(True) Chapter 6 (but I'll Call it Chapter 7)
Attack!
Eddy peered out of the forest at the New Nazi camp. It was four a.m., so the only people awake were those on active guard duty. The tents were dark, so the only light came from a few electric lanterns set up here and there.
"All clear, General Eddy?" asked Sergeant Double Dee.
"More or less," his leader replied. "Is the Generator ready?"
"Yes, sir. How long should I set it for?"
"I'd suggest we be in and out in twenty minutes, sir," Lieutenant Kevin suggested.
"I agree," whispered the general. "But set it for a half hour in case of stragglers."
"All right." Double Dee pressed some buttons, and the green readout now said 30:00. "Tell me when, sir."
Eddy looked at the kids gathered around him. They were all so hopeful. He didn't want to let them down. He unholstered his DD-100
**Weapon Fact File: DD-100. A small water handgun, filled with sultinic acid, which burned through every tested solid other than plastic. The water gun has been modified to fire at 50 times normal pressure.
and asked the Resistors, "are you all ready?"
They nodded. "Let's get 'em." Sara said.
"Do it," the general commanded.
Double Dee pressed the START button. The satellite dish on top began rotating, and the children held their breaths. All at once, the lights in the camp silently went out. The Resistors could hear shouts in German.
"Was geschah?"
"Ist der generator unten?"
"Jemand erhalten den dominierenden Offizier!"
Fire glinted in Eddy's eyes. "Attack!"
The Resistors ran down the hill, out of the forest and into the camp. Edd stayed barely inside the forest, picking off enemy soldiers with his ES- 500.
**Weapon Fact File: ET-500. A BB gun modified to shoot nails. It is fitted with a scope and is deadly accurate, with over 25 times the power of the original BB gun.
Eddy ran around the camp, shooting soldiers that dared appear before the short leader. Many a foe fell to his furious onslaught, the retribution for his parents and family members.
Jimmy, Sara, Johnny and Plank made their way into the camp. Once they found the Mess Tent, Sara and Jimmy stayed outside to provide Johnny cover. Johnny ran inside and placed a C-6 explosive
**Weapon Fact File: C-6 Explosive. A bomb constructed out of a foot long piece of PCV pipe filled with C-6, an explosive material designed by Double Dee, which is slightly less powerful than C-4. It has a 20 second fuse.
on the ground. He struck a light-anywhere match against Plank and lit the fuse. He ran out, and, thankfully, the area was temporarily devoid of Nazi's, due to Sara's and Jimmy's hard work.
Rolf and Ed were rushing through the enemies on the way to the Tank Depot. Rolf was taking out single Nazi's with his razor-sharp throwing knives(and picking up the blades as well, making sure to wipe off all traces of Nazi blood) and Ed took out clumps of the soldiers with precision blasts of his pool-ball-grenade launcher. Once they made it to the tanks, Ed clambered on top of one and began firing grenades into open hatches.
Kevin and Nazz had made it to the far end of the camp, Kevin nailing New Nazi's with his EX-400
**Weapon Fact File: Ex-400. Similar to the ET-500, this weapon is made from a BB gun and fires nails. However, this gun has no scope and is slightly less powerful. It's upside is that it fires 5.8 nails per second.
and Nazz shooting with a DD-100 like Eddy.
Nazz saw, out of the corner of her eye, Kevin stop. "Crap!" he said. He ran to a cage, where two small children were being held.
"What are you staring at?!" the blonde girl asked. "Let us out of here, you dork!"
The boy with the baseball cap and extremely large nose nodded. "That might be nice."
With a carefully aimed squirt of her gun, Nazz melted the lock imprisoning the two kids. "Follow me!" Kevin said.
They ran out of the camp, meeting up with Eddy on the outskirt. "Come on!" the general shouted. "Everyone else is waiting!"
They made their way into the forest and up the hill. Ed was holding the Generator, ready to leave at a moment's notice. "Retreat!" Eddy shouted, and they did.
Miraculously, no one was injured. Double Dee turned off the Generator about a half-mile from the New Nazi camp, to prevent overheating. Once they reached the suburbs again, they all relaxed in the Food House, eating pretzels, Crunchy Puffs, and drinking sodas. Rolf made broiled eels, and was shocked when no one but the kid with the large nose would eat some.
"What are your names?" Eddy asked.
"I'm Mandy," the girl said. "The weirdo over there stuffing his face with eels is Billy."
"Well, Billy and Mandy," Eddy said. "Welcome to the Resistors.
*****AUTHORS NOTE: Arrrrgh! Finally! This chapter has been deleted from my floppy TWICE! That's why it took so long to get up. Sorry!
Well, another chapter, another slew of reviews(at least I hope). I really appreciate them, so keep 'em coming
Two bad things have happened. One, my illegal cable got cut! All good, free things must come to an end. Now everyone thinks I'm a druggie. NO I AM NOT ON SPEED, MY HANDS ARE SHAKING DUE TO CARTOON WITHDRAWAL!!! Not only that, but my email (strykemanson@;yahoo.com) hasn't been working right. Hopefully it will be operational soon.
This chapter, even though I've had to write it 3 times, stayed pretty much the same the whole way through. The only big exception was the ending. In the original, the Resistors found the Kankers in the cage. However, I wasn't really sure how the Kankers would fit in the Resistors, and a lot of people are anxious for characters from other stories( of which there will be more) soooo, I decided to scrap the Kankers idea and put in Billy and Mandy. Hopefully there will be no riots. If there is an overwhelming demand, I may include the Kankers in a later chapter. Or maybe they died with most of Peach Creek.
How did you like the Weapon Fact File? That was another change in the chapter, included only in the last rewrite. I thought it would be a fresh way to describe the weapons, without having to break the pace of the story. It also was a way to be more informative than I otherwise could be.
Hope you guys liked it! Until next time-
Stryke Manson
Attack!
Eddy peered out of the forest at the New Nazi camp. It was four a.m., so the only people awake were those on active guard duty. The tents were dark, so the only light came from a few electric lanterns set up here and there.
"All clear, General Eddy?" asked Sergeant Double Dee.
"More or less," his leader replied. "Is the Generator ready?"
"Yes, sir. How long should I set it for?"
"I'd suggest we be in and out in twenty minutes, sir," Lieutenant Kevin suggested.
"I agree," whispered the general. "But set it for a half hour in case of stragglers."
"All right." Double Dee pressed some buttons, and the green readout now said 30:00. "Tell me when, sir."
Eddy looked at the kids gathered around him. They were all so hopeful. He didn't want to let them down. He unholstered his DD-100
**Weapon Fact File: DD-100. A small water handgun, filled with sultinic acid, which burned through every tested solid other than plastic. The water gun has been modified to fire at 50 times normal pressure.
and asked the Resistors, "are you all ready?"
They nodded. "Let's get 'em." Sara said.
"Do it," the general commanded.
Double Dee pressed the START button. The satellite dish on top began rotating, and the children held their breaths. All at once, the lights in the camp silently went out. The Resistors could hear shouts in German.
"Was geschah?"
"Ist der generator unten?"
"Jemand erhalten den dominierenden Offizier!"
Fire glinted in Eddy's eyes. "Attack!"
The Resistors ran down the hill, out of the forest and into the camp. Edd stayed barely inside the forest, picking off enemy soldiers with his ES- 500.
**Weapon Fact File: ET-500. A BB gun modified to shoot nails. It is fitted with a scope and is deadly accurate, with over 25 times the power of the original BB gun.
Eddy ran around the camp, shooting soldiers that dared appear before the short leader. Many a foe fell to his furious onslaught, the retribution for his parents and family members.
Jimmy, Sara, Johnny and Plank made their way into the camp. Once they found the Mess Tent, Sara and Jimmy stayed outside to provide Johnny cover. Johnny ran inside and placed a C-6 explosive
**Weapon Fact File: C-6 Explosive. A bomb constructed out of a foot long piece of PCV pipe filled with C-6, an explosive material designed by Double Dee, which is slightly less powerful than C-4. It has a 20 second fuse.
on the ground. He struck a light-anywhere match against Plank and lit the fuse. He ran out, and, thankfully, the area was temporarily devoid of Nazi's, due to Sara's and Jimmy's hard work.
Rolf and Ed were rushing through the enemies on the way to the Tank Depot. Rolf was taking out single Nazi's with his razor-sharp throwing knives(and picking up the blades as well, making sure to wipe off all traces of Nazi blood) and Ed took out clumps of the soldiers with precision blasts of his pool-ball-grenade launcher. Once they made it to the tanks, Ed clambered on top of one and began firing grenades into open hatches.
Kevin and Nazz had made it to the far end of the camp, Kevin nailing New Nazi's with his EX-400
**Weapon Fact File: Ex-400. Similar to the ET-500, this weapon is made from a BB gun and fires nails. However, this gun has no scope and is slightly less powerful. It's upside is that it fires 5.8 nails per second.
and Nazz shooting with a DD-100 like Eddy.
Nazz saw, out of the corner of her eye, Kevin stop. "Crap!" he said. He ran to a cage, where two small children were being held.
"What are you staring at?!" the blonde girl asked. "Let us out of here, you dork!"
The boy with the baseball cap and extremely large nose nodded. "That might be nice."
With a carefully aimed squirt of her gun, Nazz melted the lock imprisoning the two kids. "Follow me!" Kevin said.
They ran out of the camp, meeting up with Eddy on the outskirt. "Come on!" the general shouted. "Everyone else is waiting!"
They made their way into the forest and up the hill. Ed was holding the Generator, ready to leave at a moment's notice. "Retreat!" Eddy shouted, and they did.
Miraculously, no one was injured. Double Dee turned off the Generator about a half-mile from the New Nazi camp, to prevent overheating. Once they reached the suburbs again, they all relaxed in the Food House, eating pretzels, Crunchy Puffs, and drinking sodas. Rolf made broiled eels, and was shocked when no one but the kid with the large nose would eat some.
"What are your names?" Eddy asked.
"I'm Mandy," the girl said. "The weirdo over there stuffing his face with eels is Billy."
"Well, Billy and Mandy," Eddy said. "Welcome to the Resistors.
*****AUTHORS NOTE: Arrrrgh! Finally! This chapter has been deleted from my floppy TWICE! That's why it took so long to get up. Sorry!
Well, another chapter, another slew of reviews(at least I hope). I really appreciate them, so keep 'em coming
Two bad things have happened. One, my illegal cable got cut! All good, free things must come to an end. Now everyone thinks I'm a druggie. NO I AM NOT ON SPEED, MY HANDS ARE SHAKING DUE TO CARTOON WITHDRAWAL!!! Not only that, but my email (strykemanson@;yahoo.com) hasn't been working right. Hopefully it will be operational soon.
This chapter, even though I've had to write it 3 times, stayed pretty much the same the whole way through. The only big exception was the ending. In the original, the Resistors found the Kankers in the cage. However, I wasn't really sure how the Kankers would fit in the Resistors, and a lot of people are anxious for characters from other stories( of which there will be more) soooo, I decided to scrap the Kankers idea and put in Billy and Mandy. Hopefully there will be no riots. If there is an overwhelming demand, I may include the Kankers in a later chapter. Or maybe they died with most of Peach Creek.
How did you like the Weapon Fact File? That was another change in the chapter, included only in the last rewrite. I thought it would be a fresh way to describe the weapons, without having to break the pace of the story. It also was a way to be more informative than I otherwise could be.
Hope you guys liked it! Until next time-
Stryke Manson