Hiya guys! I found 3 reviews this afternoon... it's a start! Hahahaha... well let's see if this story can draw at least 5 reviews total! LoL, I know, I'm selfish.

Disclaimer: Oh Ken... I would like you more if Naru died in your manga... but no..


Your in Front of Me but I can't See you...

''Hey guys cut it out,'' said a timid voice coming behind Motoko. Motoko stopped in her tracks; the wind blew more fiercely and there was short silence. ''That voice…,'' thought Motoko. Her curiosity grew more by the minute each time she stood in the rain with the intense wind and the little chats her friends had. The blush came to her; she couldn't help but stop falling in the dark memory. She realized that maybe it was just a guy that tried to hit on her, there was no way she was going to break her promise now. The promise to get into Tokyo University, she wasn't going to break it, not now not ever. He saved her life… and he was so kind so gentle… maybe the guy behind her was just a creep.

Motoko felt a hand on her shoulder, ''How bout you?'' Want to sing it's our treat.'' The tall college guy grinned and tried to make an impression. ''What's this creep doing… that bastard… he's not going to break my promise!'' Motoko thought with fury.

''Men…,'' whispered Motoko in a harsh voice. Her umbrella reached all the way to her cheast and a swift strike of her Ki blasted at the two pathetic fools. Her temper rose each time she thought about the two whom tried to hit on innocent girls like her… it was really pathetic; well to Motoko. The blast sends the two sliding on their backs, quite painful if you ask them. The screeching sounds and whimper of their pain entertained the three girls. The fans cheered and chanted Motoko's name, once more.

''Two college men..,'' growled Motoko, ''hitting on four high school girls?'' You disgust me!'' The umbrella was about to snap in her grip but her face was calm. It was a waste of energy just to even waste her breath on them. The rain continued to fall on her white skin, sliding down on her eyes, not sure if it was tears or rain. This promise she made… she needed to take it seriously; just to get into Tokyo U with him.

''AHHHHH!!!!'' RUN AWAY!'' Shirei and Haitani both scrambled to their feet and ran; they bumped into the young man holding an umbrella; causing him to collapse on his butt. The umbrella lay beside him and the rain attacked him softly with the cold water and harsh wind. He groaned in minor pain; but suddenly looked up at the sharp umbrella pointed at him. He stared at it with a gulp then look up at the woman whom scared his friends away.

He finally summon the courage to speak, ''what the hell your problem?''

Motoko's eye twitch, ''weakling you dare speak to me like that, besides your friends of yours were mere perverts who doesn't have a life.''

The man gritted his teeth, ''that still doesn't give you the right to attack us like that, kendo girl!'' The man stands up and dusted his jacket with his hand than stared at Motoko with a stern look.

''Look, I'm sorry if my friends had offended you, but I had nothing to do with their stupid conversation!'' The young man's hand accidentally pounded against Motoko's cheast; his eyes widen and Motoko's bangs hid her expression; bit it hid with a tone of dark anger.

''FOOL!'' Motoko's umbrella strike once again, with her Ki… and this time, it was full power. The young man flew into the sky, afraid of the high fly; his screamed was sounded near Hinata village.

''Miss Aoyama, your face is red like a tomato, here let's get you home soon as possible!'' blabbered one of the fans of Motoko.

''I'm fine… just leave me alone,'' growled Motoko. She left with her foot stomping on the puddles that seemed to deepen with the soft rain dancing on the ground. She wished she was like that puddle… to be filled with something. To be filled by love… from the boy who came in her life… soon… he would come for her. Soon… she would be with him and be reunited from the long years yearning from the tempting promise to get into Tokyo University… soon… they will be reunited.

Motoko blushed; she knew that each time she had to push away that memory… that memory that would always stay with her. She needed to push it aside in order to concentrate on her training, for it would be a waste of focus. It's been 16 years and it seemed she never changed by the way she talks, acts, and well do training. It always seems to be a total bore… but she knew she had to do it in honor of her family… and in honor for him.

Motoko finally reached her home, the Hinata Apartments, her parents suggested that she would had to live here, for Grandma Hina was kind enough to lower the rent for her and for she did many favors in the Aoyama family. It definitely made her parents proud, to let their own daughter live under the roof with an angel. She sighed and slides the door, she slowly unbuttoned her shirt with the uniform, and she slid off her skirt. She was now only left with her white panties and her white strap that awfully looked like bandages. The reason she wore this was simple; to avoid any attractions to males.

Her thoughts seemed to wander but she continued the process of changing. Her eyes became gentle with the memory of her childhood promise. He was actually brave enough to save her… she blushed once more. Suddenly, she heard a faint voice coming towards the door of which she was changing in.

''Dammit… why the hell does these girls pick on me?'' First it's Naru… which is the worst, than it's Su, and Kitsune seems to be causing the plots for this!'' What's next, kendo girl going to live here?'' Well, that would be like hell!''

The footsteps approach closer and the door slid swiftly, according to the mood somebody was in.
''Errr…,'' the man stopped in his tracks. His eyes were shocked to find a tall woman almost naked, to be founded taking off an unusual strap. His eyes were seemed to roll down to Motoko's chest, than to her waist, and down to her slender legs. He was about to have a nosebleed so he tried to explain the situation; by bowing and rush out of the room. Unfortunately, his plan for that failed, since Motoko quickly grabbed her Katana and slashed the guy with her Ki with force.

''A weakling pervert, now a stalker?'' How disgusting!'' shouted Motoko with the blade an inch away from the man's face. The noise of Motoko's voice caught everyone's attention, so they all rushed to where Motoko blasted the door.

Su's hand horizontally went on her forehead and her left leg was lifted above the ground from a short length. Naru was there, with her fist tightened, seeing the reaction from person she knew. Shinobu hid behind Kitsune with her head only popping out from behind her back. Kitsune was next to Naru, holding a bottle of sake.

''Hiya, Motoko are you back already?'' cheerfully said Su.

''Umm… I see you met our new manager, Keitaro Urashima,'' sighed Naru.

''What… this pervert… our new manager?!'' shot Motoko.

Everyone gathered at the table; hearing every detail of how Keitaro became manager in the Hinata. Motoko felt intense heat of anger, but she remained calm in order to understand the situation, Naru and Haruka were explaining. Keitaro had a timid look on his face, looking both nervous and looking a little angry of what Motoko had done to him earlier. The nervousness Keitaro gave, reminded her of something familiar; but she couldn't put her finger on it, it was pretty much on the tip on her tongue.

After Naru was through of explaining, Motoko was furious, ''we can't allow a man to live here!''

''I'm sorry Motoko… But what's done is done,'' sighed Haruka. ''He's only been here for a week; give the guy a chance, besides he legally has the deed of owner of the Hinata Apartments…. It is not our decision for us to just kick him out.''

Motoko was out of her seat, she stared at Keitaro with a much more timid look, and she cursed under her breath. ''Is it exceptional for a manager's behavior to be so perverted?''

''Well this is a girl's dorm… and Keitaro is a guy… so I'm afraid not.'' replied Haruka.

''Urashima… tomorrow morning you would challenge me in a fight of the sport of Kendo!'' If you were to lose than you must leave immediately but if you were to win in this challenge, than you can stay and I would do anything in return of your victory, understand?'' Said Motoko.

Keitaro gave a slight frown, ''I accept your challenge… since I do know a little kendo.'' His frown quickly changed into a worried look and thought, ''I hope she's not as good as Toko- chan…''

Motoko stood in her room, she was near her window. The dark night had finally befallen the sky. The stars form and the moon appear with its mystic glow. The rain, once again started to drizzle the whole town of Hinata Village. Her thoughts wandered off that man… that person… he seemed somewhat familiar. She blushed at his appearance… why did she do so? Was she falling for another guy? No… she promised! She promised to wait for him! Motoko gripped her blade so hard that her knuckles turned white.

''Urashima… you are not my first love you bastard!'' shouted Motoko.

And the sentence she said… echoed into the lonely night where the rain continued to scatter outside her window. Keitaro, however, wondered the same thing…


''Toko- chan... one day... I will find you... and I would also find you... we will all go to Todai... but what if I found both of you? Will I have to choose?'' Chap.3 coming up next!

I know... Kei is ooc but... he went to the village where Motoko was, right? So yeah he knows how to fight! Hahaha.. maybe I should get rid of the glassesAnd... this is my episodes.. muhahahaha!!