Sorry for not updating sooner but I had Christmas tests and no time to. Please tell me what you think. Please, please review, and any ideas for this story are welcome!
Here's the next chapter. Thank you for reading.
Chapter 8
Raven and Beast boy had flying/walking a while. Beast boy was getting bored.
B.B.: "Are we there yet? . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Do you even know where you're going?"
Raven: "there it is."
At that moment they saw the top of a giant structure. Than Beast boy heard a shape piercing sound (think of a high pitch sound, that makes your ears hurt and double it. Oh and raven can't hear it.)
Beast boy blacked out and started to fall.
Raven: "Oh great."
Raven raced after him and caught him at least 10 feet from the ground (around 4 meters I think.)
Raven laid him on the ground and turned to see Shiki trying very hard to open a very big door.
Raven: "DON'T OPEN THAT DOOR."
Shiki: "I have to see Starfire!"
Raven: "O.k. just step away from the door!"
Shiki: "Why?. . . . Its not like there's a trap."
Raven: "the hole building is a maze and it's filled with traps! You Wouldn't Last A Minute."
Shiki just stared for a moment, than she droped to her knees and stared to cry.
Sorry that's all I have right, my mom's making me bake.
O.k. here is the deal if I get 10 reviews I will write the next chapter and it will be longer than this one. If you like the story, tell me and if you don't tell me so I can make it better o.k. Because I starting to think no one's reading it (flames welcome!)