Ok, I got the first chapter done! Wahoo! Um, it isn't very long though.
Ok, thanks to:
Ace Lannigan: I assure you, this story isn't going to be like your "Hero No More" story (which I did read and it was great!! I just haven't reviewed it yet).
aNiMeAzNgUrLLH: Well, I didn't mean that the prolouge wouldn't make sense - I meant that it wouldn't seem to fit into the main story part. lol. Um, thanks for your review!
bonnie's groupie 22: Lot's of reviews? Sweetness! hehe. Thanks!
cheerleader4life: Ok, this wasn't a quick update, but it isn't the longest one either! :)
Darkness of the heart: Thanks! Um, yeah, I'll keep an eye out for your poems. But knowing me I'll forget - gotta love author alerts! :)
Fantasy3: Coolness, you can't wait to read more! hehe! Thanks!
KPKrazy400: Yeah, but don't hold the story hostage from me! hehe.
LogtarPantsonfire: Ooh I'm glad! Thanks for reviewin'!
puppydog1266: I'm glad you think so! Thankies!
Rose Morningstar: And again I'm very glad! Thanks so much!
Wow! I never expected to get that many reviews for a prologue that had 9 lines!! ::beams:: I'm so happy!
Ok, onto the fic!
Chapter 1: The Accident
The rain fell down in sheets, drenching everything in the little town of Middleton.
A red-headed cheerleader ran out of the high school, her rain coat's hood up, while the rest of the rain coat protected her cheerleading uniform from the large droplets of rain that hurdled down to the earth below.
"How was cheer practice, hon?" her father asked.
Kim Possible jumped into the minivan. "Same as always." she replied as she threw back her hood, sending little droplets of water in the seat behind her.
"Hey!" Kim's twin brothers - Jim and Tim - exclaimed in unison.
"We didn't need another shower!" Tim complained.
"Sorry Tweebs." Kim replied in monotone.
"You are not!" Jim said.
"Zip it Tweebs." Kim shot.
"What tweaked you?" Tim asked.
"Nothing!" Kim said, but everyone in the car knew otherwise.
"What's bothering you, Kimmie-cub?" Mr. Possible asked.
Kim sighed. "Bonnie. Again she's trying to take over the squad!"
"You know, Kimmie, it sounds like Bonnie is just trying to get some attention." her father said.
"Yeah, the popular crowd's attention!" Kim exclaimed. "She's always trying to upstage me!" She sighed as she leaned back in her seat.
Everyone in the vehicle rode in silence for a few moments - except for Jim and Tim's occasional conversations.
"Um, dad, where are we going?" Kim asked when she noticed that they weren't heading toward home.
"Your mother asked me to pick up something for dinner - she's working late again." Mr. Possible said.
"Oh." Kim replied as the rain suddenly fell down twice as hard as before.
"Wow, it's really coming down." Mr. Possible commented.
Kim looked out of the windshield. "Yeah." she agreed.
Kim felt the car slow down - the rain was falling so hard that she could barely see out of it.
"Um, dad, maybe you should pull over." Kim suggested.
Mr. Possible nodded. "Just what I was thinking. There's a -"
Suddenly, Kim felt the whole car go flying. Unwillingly, she let out a frightened shriek as a truck plowed into the driver's side of the minivan, pushing it inward.
Then something even scarier happened: the minivan began to roll.
In the middle of it's first roll, Kim's seatbelt snapped. She felt herself being thrown from the vehicle - all of this happened in only seconds.
Pain like she had never felt before shot through her back as she landed hard on the ground. Then the world went black.
Ooh. Cliffy! Mwhahaha!
Sorry the chapter was so short, but I hoped ya liked!
Until my next update . . .
Ok, thanks to:
Ace Lannigan: I assure you, this story isn't going to be like your "Hero No More" story (which I did read and it was great!! I just haven't reviewed it yet).
aNiMeAzNgUrLLH: Well, I didn't mean that the prolouge wouldn't make sense - I meant that it wouldn't seem to fit into the main story part. lol. Um, thanks for your review!
bonnie's groupie 22: Lot's of reviews? Sweetness! hehe. Thanks!
cheerleader4life: Ok, this wasn't a quick update, but it isn't the longest one either! :)
Darkness of the heart: Thanks! Um, yeah, I'll keep an eye out for your poems. But knowing me I'll forget - gotta love author alerts! :)
Fantasy3: Coolness, you can't wait to read more! hehe! Thanks!
KPKrazy400: Yeah, but don't hold the story hostage from me! hehe.
LogtarPantsonfire: Ooh I'm glad! Thanks for reviewin'!
puppydog1266: I'm glad you think so! Thankies!
Rose Morningstar: And again I'm very glad! Thanks so much!
Wow! I never expected to get that many reviews for a prologue that had 9 lines!! ::beams:: I'm so happy!
Ok, onto the fic!
Chapter 1: The Accident
The rain fell down in sheets, drenching everything in the little town of Middleton.
A red-headed cheerleader ran out of the high school, her rain coat's hood up, while the rest of the rain coat protected her cheerleading uniform from the large droplets of rain that hurdled down to the earth below.
"How was cheer practice, hon?" her father asked.
Kim Possible jumped into the minivan. "Same as always." she replied as she threw back her hood, sending little droplets of water in the seat behind her.
"Hey!" Kim's twin brothers - Jim and Tim - exclaimed in unison.
"We didn't need another shower!" Tim complained.
"Sorry Tweebs." Kim replied in monotone.
"You are not!" Jim said.
"Zip it Tweebs." Kim shot.
"What tweaked you?" Tim asked.
"Nothing!" Kim said, but everyone in the car knew otherwise.
"What's bothering you, Kimmie-cub?" Mr. Possible asked.
Kim sighed. "Bonnie. Again she's trying to take over the squad!"
"You know, Kimmie, it sounds like Bonnie is just trying to get some attention." her father said.
"Yeah, the popular crowd's attention!" Kim exclaimed. "She's always trying to upstage me!" She sighed as she leaned back in her seat.
Everyone in the vehicle rode in silence for a few moments - except for Jim and Tim's occasional conversations.
"Um, dad, where are we going?" Kim asked when she noticed that they weren't heading toward home.
"Your mother asked me to pick up something for dinner - she's working late again." Mr. Possible said.
"Oh." Kim replied as the rain suddenly fell down twice as hard as before.
"Wow, it's really coming down." Mr. Possible commented.
Kim looked out of the windshield. "Yeah." she agreed.
Kim felt the car slow down - the rain was falling so hard that she could barely see out of it.
"Um, dad, maybe you should pull over." Kim suggested.
Mr. Possible nodded. "Just what I was thinking. There's a -"
Suddenly, Kim felt the whole car go flying. Unwillingly, she let out a frightened shriek as a truck plowed into the driver's side of the minivan, pushing it inward.
Then something even scarier happened: the minivan began to roll.
In the middle of it's first roll, Kim's seatbelt snapped. She felt herself being thrown from the vehicle - all of this happened in only seconds.
Pain like she had never felt before shot through her back as she landed hard on the ground. Then the world went black.
Ooh. Cliffy! Mwhahaha!
Sorry the chapter was so short, but I hoped ya liked!
Until my next update . . .