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Since I'm starved for ideas on what the third chapter should be, this is going to be a Miroku/Sango chapter. One more thing before I forget. This chapter takes place after sunset when Shippo is already asleep. There is also some OOC.
Disclaimer: I do not own any of the Inuyasha characters.
Chapter 3: Getting Steamy in the Hot Springs
While Inuyasha and Kagome were in the future at the spa, Miroku and Sango were having an adventure of their own.
"I wish Kagome were here." Sango thought out loud while she sat in the hot spring. Kagome had left some of her shampoo and conditioner for Sango to use. While Sango was pouting in the hot spring, she didn't notice Miroku coming.
"Sango...I'm coming in the hot spring. I promise I won't touch you unless you give me permission and I'll sit across from you to make sure I don't get out of hand." Miroku announced before he entered the area.
Miroku walked into the area calmly and Sango sunk into the hot water more to make sure he didn't be a pervert and look. Little did she know, that was the last thing he had on his mind.
Miroku undid all of his robes right in front of Sango. He did this to signify to her that he was not ashamed to hide his body from another human being. Seeing this, Sango sat back up in the water a little bit.
Sango's eyes widened at the site of his naked body. Sango's eyes immediately went to his cock which was already hard from just being in Sango's presence.
"Miroku..." Sango managed to stammer out while blushing a deep shade of red. All of a sudden, Sango's eyes filled with tears and she swam across the spring into Miroku's arms.
"What's wrong Lady Sango?" Miroku asked.
"It's not fair! Why did she have to take HIM?!" Sango sobbed.
"We both knew it was only a matter of time before she asked him to go somewhere. She wanted to take us, but if we went, I would have been out of control and Inuyasha would never confess his feelings if he does." Miroku said while blushing. Sango knew his words had a ring of truth in them. So Miroku held her while she sobbed in his arms.
"Sango..." Miroku started. "There's something I would like to tell you."
"Yes...w...what is it?" She said still choking on a few remaining tears.
"You say I'm a lecherous monk who only wants women to bear my children, but you have me all wrong. The one I want is you. Only you. I do that to hold my character that Inuyasha and Kagome know. I want you to know that I love you and I always will." Miroku said.
"Miroku..." Sango said. After that she did something that was totally unlike her. She went up and kissed him. He more than willingly kissed back.
"Miroku...I can feel you." Sango said while pointing down. Miroku looked down and blushed.
"I though you were supposed to be a humble monk with no sexual desires." Sango teased.
"Where all human aren't we." Miroku said.
"Miroku...may I...touch it?" Sango asked blushing furiously.
"Please...I beg you to." Miroku said with a warm tone in his voice. "If you curious about anything on my body, you're more than welcome to ask or touch."
Sango slowly put her hand to his dick and moved a little bit feeling around the shaft and head. Miroku started to breath heavier and it was now obvious he was trying to control his urges until she said she was ready.
"Miroku...you're holding back aren't you?" Sango asked feeling guilty.
"I'm sorry to say, but yes I am."
What Sango said next caught Miroku off guard.
"Miroku...Please don't hold back."
With that he grabbed Sango into an embraced and kissed her hard. He slipped his tongue into her mouth and she gratefully played with his tongue. Miroku's hand once again started feeling her up, but for once Sango didn't slap him, instead, she started to moan slightly. It wasn't very loud, but Miroku caught it and it made his member harder yet. He pushed his body hard against Sango's in order for her to fell it between her legs.
Sango gasped and thinking he did something wrong Miroku pulled back.
"I'm sorry Lady Sango. I got carried away."
"Don't apologize, I liked it."
With that being said, Miroku started again. This time when his hands felt her, the went between her legs this time. Miroku took one of his long fingers and slid it across the opening to her virginity. Slowly he started rubbing. Sango's breathing now became heavier and little moans came from her. He slid one of his fingers into her womanhood, and he heard Sango gasp at his intrusion.
"Did that hurt?" He asked concerned.
"No, just don't move your fingers for a few minutes; I'm not used to having anything in me like that."
A few minutes pass and Sango gives Miroku the signal to go on. With that, Miroku moves his fingers in and out of her. Since Sango was a virgin, her first climax came very quickly and was strong. Miroku wished they weren't in the hot spring so he could taste her sweet honey for himself.
"Miroku...that was wonderful. Where did you learn to pleasure a woman like that?" Sango asked breathing hard.
"Let's just say it was instinct." Miroku said with that same warm tone in his voice.
Sango's hands now wandered back to his throbbing member. She was feeling it, exploring it when she felt another pair of hands on hers. Miroku had grabbed her hands and wrapped them around the shaft. He started to move her hands up and down the shaft along with his own.
"Sango...that feels very good." Miroku panted. His climax took a little longer, but Sango was still a little confused when Miroku climaxed and his seed was nothing more than a cloud in the hot spring. Her parents had told her what happens during the conception of a baby, but she had never seen how it works in person.
"Thank you Sango. You don't know how long I have been waiting for you to do that."
"You're welcome Miroku. We should go back to the village; Shippo and Kaeda are probably worried about us." Sango said.
With that, Miroku and Sango walk out of the spring, dried off with the towels left from Kagome, and dressed and walked back to the village hand in hand.
Well my first Miroku Sango lemon. I think it's not that bad. Once you start writing a lemon, it just sort of flows onto the paper (or screen in this case. Lol) Please Review and tell me what you think. I love reading your reviews. This story had gotten the most reviews of any of my stories. Thank you so much! If you give me constructive criticism I try to use it.
Since I'm starved for ideas on what the third chapter should be, this is going to be a Miroku/Sango chapter. One more thing before I forget. This chapter takes place after sunset when Shippo is already asleep. There is also some OOC.
Disclaimer: I do not own any of the Inuyasha characters.
Chapter 3: Getting Steamy in the Hot Springs
While Inuyasha and Kagome were in the future at the spa, Miroku and Sango were having an adventure of their own.
"I wish Kagome were here." Sango thought out loud while she sat in the hot spring. Kagome had left some of her shampoo and conditioner for Sango to use. While Sango was pouting in the hot spring, she didn't notice Miroku coming.
"Sango...I'm coming in the hot spring. I promise I won't touch you unless you give me permission and I'll sit across from you to make sure I don't get out of hand." Miroku announced before he entered the area.
Miroku walked into the area calmly and Sango sunk into the hot water more to make sure he didn't be a pervert and look. Little did she know, that was the last thing he had on his mind.
Miroku undid all of his robes right in front of Sango. He did this to signify to her that he was not ashamed to hide his body from another human being. Seeing this, Sango sat back up in the water a little bit.
Sango's eyes widened at the site of his naked body. Sango's eyes immediately went to his cock which was already hard from just being in Sango's presence.
"Miroku..." Sango managed to stammer out while blushing a deep shade of red. All of a sudden, Sango's eyes filled with tears and she swam across the spring into Miroku's arms.
"What's wrong Lady Sango?" Miroku asked.
"It's not fair! Why did she have to take HIM?!" Sango sobbed.
"We both knew it was only a matter of time before she asked him to go somewhere. She wanted to take us, but if we went, I would have been out of control and Inuyasha would never confess his feelings if he does." Miroku said while blushing. Sango knew his words had a ring of truth in them. So Miroku held her while she sobbed in his arms.
"Sango..." Miroku started. "There's something I would like to tell you."
"Yes...w...what is it?" She said still choking on a few remaining tears.
"You say I'm a lecherous monk who only wants women to bear my children, but you have me all wrong. The one I want is you. Only you. I do that to hold my character that Inuyasha and Kagome know. I want you to know that I love you and I always will." Miroku said.
"Miroku..." Sango said. After that she did something that was totally unlike her. She went up and kissed him. He more than willingly kissed back.
"Miroku...I can feel you." Sango said while pointing down. Miroku looked down and blushed.
"I though you were supposed to be a humble monk with no sexual desires." Sango teased.
"Where all human aren't we." Miroku said.
"Miroku...may I...touch it?" Sango asked blushing furiously.
"Please...I beg you to." Miroku said with a warm tone in his voice. "If you curious about anything on my body, you're more than welcome to ask or touch."
Sango slowly put her hand to his dick and moved a little bit feeling around the shaft and head. Miroku started to breath heavier and it was now obvious he was trying to control his urges until she said she was ready.
"Miroku...you're holding back aren't you?" Sango asked feeling guilty.
"I'm sorry to say, but yes I am."
What Sango said next caught Miroku off guard.
"Miroku...Please don't hold back."
With that he grabbed Sango into an embraced and kissed her hard. He slipped his tongue into her mouth and she gratefully played with his tongue. Miroku's hand once again started feeling her up, but for once Sango didn't slap him, instead, she started to moan slightly. It wasn't very loud, but Miroku caught it and it made his member harder yet. He pushed his body hard against Sango's in order for her to fell it between her legs.
Sango gasped and thinking he did something wrong Miroku pulled back.
"I'm sorry Lady Sango. I got carried away."
"Don't apologize, I liked it."
With that being said, Miroku started again. This time when his hands felt her, the went between her legs this time. Miroku took one of his long fingers and slid it across the opening to her virginity. Slowly he started rubbing. Sango's breathing now became heavier and little moans came from her. He slid one of his fingers into her womanhood, and he heard Sango gasp at his intrusion.
"Did that hurt?" He asked concerned.
"No, just don't move your fingers for a few minutes; I'm not used to having anything in me like that."
A few minutes pass and Sango gives Miroku the signal to go on. With that, Miroku moves his fingers in and out of her. Since Sango was a virgin, her first climax came very quickly and was strong. Miroku wished they weren't in the hot spring so he could taste her sweet honey for himself.
"Miroku...that was wonderful. Where did you learn to pleasure a woman like that?" Sango asked breathing hard.
"Let's just say it was instinct." Miroku said with that same warm tone in his voice.
Sango's hands now wandered back to his throbbing member. She was feeling it, exploring it when she felt another pair of hands on hers. Miroku had grabbed her hands and wrapped them around the shaft. He started to move her hands up and down the shaft along with his own.
"Sango...that feels very good." Miroku panted. His climax took a little longer, but Sango was still a little confused when Miroku climaxed and his seed was nothing more than a cloud in the hot spring. Her parents had told her what happens during the conception of a baby, but she had never seen how it works in person.
"Thank you Sango. You don't know how long I have been waiting for you to do that."
"You're welcome Miroku. We should go back to the village; Shippo and Kaeda are probably worried about us." Sango said.
With that, Miroku and Sango walk out of the spring, dried off with the towels left from Kagome, and dressed and walked back to the village hand in hand.
Well my first Miroku Sango lemon. I think it's not that bad. Once you start writing a lemon, it just sort of flows onto the paper (or screen in this case. Lol) Please Review and tell me what you think. I love reading your reviews. This story had gotten the most reviews of any of my stories. Thank you so much! If you give me constructive criticism I try to use it.