Hey I've spotted some mistakes in the last chapter, when it says that Jack and WuYa were knocked out its. Omi (y) (y) (y) (y) (y) (y) (y), Jack 0 and WuYa 0
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Yingyang-fairy thanks I'll keep updating as much as I can
Cartoonhottie200: thanks I won't use any comments about clay with the FE (falcons eye again)
(I don't own Xiaolin Showdown or any of its characters (except some of the Shen-Gong-Wu) and I don't own the dementor.
And now here's chapter 4 – secrets revealed
Omi, Kim, Clay and Rai returned to the temple gave the Shen-Gong-Wu to Master Fung "10 Shen-Gong-Wu? ...but how?" asked Master Fung in surprise "We got them in the Shen-Ye-Tres-Dare" replied Kim "aaahhh there has not been a Shen-Ye-Tres-Dare since…well…ever really…by the way where's Omi?" asked Master Fung.
Omi was in the Temple studying "there is something wrong with that Shen-Gong-Wu (the time turner) why didn't WuYa use it in our fight?" after an hour Omi realised why she didn't. "Great Ghost of Dashi" "I must tell the others" "Heads up people yet another Shen-Gong-Wu has activated and this one is HUGE" told Dojo to everyone.
He pulled out the scroll to reveal the "Darkness Box" Master Fung looked at the scroll and fainted It has the power to unleashed a Dementor type thing at the enemies (for those who don't know, A Dementor is in Harry Potter the Prisoner of Azkaban, It has the ability to suck the soul of someone) "We have to get that Shen-Gong-Wu before WuYa does" warned Rai or else. "I guess I will have to tell the others later" said Omi Glumly.
Meanwhile at WuYa's cave she sensed a Shen-Gong-Wu (The Darkness box) but before she gets it she has to get rid of Jack and his bumbling Robots and she formulated a plan to wipe him out for good
Jack was working on his Shen-Gong-Wu tracer when WuYa came in and asked for an alliance (Team up) Jack accepted but she still worked on his machine
Well that's it chapter five coming soon please R&R
Oh and since we haven't heard much from Clay in a while ill try my best to give him some speech