Yes my friends an Authors note. Some of you may be thinking wait a second there wasn't an authors note as the first thing before that's because I redid the story! I really hated it. The story line was O.K. but I just didn't like it. It was choppy rushed ect. So therefore I revised it. I'm still not overly enthused with it but it's better.
You may notice:
That the beginning is pretty much the same with a few things taken out and added.
You may also notice that some of the revised chapters are two of the old ones put together (revised of course).
Also I'm really sorry to anyone who is really stuck on the old cliffhanger because It may be awhile before that get's really in depth. I'm very sorry you've lost any sleep on it (I doubt it)
Another thing
Don't skip things. I know the first few chapters are some of the old stuff. But there are things added to it. Also if you start reading later on and automatically skip to the second ball because that's were the old one left off you will miss a lot of big things and a new character who was added during revisions.
Ok...I feel like I'm writing a rules page here. Um.......... enjoy review. Thanks to everyone who reviewed the old one. I'm sorry I didn't like the later chapters at all. So please read on and if I offened anyone or anyone thought I was yelling at people for some reason I don't mean to I'm sorry. (You never know I got really bad emails on my site because someone thought the rules page for my dolls was refrencing them. I didn't know the person.... O.o)
Anyway
ENJOY!!!!!
You may notice:
That the beginning is pretty much the same with a few things taken out and added.
You may also notice that some of the revised chapters are two of the old ones put together (revised of course).
Also I'm really sorry to anyone who is really stuck on the old cliffhanger because It may be awhile before that get's really in depth. I'm very sorry you've lost any sleep on it (I doubt it)
Another thing
Don't skip things. I know the first few chapters are some of the old stuff. But there are things added to it. Also if you start reading later on and automatically skip to the second ball because that's were the old one left off you will miss a lot of big things and a new character who was added during revisions.
Ok...I feel like I'm writing a rules page here. Um.......... enjoy review. Thanks to everyone who reviewed the old one. I'm sorry I didn't like the later chapters at all. So please read on and if I offened anyone or anyone thought I was yelling at people for some reason I don't mean to I'm sorry. (You never know I got really bad emails on my site because someone thought the rules page for my dolls was refrencing them. I didn't know the person.... O.o)
Anyway
ENJOY!!!!!
