. The imageniser had lost its compactness (broke) and several pieces of it littered the solid surface that we usually stood on (the ground). As I looked at the pieces I saw again what was the source of my cry of horror.
Two freakish red orbs were in place of my beautiful blue eyes. I tried to close my eyes to block them out but I couldn't. After a while of being able to do so I panicked. I raised a hand to my eyes and I soon realized why. My eyelids were gone.
I couldn't take it anymore; it was too much fright for a young Tameranian girl. I fainted.
End of Chapter2.
Reggae: Please Review. Remember that I'm making up the Tameranian words and their behaviour as I go along. Please don't bother me because you don't FEEL that's how a Tameranian would act. This is fanfiction, not the script for a Teen Titan episode.
I'm not sure when I can update this. It took me nearly if not more than two hours to write and I have a lot of other fics that I need to update. Thank you to all those who've reviewed this story and sorry for the LONG wait.
Please note that I made up these Tameranian words. No one bother me about them being incorrect. They are made up. If you can't accept that, please don't read this. I do not want anyone spamming my review box about this.
Chapter2: It gets Worse
[Pure Water's POV]
I touched the foreign objects sticking out of my head. I heard Robert call them antennas before. But even I knew that these things were exclusive to Ennions (bugs) or other strange alien life forms. I never saw a Tameranian with these antennas before and I knew that wasn't a good thing. We were not very open to things really unusual to us. The common Tameranian's might accept my new appearance, but at the same time they were the ones who didn't uphold the laws and hold our Tameranian upbringing in high regard or with unwavering obedience. I couldn't accept the thought of being ostracized by my own kind and forced to receive care from commoners who were only degrees from Earthling savagery because of their Tameranian upbringing. I had to be able to fit in with my own class.
"Pure Water," I heard my mother call to me from not too far away, "are you and Dark Water in the Collection Room (Attic)?" she asked curiously, "it's nearly the time of glow less purity (darkness\night)," she said in a concerned voice, "do you and Dark Water have your Ennion Litee Tegrases (little animals that light their way- animal lamp)?" she asked.
"Yes mother, birther of two Tameranian females that are Pure Water and little Dark Water," I responded, "mother can you please bring forth your presence to your older daughter?" I asked trying not to sound too nervous, "I would like to put forward something that I'd like you try and answer (question)," I said formally.
"No problem," my mother said simply and I winced at her use of Earth language, "I'll be in your presence in a moment Pure Water, the older of the two females which I've birthed," she said and I heard her starting to type in the code.
*Clear Water, birther of two Tameranian females. How can you so blindly be pulled into the very Earth culture that you hate? I just hope that it has not changed you enough to make you not realize the badness of my current status. * (Pure Water's thoughts)
[Clear Water]
I stepped into the side room to see what negative emotions could be troubling my older female offspring Pure Water. I dusted off a few stray pieces of dirty particles (dust) off my puffy red dress, which nearly reached my toes. But when I saw Pure Water, I let out a squeaky cry of horror (scream) and hurried back out again. What were those horrible things sticking out of her forehead? It was too early for her to have her transformation. Not that it was unheard of for Tameranian girls to sometimes transform early. But what were those horrible things sticking out of her head? She had read up on books about transformations that were different, but never had she heard of or seen one as bizarre as what her female offspring had sticking out of her head.
*Keep feelings of no fright (calm) Clear Water, birther of two Tameranian females. You need to keep your in feelings of no fright as well. Oh negativity! I must have scared my older offspring by making brisk movement of disappearance (running). * (Clear Water's thoughts)
I slowly took in airy sustenance and reentered the room. I saw that Pure Water's eyes were filled with waters of sadness (tears). I quietly sat beside and tried to figure out the happenings of this strange occurrence (source of the problem).
"Pure Water," I said softly, "where did these umm pointy Enion like extensions come from?" I asked and Pure Water closed her eyes and shook her head.
"I know not the source," Pure Water said honestly, "am I really that hideous, mother?" I asked daring to use an earth term myself.
My brown eyes widened in fright. Had my act of fright made her feel that ugly? I ran my hand through her bright orange hair that was the same colour as my own.
"You are not hideous my older female offspring," I said honestly, "but you should stay our place of residence (home) for a while," I instructed as my offspring looked at me curiously, "your transformation has started early and I prefer you to stay in place of personal resting (her bedroom) until I can fully understand what your transformation will be," I said frankly.
Pure Water nodded in agreement. I loved it so much that my daughters listened to me with unwavering obedience. Even though I was going to let Dark Water spend less time with that boy from that savage Earth planet. Yesterday she actually refused to sing our daily folk song because she felt like singing an Earth Pop song that she heard Blue Sky listening to in Robert's room. I felt so sorry for Blue Sky and Red Sky (Blue Sky's mother). They were being drawn deeper and deeper into the barbaric culture of that Earth Planet. I only hope that Pure Water will break her friendship with that Tameranian girl school so that I don't have to involve myself into it (intervene).
"I shall go to my place of personal resting (bedroom) now," Pure Water said formally and rose to go, "may I take this with me?" she asked as she held up a book.
"Just this occurrence," I said firmly, "remember to place it back in place of original assignment (position) when you return it here," I said seriously and she nodded.
I felt better as my older female offspring left the room. Things could only get better after this.
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(One Week Later)
[Pure Water's POV]
I woke up and my hands went upright (stretching) as my mouth released the sound of tired awakening (yawn). I heard some chatter outside my personal place of rest.
"She's not going to indent your flesh with marks from what she uses to eat," Blue Sky said firmly.
"Don't you mean bite?" Robert asked sounding slightly confused and my cheeks rose in temperature upon hearing his voice, "but it's still her room and I don't feel comfor...." he protested but was stopped when Blue Sky rudely opened my door without requesting entrance.
"Hello Pure Wa....!" Blue Sky cried unnaturally and unnecessarily loudly but at least she sounded happy.
But my best friend suddenly stopped and started to let out cry of horror (scream) the moment that she saw me. Robert's eyes bulged and he and Blue Sky held each other as they suddenly took several backward steps away from me. Blue Sky's light green eyes and Robert's dark brown eyes both mirrored fright and this brought to raise negative emotions within me.
"What is incorrect?" I asked and started to rise but Blue Sky squeaked and jumped into Robert's arms.
"I think that you should check yourself in that small mirror," Robert said in a slightly fearful voice as he pointed to my small imageniser (mirror) resting on what he liked to call a 'night table'.
"Okay," I said slowly and reached for it, but when I saw my face I let out a blood-curling cry of horror and threw the imageniser away from my current position.
All the other occupants of the house ran to where they heard my piercing cry of horror. I heard gasp and tiny cries of horror when they saw me.
Meanwhile I was looking in a downward position. The imageniser had lost its compactness (broke) and several pieces of it littered the solid surface that we usually stood on (the ground). As I looked at the pieces I saw again what was the source of my cry of horror.
Two freakish red orbs were in place of my beautiful blue eyes. I tried to close my eyes to block them out but I couldn't. After a while of being able to do so I panicked. I raised a hand to my eyes and I soon realized why. My eyelids were gone.
I couldn't take it anymore; it was too much fright for a young Tameranian girl. I fainted.
End of Chapter2.
Reggae: Please Review. Remember that I'm making up the Tameranian words and their behaviour as I go along. Please don't bother me because you don't FEEL that's how a Tameranian would act. This is fanfiction, not the script for a Teen Titan episode.
I'm not sure when I can update this. It took me nearly if not more than two hours to write and I have a lot of other fics that I need to update. Thank you to all those who've reviewed this story and sorry for the LONG wait.