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CHAPTER 11!!
~ Dark Takeover: Chapter 11 ~
Hiei stared down at the almost rotted hand. The words echoed in his mind.. 'Join me.' The fire demon's red eyes blazed with a kind of fire as all the horrible memories returned to him. All those painful days of Hiei's childhood and family. All the power, and all the pain. It was an awful dreadful power his uncle possessed. He thought of Aklyis and Miya. They had no idea what they were up against. His uncle would smite them under his pinky finger like ants. Yet Hiei himself was traveling with the girl. He stood by them and protected them from his uncle's own men. So why would Zoran want Hiei's allegiance now?
"Why?" Hiei asked simply turning his head to look at his sadistic uncle for the first time.
Zoran chuckled deep in his throat. "You do not ask why when god fives you a great opportunity such as this boy."
"My father used to say that."
"As our father did once too."
Suddenly Hiei thought he heard voices in the darkness, "Aklyis?" he mumbled to himself.
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"I wonder if he can hear me?" Aklyis poked the fire demon as he slept soundly. No reaction.
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"FORGET the GIRL! Zoran thundered snapping his nephew's attention away from the pretty brunette's voice, "Do not allow yourself to be weakened by a petty female!"
Hiei's eyes darkened slightly. His uncle was right. The girl made him weak. He wanted her.
"You see my boy, I can help you rid yourself of this weakness, and regain your true strength. Follow me.."
Hiei slowly reached out his hand to take his uncle's rotten one.
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"Hiei...Hiei can you hear me?" Aklyis groaned in exasperation. 'Why won't he wake up?'
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Hiei's eyes widened and his heart spead up in anticipation, "It's her."
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"Oh whatever, it's completely useless," she sighed aloud stroking her hair for a moment as she wrapped his bruised body in bandages.
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"Don't make us enemies boy," Zoran growled.
"Even your own brother was your enemy," Hiei replied coldly as he turned to walk away.
"Come back boy! I command you to return to your master!"
Hiei's blood ran cold as he spun around and spat back at Zoran, "I belong to no one!" Beginning to walk again, the spiky, raven haired boy allowed his forsaken uncle's voice yo fade out as he closed his eyes and continues to walk shutting out everything but the face of a certain brown and ice blue eyed girl. Her long brown hair swaying in the wind.
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Hiei jolted up from his prone position on the inn floor immediately grabbing his violater.
Aklyis gasped as her hand was roughly grabbed and yanked painfully against her will. She whimpered slightly as the demon squeazed her smaller, more fragile hand with his own, "Hiei, it's me..let go..it hurts."
The sound of her voice seemed to bring Hiei back to reality. His eyes widened momentarily as he released Aklyis' hand. Looking down Hiei noticed his heavily bandaged body.
"I don't need your help, girl."
Aklyis scowled slightly, "You're welcome, boy," she retorted.
Hiei simply 'humphed" as he rose to his feet and strode out of the room without a word.
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It had now been two days since the group had arrived to the town, and now it was time to leave.
"We had been there for way to long," Miya stated worry evident in her voice that they had been tracked down.
"Yeah, well we wouldn't have had to stay for so long if a certain klutz called HIEI didn't have to get hurt!" Aklyis snorted at Hiei, a bit of hurt sounded in her voice as she recalled his slightly harsh words after she had bandaged him up for his own good.
However Hiei seemed somewhat out of it, as he walked alongside the girls, sort of staring at the sky deep in thought.
'Why did he come for me? Does he plan on killing me after he's used me for his purposes? I don't know anymore. I don't know what to believe. I don't even think I can believe myself anymore.
I remember when I was a child. I was perfectly happy, with my mother and my father. Everything was going fine until I met him, Zoran, my uncle. I knew there was something wrong with him the moment I saw him. Those hypnotizing violet orbs, his pale, thin skin, and that ugly hair. There was something evil, just about his physical appearance. He always preached and talked like he was some high and mighty god. Talked about his ideas, theories, and all this rubbish he wanted to accomplish. Father told me he was a magician, or something like it. Father wasn't too pleased with his dark practices. Sacrificial ceremonies and everything.
Well one day father and him got into a fight. It was about the land or something. Father wanted to use it to grow crops for his village. Zoran wanted to build a tower there. Some sort of power central for him to concentrate all his dark magic, and look out for anything interesting coming his way. Zoran told my father to join him in his plans. That he would make Father his general, or captain or something. Father refused. Zoran called him a traitor and vowed his revenge. So he went and built his tower elsewhere.
About six months later, a group of thugs came round. Apparently they were Zoran's first henchmen. I think I was about 5 when this happened. They slaughtered everyone in the village, except my mother, my father, and myself. Burned everything, and destroyed all the crops my father and his people had been working at for so long. Even though our village was somewhat armed, we did not stand a chance against the fighting skills and the magic of the men of Zoran.
First they took my mother. Stripped her, beat her, and raped her, right before my eyes, and my father's. They each took their turn to do their disgusting business. Once they had finished ravaging her, they took a knife, and decided to finish the work.
My mother bled to death. I was finished, completely devastated. I couldn't even cry. Not until I saw my uncle that was. He came strutting in like some sort of god, a pathetic smirk on his face. I can still remember all the torture my father went through. Physical, mental, and emotional. All through my uncle's magic. It was disgusting. Watching my father squirm in midair as Zoran inflicted pain onto him in every way possible. The last thing I saw was my father's head explode. His brain, like a mashed potato was everywhere in pieces. I thought I was going to die. I really did. Then something happened.
Zoran was coming for me next and I knew it. However, there was one thing that pathetic fuck didn't know about me. I had the Jagen. Somehow, when I was very young, I fell into a crack in the earth. It took me down to hell, where I was cut by a cursed blade on my forehead, a blade that turned anyone it cut into a demon. I was unfortunate, yet fortunate enough to earn this scar that developed into a third eye. An eye that could see all, and give me the ability of my Black Dragon Fist Attack. I was also now, a fire demon. My parents were horrified, and put a white band around my head so that no one would ever see my eye. Otherwise I would have been condemned as a demon, and stoned to death.
So when Zoran came close enough to bid his doing of evil upon me, I exploded in rage. My band ripped off, revealing my third eye, and I somehow miraculously managed to summon the Black Dragon and attack Zoran with all my might. Zoran was far from dead, but nowhere near to being well. I put a scar on his face. A deep one, where the dragon had hit. Back then I was not strong enough to destroy him, but now twelve years later, I am seventeen. And maybe, just maybe, I could destroy him.
Zoran must know this. He wants my Jagen powers. This is why he wants me to join him. So he can use my powers, rather than have them work against himself..'
"Hey look!! The Temple of Luna!! The Moon Priestess! Aki we're here! We can get another jewel of the six priestesses!"
Hiei snapped out of his thoughts as he looked upon the massive temple, dedicated to the Priestess of the Moon, Luna.
A/N: WHEW!! That was my LONGEST chapter yet. Hiei's story was quite lengthy I know...BUT YOU BETTER REVIEW BECAUSE MY FINGERS HURT FROM TYPING!!!!!! XD and I finally decided not to make it a cliffy..just to give you a break..hey they aren't too healthy for you anyways.XD READ AND REVIEW!!!!
~ Dark Takeover: Chapter 11 ~
Hiei stared down at the almost rotted hand. The words echoed in his mind.. 'Join me.' The fire demon's red eyes blazed with a kind of fire as all the horrible memories returned to him. All those painful days of Hiei's childhood and family. All the power, and all the pain. It was an awful dreadful power his uncle possessed. He thought of Aklyis and Miya. They had no idea what they were up against. His uncle would smite them under his pinky finger like ants. Yet Hiei himself was traveling with the girl. He stood by them and protected them from his uncle's own men. So why would Zoran want Hiei's allegiance now?
"Why?" Hiei asked simply turning his head to look at his sadistic uncle for the first time.
Zoran chuckled deep in his throat. "You do not ask why when god fives you a great opportunity such as this boy."
"My father used to say that."
"As our father did once too."
Suddenly Hiei thought he heard voices in the darkness, "Aklyis?" he mumbled to himself.
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"I wonder if he can hear me?" Aklyis poked the fire demon as he slept soundly. No reaction.
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"FORGET the GIRL! Zoran thundered snapping his nephew's attention away from the pretty brunette's voice, "Do not allow yourself to be weakened by a petty female!"
Hiei's eyes darkened slightly. His uncle was right. The girl made him weak. He wanted her.
"You see my boy, I can help you rid yourself of this weakness, and regain your true strength. Follow me.."
Hiei slowly reached out his hand to take his uncle's rotten one.
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"Hiei...Hiei can you hear me?" Aklyis groaned in exasperation. 'Why won't he wake up?'
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Hiei's eyes widened and his heart spead up in anticipation, "It's her."
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"Oh whatever, it's completely useless," she sighed aloud stroking her hair for a moment as she wrapped his bruised body in bandages.
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"Don't make us enemies boy," Zoran growled.
"Even your own brother was your enemy," Hiei replied coldly as he turned to walk away.
"Come back boy! I command you to return to your master!"
Hiei's blood ran cold as he spun around and spat back at Zoran, "I belong to no one!" Beginning to walk again, the spiky, raven haired boy allowed his forsaken uncle's voice yo fade out as he closed his eyes and continues to walk shutting out everything but the face of a certain brown and ice blue eyed girl. Her long brown hair swaying in the wind.
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Hiei jolted up from his prone position on the inn floor immediately grabbing his violater.
Aklyis gasped as her hand was roughly grabbed and yanked painfully against her will. She whimpered slightly as the demon squeazed her smaller, more fragile hand with his own, "Hiei, it's me..let go..it hurts."
The sound of her voice seemed to bring Hiei back to reality. His eyes widened momentarily as he released Aklyis' hand. Looking down Hiei noticed his heavily bandaged body.
"I don't need your help, girl."
Aklyis scowled slightly, "You're welcome, boy," she retorted.
Hiei simply 'humphed" as he rose to his feet and strode out of the room without a word.
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It had now been two days since the group had arrived to the town, and now it was time to leave.
"We had been there for way to long," Miya stated worry evident in her voice that they had been tracked down.
"Yeah, well we wouldn't have had to stay for so long if a certain klutz called HIEI didn't have to get hurt!" Aklyis snorted at Hiei, a bit of hurt sounded in her voice as she recalled his slightly harsh words after she had bandaged him up for his own good.
However Hiei seemed somewhat out of it, as he walked alongside the girls, sort of staring at the sky deep in thought.
'Why did he come for me? Does he plan on killing me after he's used me for his purposes? I don't know anymore. I don't know what to believe. I don't even think I can believe myself anymore.
I remember when I was a child. I was perfectly happy, with my mother and my father. Everything was going fine until I met him, Zoran, my uncle. I knew there was something wrong with him the moment I saw him. Those hypnotizing violet orbs, his pale, thin skin, and that ugly hair. There was something evil, just about his physical appearance. He always preached and talked like he was some high and mighty god. Talked about his ideas, theories, and all this rubbish he wanted to accomplish. Father told me he was a magician, or something like it. Father wasn't too pleased with his dark practices. Sacrificial ceremonies and everything.
Well one day father and him got into a fight. It was about the land or something. Father wanted to use it to grow crops for his village. Zoran wanted to build a tower there. Some sort of power central for him to concentrate all his dark magic, and look out for anything interesting coming his way. Zoran told my father to join him in his plans. That he would make Father his general, or captain or something. Father refused. Zoran called him a traitor and vowed his revenge. So he went and built his tower elsewhere.
About six months later, a group of thugs came round. Apparently they were Zoran's first henchmen. I think I was about 5 when this happened. They slaughtered everyone in the village, except my mother, my father, and myself. Burned everything, and destroyed all the crops my father and his people had been working at for so long. Even though our village was somewhat armed, we did not stand a chance against the fighting skills and the magic of the men of Zoran.
First they took my mother. Stripped her, beat her, and raped her, right before my eyes, and my father's. They each took their turn to do their disgusting business. Once they had finished ravaging her, they took a knife, and decided to finish the work.
My mother bled to death. I was finished, completely devastated. I couldn't even cry. Not until I saw my uncle that was. He came strutting in like some sort of god, a pathetic smirk on his face. I can still remember all the torture my father went through. Physical, mental, and emotional. All through my uncle's magic. It was disgusting. Watching my father squirm in midair as Zoran inflicted pain onto him in every way possible. The last thing I saw was my father's head explode. His brain, like a mashed potato was everywhere in pieces. I thought I was going to die. I really did. Then something happened.
Zoran was coming for me next and I knew it. However, there was one thing that pathetic fuck didn't know about me. I had the Jagen. Somehow, when I was very young, I fell into a crack in the earth. It took me down to hell, where I was cut by a cursed blade on my forehead, a blade that turned anyone it cut into a demon. I was unfortunate, yet fortunate enough to earn this scar that developed into a third eye. An eye that could see all, and give me the ability of my Black Dragon Fist Attack. I was also now, a fire demon. My parents were horrified, and put a white band around my head so that no one would ever see my eye. Otherwise I would have been condemned as a demon, and stoned to death.
So when Zoran came close enough to bid his doing of evil upon me, I exploded in rage. My band ripped off, revealing my third eye, and I somehow miraculously managed to summon the Black Dragon and attack Zoran with all my might. Zoran was far from dead, but nowhere near to being well. I put a scar on his face. A deep one, where the dragon had hit. Back then I was not strong enough to destroy him, but now twelve years later, I am seventeen. And maybe, just maybe, I could destroy him.
Zoran must know this. He wants my Jagen powers. This is why he wants me to join him. So he can use my powers, rather than have them work against himself..'
"Hey look!! The Temple of Luna!! The Moon Priestess! Aki we're here! We can get another jewel of the six priestesses!"
Hiei snapped out of his thoughts as he looked upon the massive temple, dedicated to the Priestess of the Moon, Luna.
A/N: WHEW!! That was my LONGEST chapter yet. Hiei's story was quite lengthy I know...BUT YOU BETTER REVIEW BECAUSE MY FINGERS HURT FROM TYPING!!!!!! XD and I finally decided not to make it a cliffy..just to give you a break..hey they aren't too healthy for you anyways.XD READ AND REVIEW!!!!