Broken Promises
Disclaimer: TT You're kidding me. You're actually going to read my disclaimer AGAIN?! sniff sniff must you rub it in?
Chapter Ten: It's Over
Pan
The words struck her hard, and fast. 'Run! RUN YOU MORON!' echoed over and over in her head. But despite her instincts, she couldn't move. Her soul mate, the love of her life had just rejected her with such…almost hating eyes. Finally a loud scream brought her out of her wallowing.
She turned, and ran, but before she could get to the door, a painful streak ran through her neck. She screamed, and the last thing she remembered hearing, was Trunks call her name.
--" Trunks --"
His voice echoed in the hall. It rang true, and clear. Not hiding his fear, or pain…and to some extent guilt. He swallowed. When the smoke had finally cleared, he saw the damage done. The benches were broken, the middle of the roof had caved in, cement blocks lay every where.
"God." His voice came out hoarse. And then he could no longer speak. His throat had clogged up completely.
"DAMMIT!" Vegita yelled. He let out a loud, powerful scream, and turned super saiyan.
Bra let out a small whimper, and buried her head in Goten's chest. Everyone else was in shock. Videl had sank to her knees, and Gohan looked like he had been torn apart. Marron, well, she looked devastated. For certain reasons she'd never admit.
"Pan?" Gohan called quietly. "Pan? PAN?! ANSWER ME YOUNG LADY! PAN! PAAAAAAANNN!!!!!"
"SHUT THE FUCK UP!" Vegita interjected. "SHE'S GONE GOT IT? BECAUSE YOU AND YOUR PUNY BRAINS COULDN'T FIGURE OUT WHAT WAS REALLY HAPPENING!"
Videl whimpered, and tears started to brim her blue eyes. "Gone? Vegita what do you…"
But she was cut off, and the remainder of the church doors swung open. A young man stood by the doorway. Taking in the sight of the church in silent shock. His fiery red hair seemed to flicker gold for a moment, but it returned to normal. His eyes were a strange forest green Trunks had never seen before. Swallowing, he took long powerful strides towards Vegita. He bowed respectfully, and Vegita returned the gesture.
"What happened King Vegita?" his voice was hoarse.
"Dryden!" A slightly high pitched voice called. All heads turned back to the door. A girl with aqua blue hair, that fell to the small of her back, and dark navy blue eyes gasped. "Tell me they….that she…." Her voice caught in her throut.
Vegita bowed in her general direction, and she mindlessy did the same. "They came, they saw, they took." Was all he needed to say.
"SHIT!" Dryden cursed. He ran a hand through his hair.
"What's going on here?" Trunks asked finally.
The girl looked at him with such hate, he had to wince. "YOU!!!!!!" she yelled in rage. A blue/violet hue surrounded her. Her ki rose dramatically, and finally she burst into a metallic blue light. "DIE BASTARD!!!"
"MARABU!" Dryden grabbed onto the back of her gi before she could reach Trunks. "They didn't know. It wasn't their fault….not fully anyways."
"Well? What are we all waiting for?" Piccolo said calmly from his corner in the room. "You came here by ship correct?"
Dryden nodded. "A Blazer 297. The fastest we have."
"How long will it take to get to Hito-sei?" Vegita inquired.
"A m-month." Marabu stuttered.
"Let's go." Vegita powered up, and took flight after Marabu, Dryden, and Piccolo.
Trunks stood silently, for a few moments, then took off after them. He heard Marron protest from behind him, but he couldn't care less. He just couldn't. Pan, his Panny, was in trouble, all because of him. And now, now….he had a chance to save her.
"FATHER!!! WAIT!!!" he called out to them.
The four figures stopped. He quickened his pace so as not to delay them. The girl…Marabu turned. Her cool blue eyes a piercing fiery gaze. Before he could comprehend what was happening, a numbness had evaded his cheek. He turned his head to look at her in shock.
She beat him to speaking. Her voice was cold, and filled to the brim with vengeance. "I do beg your pardon, Prince Trunks, but it is because of you that Koneko is gone, and I will NOT tolerate you coming to her rescue. I do believe she will be busy with her NEW life."
Dryden swallowed. "Your highness, Princess Marabu is simply stating that….well…you are not entitled to this rescue mission. This is to important to screw up, and your feelings for that earth girl just might get in the way."
Trunks stuttered, and stumbled to find the words. "B-but…I-I know I screwed up, but p-please, let me help. Pan is my…..is a good friend, and I want to make up for this."
"Let him come." Vegita said simply. "A saiyan should prove himself worthy to redeem himself. Consider this his redemption quest."
Piccolo grunted from ahead of them. "If we don't move now, Catastrophe will be far from our galaxy, and he will have the prince within his grasp very, VERY soon."
"Piccolo is right. Let's go." Dryden took off once more. Leading the way to the space craft.
Pan
Footsteps….cold…hard….pain….BIG headache. 'Where am I?' Pan asked herself. Where ever she was, it was very dark. 'Wait….OPEN YOUR EYES IDIOT!!!' a small voice scolded her. 'Shut up, I'm in pain.' She responded…to herself. Slowly, she painfully pried her eyes open. They fluttered for a moment, then closed. She began to blink rapidly, to adjust to the light.
She rolled over, and pushed herself up. She was in what looked to be a dungeon. The freezing stone floor was causing her back to convulse in short shivers from the cold.It wasn't dark, but it wasn't bright either. A dim lamp lit the room. Someone was coming. She could hear the footsteps as…..metal? boots clicked against the rock. Suddenly the dim room was emerged in light as a heavy silver door was thrown open.
A man with red eyes, and a yellow pupil stalked into the room. Stopping two feet from her. His greasy black hair was tied back into a low pony tail. He wore saiyan armor, but not that of Hito-sei as she had been accustomed to. It was black. Totally black, with a blood red spandex. An odd insignia was embroidered over his heart. It was a black dragon, with a golden outline. Saiyan writings surrounded it.
"So you're awake eh?" The mans voice was snide, and low, almost in a husky way.
"Bastard. Where am I?" Pan scurried to her feet and into her fighting stance. Tiger stance. She was ready to take the offensive. 'I'll strike hard, and fast….after I get what I want.'
"My my. A feisty one. Lord Ordox could not have picked a better key."
Pan growled. She charged forward, but for some reason, she could not feel her saiyan strength. "Damit!"
"Now, now, no fighting little minx. You see that collar you're wearing?" He pointed to her neck. Her hand reached up to touch the cool metal. She hadn't even noticed it was there. "It enables us to drain you of your saiyan blood, and since your only a quarter void, it doesn't take much."
"YOU BASTARD!!! LET ME GO! I SWEAR THE ENTIRE HITO ARMY WILL BE HERE SOON!!!!"
The man broke into an evil chortle. "Sure they will. IF they can find us. Our coordinates are completely unknown. Now my dear, the Lord would like to see you."
Rough hands grabbed her bruising her skin since her powers were gone. She struggled to get loose, but only managed to bruise herself even further. A dreaded, cold feeling filled the pit of her stomach. This wasn't good. This wasn't good at all.
Wesley
The young boy cursed as he felt her ki leave the planet. The wind was rushing past him. He flew through a thick cloud, and sneezed. Landing on a deserted island, he pulled out a small compact cell phone like thing. It was silver. Flipping it open, you could see it was totally different from any cell phone. Where there should have been numbers there were odd looking symbols, and where there should have been a screen, there was a small projecter.
He punched in a combination of symbols, and waited. A man with black hair, and emerald green eyes appeared. "Dored, I've lost her."
"DAMIT!" the man slammed his fist against something out of the range of the camera. "What happened?! YOU'RE AN ELITE!!! WHY COULDN'T YOU STOP ONE MEASLY QUARTER?!"
Wesley began to stammer. "Sir….s-she just left sir."
"YOU'RE A TRAINED ELITE, AND A FULL BLOOD!!!!!"
"Wesley's" stare hardened. "I beg your pardon sire, but Pan Son is no ordinary woman. She may only be a quarter saiyan, but the power she possesses is un comprehendable. She can turn super saiyan 3 easily. Not only that but she was also trained by King Vegita to the full extent of her masterina abilities, with Mister Piccolo mentoring her mental training, giving her total domination of anyone on this planet. AND, since she's the key, she was born with gifts no one else has."
"I want her back NOW! And don't you EVER talk to your superior like that again. Go get her."
"Well sir…sorry to say that….she's been taken by catastrophe."
"Korek….damit! If you don't get her back, I WILL come after your head. If you fail, the entire Sorein race will be extinct!"
"Yes sir." Korek flipped the "cell" shut. He sighed. "Well…looks like I'm gonna hafta pull out my old spaceship then."
Pan
Pan's feet burned, and ached like Hell itself. She had been fighting, and resisting the stupid brute for five minutes. But now…she could rest, because they were there. She stood in a huge circular room. Control panels surrounded the room, and in the middle, was a large golden throne with red velvet cusions. The man pushed Pan to the floor in front of the throne.
She fell easily. Inwardly she sneered with disgust at her weakness.
"Well…Koneko…or should I say Panny," before he could finish, she cut him off.
"DON'T CALL ME THAT YOU ASS HOLE!" she got up, and spit at him.
He rubbed the saliva from his face. Pan had wished that her spit would magically turn out to be poisonous. No such luck. "Well, you disrespectful bitch, you are going to learn your lesson. THEN I will get from you what I desire, and maybe…" he looked her up and down, "Maybe, I'll get even more."
"PERVERTED BASTARD!!!" She was about to lunge, but violent hands grabbed her arms, and flung her back into one of the consoles. She let out a painful yelp. Pan sunk to the ground, and began to breathe heavily. She hated this. Hated being weak. 'It's over. It's all over. The universe, the dimension…everything will be gone. Because I failed. Failed to open Trunks' eyes to the truth. I'm a worm…no. I'm lower than that. I don't deserve to be a saiyan. I let everyone and everything down. Eventually, he'll find out what he wants, and it'll be over.'
Once again, she was being dragged over to the wall, but she didn't resist. She was shackled up in the middle of the room. Her feet were inches from the ground. A cracking sound ripped through the air, and a stinging feeling jolted her out of her reverie. She screamed in pain, as she was weak, but the next time the whip hit her back, she didn't scream. She swallowed her pain, and took it like a saiyan. Biting her lip to keep from calling out caused her lip to bleed. The coppery taste filled her mouth in waves. The pain wouldn't end…EVER. This was just the beginning, and the end, was and eternity away.
OOOOOOOOOOOOO
OO hi! I'm back n writing! sorry for my absence, but…well, some things happened, and I found a new hobby for a while! but that didn't work out, so now I'm back into the groove of writing! this chap wasn't as...exciting, but i had to set everyhing up for a BIG clash. hint hint lolz thx to the following ppl for staying with me!
Trupan o...well...maybe i'll end it in a tragedy!
Bura that's nice...but i'm not a t/m fan...n u r...so wut r u doin readin t/p? TT
ladybugg well...i did ok in the competition lolz, glad u liked the last chap...hope u like this one.
C-town Chica if he listened to the dream lady...my story would just be lame lol. glad u liked.
Sorceress Fujin srry for the wait
SSJ5 tigger yea...poor pan. but hey, she needs ta suffer for ma story to work. o.o
Pammy glad u liked la!
Jujubie u think that was sad? wait till the ending comes round lol glad u like it tho
bmrdbgt srry for the wait...yup...trunks is an ass in my story...for now.
RUna hmmm...maybe pan WILL die. what do ya think?
xLilithVeneficAx lolz. hmmm....maybe but wait till you see my twist about Marron!
Coolkitty2 i hope u did good on ur competition bc i did. glad u enjoyed it.
Amy85 yea...depressing story...I LOVE IT! lolz
SSJ5Tigger yea you can add ma story to ur website! glad u even THOUGHT of it.
Serenity Anne glad u like, n dbz is awesome...dbgt...not so much.
SarahCharlotte lolz. it's a cliffy, bc i LOVE cliffy's but this chap isn't a cliffy so....
Trunk-Lover ty happy u like
Godess of SongI can't kill Pan off? well....ok................for now.
soegirl123 ty! glad ya like it that much lolz
lunalady this chap is for u ma friend!
Misty there..no cliff hanger for ya!
Angel V lolz well srry this was a little slow.....glad u like tho! O.O
DarkChildOfTheNite yea! i like dryden to! like ur name btw
Adobo-chan ty! what cha think of my new name?
DragonTears1 glad u think it's a success, but compared to the ancients of ff.net, i suck --
Day Dreamer006 glad u liked that
Vegistie srry this took so long la
RiaChan srry bout makin u cry..... qq
sara ty!
Nedz wow...the best storyu ever read? i'm flattered.
Gen there....no cliff lol
Bittersweet Symphony ty...i'ma gonna check out ur story! most of the good writters are from before my time...wich started last summer OO
T/P-Fan-Forever hmmm how's the whole wesley twist? oO?
SesshomarusGirl123 glad ya liked it dude.
c y'all next time!
Disclaimer: TT You're kidding me. You're actually going to read my disclaimer AGAIN?! sniff sniff must you rub it in?
Chapter Ten: It's Over
Pan
The words struck her hard, and fast. 'Run! RUN YOU MORON!' echoed over and over in her head. But despite her instincts, she couldn't move. Her soul mate, the love of her life had just rejected her with such…almost hating eyes. Finally a loud scream brought her out of her wallowing.
She turned, and ran, but before she could get to the door, a painful streak ran through her neck. She screamed, and the last thing she remembered hearing, was Trunks call her name.
--" Trunks --"
His voice echoed in the hall. It rang true, and clear. Not hiding his fear, or pain…and to some extent guilt. He swallowed. When the smoke had finally cleared, he saw the damage done. The benches were broken, the middle of the roof had caved in, cement blocks lay every where.
"God." His voice came out hoarse. And then he could no longer speak. His throat had clogged up completely.
"DAMMIT!" Vegita yelled. He let out a loud, powerful scream, and turned super saiyan.
Bra let out a small whimper, and buried her head in Goten's chest. Everyone else was in shock. Videl had sank to her knees, and Gohan looked like he had been torn apart. Marron, well, she looked devastated. For certain reasons she'd never admit.
"Pan?" Gohan called quietly. "Pan? PAN?! ANSWER ME YOUNG LADY! PAN! PAAAAAAANNN!!!!!"
"SHUT THE FUCK UP!" Vegita interjected. "SHE'S GONE GOT IT? BECAUSE YOU AND YOUR PUNY BRAINS COULDN'T FIGURE OUT WHAT WAS REALLY HAPPENING!"
Videl whimpered, and tears started to brim her blue eyes. "Gone? Vegita what do you…"
But she was cut off, and the remainder of the church doors swung open. A young man stood by the doorway. Taking in the sight of the church in silent shock. His fiery red hair seemed to flicker gold for a moment, but it returned to normal. His eyes were a strange forest green Trunks had never seen before. Swallowing, he took long powerful strides towards Vegita. He bowed respectfully, and Vegita returned the gesture.
"What happened King Vegita?" his voice was hoarse.
"Dryden!" A slightly high pitched voice called. All heads turned back to the door. A girl with aqua blue hair, that fell to the small of her back, and dark navy blue eyes gasped. "Tell me they….that she…." Her voice caught in her throut.
Vegita bowed in her general direction, and she mindlessy did the same. "They came, they saw, they took." Was all he needed to say.
"SHIT!" Dryden cursed. He ran a hand through his hair.
"What's going on here?" Trunks asked finally.
The girl looked at him with such hate, he had to wince. "YOU!!!!!!" she yelled in rage. A blue/violet hue surrounded her. Her ki rose dramatically, and finally she burst into a metallic blue light. "DIE BASTARD!!!"
"MARABU!" Dryden grabbed onto the back of her gi before she could reach Trunks. "They didn't know. It wasn't their fault….not fully anyways."
"Well? What are we all waiting for?" Piccolo said calmly from his corner in the room. "You came here by ship correct?"
Dryden nodded. "A Blazer 297. The fastest we have."
"How long will it take to get to Hito-sei?" Vegita inquired.
"A m-month." Marabu stuttered.
"Let's go." Vegita powered up, and took flight after Marabu, Dryden, and Piccolo.
Trunks stood silently, for a few moments, then took off after them. He heard Marron protest from behind him, but he couldn't care less. He just couldn't. Pan, his Panny, was in trouble, all because of him. And now, now….he had a chance to save her.
"FATHER!!! WAIT!!!" he called out to them.
The four figures stopped. He quickened his pace so as not to delay them. The girl…Marabu turned. Her cool blue eyes a piercing fiery gaze. Before he could comprehend what was happening, a numbness had evaded his cheek. He turned his head to look at her in shock.
She beat him to speaking. Her voice was cold, and filled to the brim with vengeance. "I do beg your pardon, Prince Trunks, but it is because of you that Koneko is gone, and I will NOT tolerate you coming to her rescue. I do believe she will be busy with her NEW life."
Dryden swallowed. "Your highness, Princess Marabu is simply stating that….well…you are not entitled to this rescue mission. This is to important to screw up, and your feelings for that earth girl just might get in the way."
Trunks stuttered, and stumbled to find the words. "B-but…I-I know I screwed up, but p-please, let me help. Pan is my…..is a good friend, and I want to make up for this."
"Let him come." Vegita said simply. "A saiyan should prove himself worthy to redeem himself. Consider this his redemption quest."
Piccolo grunted from ahead of them. "If we don't move now, Catastrophe will be far from our galaxy, and he will have the prince within his grasp very, VERY soon."
"Piccolo is right. Let's go." Dryden took off once more. Leading the way to the space craft.
Pan
Footsteps….cold…hard….pain….BIG headache. 'Where am I?' Pan asked herself. Where ever she was, it was very dark. 'Wait….OPEN YOUR EYES IDIOT!!!' a small voice scolded her. 'Shut up, I'm in pain.' She responded…to herself. Slowly, she painfully pried her eyes open. They fluttered for a moment, then closed. She began to blink rapidly, to adjust to the light.
She rolled over, and pushed herself up. She was in what looked to be a dungeon. The freezing stone floor was causing her back to convulse in short shivers from the cold.It wasn't dark, but it wasn't bright either. A dim lamp lit the room. Someone was coming. She could hear the footsteps as…..metal? boots clicked against the rock. Suddenly the dim room was emerged in light as a heavy silver door was thrown open.
A man with red eyes, and a yellow pupil stalked into the room. Stopping two feet from her. His greasy black hair was tied back into a low pony tail. He wore saiyan armor, but not that of Hito-sei as she had been accustomed to. It was black. Totally black, with a blood red spandex. An odd insignia was embroidered over his heart. It was a black dragon, with a golden outline. Saiyan writings surrounded it.
"So you're awake eh?" The mans voice was snide, and low, almost in a husky way.
"Bastard. Where am I?" Pan scurried to her feet and into her fighting stance. Tiger stance. She was ready to take the offensive. 'I'll strike hard, and fast….after I get what I want.'
"My my. A feisty one. Lord Ordox could not have picked a better key."
Pan growled. She charged forward, but for some reason, she could not feel her saiyan strength. "Damit!"
"Now, now, no fighting little minx. You see that collar you're wearing?" He pointed to her neck. Her hand reached up to touch the cool metal. She hadn't even noticed it was there. "It enables us to drain you of your saiyan blood, and since your only a quarter void, it doesn't take much."
"YOU BASTARD!!! LET ME GO! I SWEAR THE ENTIRE HITO ARMY WILL BE HERE SOON!!!!"
The man broke into an evil chortle. "Sure they will. IF they can find us. Our coordinates are completely unknown. Now my dear, the Lord would like to see you."
Rough hands grabbed her bruising her skin since her powers were gone. She struggled to get loose, but only managed to bruise herself even further. A dreaded, cold feeling filled the pit of her stomach. This wasn't good. This wasn't good at all.
Wesley
The young boy cursed as he felt her ki leave the planet. The wind was rushing past him. He flew through a thick cloud, and sneezed. Landing on a deserted island, he pulled out a small compact cell phone like thing. It was silver. Flipping it open, you could see it was totally different from any cell phone. Where there should have been numbers there were odd looking symbols, and where there should have been a screen, there was a small projecter.
He punched in a combination of symbols, and waited. A man with black hair, and emerald green eyes appeared. "Dored, I've lost her."
"DAMIT!" the man slammed his fist against something out of the range of the camera. "What happened?! YOU'RE AN ELITE!!! WHY COULDN'T YOU STOP ONE MEASLY QUARTER?!"
Wesley began to stammer. "Sir….s-she just left sir."
"YOU'RE A TRAINED ELITE, AND A FULL BLOOD!!!!!"
"Wesley's" stare hardened. "I beg your pardon sire, but Pan Son is no ordinary woman. She may only be a quarter saiyan, but the power she possesses is un comprehendable. She can turn super saiyan 3 easily. Not only that but she was also trained by King Vegita to the full extent of her masterina abilities, with Mister Piccolo mentoring her mental training, giving her total domination of anyone on this planet. AND, since she's the key, she was born with gifts no one else has."
"I want her back NOW! And don't you EVER talk to your superior like that again. Go get her."
"Well sir…sorry to say that….she's been taken by catastrophe."
"Korek….damit! If you don't get her back, I WILL come after your head. If you fail, the entire Sorein race will be extinct!"
"Yes sir." Korek flipped the "cell" shut. He sighed. "Well…looks like I'm gonna hafta pull out my old spaceship then."
Pan
Pan's feet burned, and ached like Hell itself. She had been fighting, and resisting the stupid brute for five minutes. But now…she could rest, because they were there. She stood in a huge circular room. Control panels surrounded the room, and in the middle, was a large golden throne with red velvet cusions. The man pushed Pan to the floor in front of the throne.
She fell easily. Inwardly she sneered with disgust at her weakness.
"Well…Koneko…or should I say Panny," before he could finish, she cut him off.
"DON'T CALL ME THAT YOU ASS HOLE!" she got up, and spit at him.
He rubbed the saliva from his face. Pan had wished that her spit would magically turn out to be poisonous. No such luck. "Well, you disrespectful bitch, you are going to learn your lesson. THEN I will get from you what I desire, and maybe…" he looked her up and down, "Maybe, I'll get even more."
"PERVERTED BASTARD!!!" She was about to lunge, but violent hands grabbed her arms, and flung her back into one of the consoles. She let out a painful yelp. Pan sunk to the ground, and began to breathe heavily. She hated this. Hated being weak. 'It's over. It's all over. The universe, the dimension…everything will be gone. Because I failed. Failed to open Trunks' eyes to the truth. I'm a worm…no. I'm lower than that. I don't deserve to be a saiyan. I let everyone and everything down. Eventually, he'll find out what he wants, and it'll be over.'
Once again, she was being dragged over to the wall, but she didn't resist. She was shackled up in the middle of the room. Her feet were inches from the ground. A cracking sound ripped through the air, and a stinging feeling jolted her out of her reverie. She screamed in pain, as she was weak, but the next time the whip hit her back, she didn't scream. She swallowed her pain, and took it like a saiyan. Biting her lip to keep from calling out caused her lip to bleed. The coppery taste filled her mouth in waves. The pain wouldn't end…EVER. This was just the beginning, and the end, was and eternity away.
OOOOOOOOOOOOO
OO hi! I'm back n writing! sorry for my absence, but…well, some things happened, and I found a new hobby for a while! but that didn't work out, so now I'm back into the groove of writing! this chap wasn't as...exciting, but i had to set everyhing up for a BIG clash. hint hint lolz thx to the following ppl for staying with me!
Trupan o...well...maybe i'll end it in a tragedy!
Bura that's nice...but i'm not a t/m fan...n u r...so wut r u doin readin t/p? TT
ladybugg well...i did ok in the competition lolz, glad u liked the last chap...hope u like this one.
C-town Chica if he listened to the dream lady...my story would just be lame lol. glad u liked.
Sorceress Fujin srry for the wait
SSJ5 tigger yea...poor pan. but hey, she needs ta suffer for ma story to work. o.o
Pammy glad u liked la!
Jujubie u think that was sad? wait till the ending comes round lol glad u like it tho
bmrdbgt srry for the wait...yup...trunks is an ass in my story...for now.
RUna hmmm...maybe pan WILL die. what do ya think?
xLilithVeneficAx lolz. hmmm....maybe but wait till you see my twist about Marron!
Coolkitty2 i hope u did good on ur competition bc i did. glad u enjoyed it.
Amy85 yea...depressing story...I LOVE IT! lolz
SSJ5Tigger yea you can add ma story to ur website! glad u even THOUGHT of it.
Serenity Anne glad u like, n dbz is awesome...dbgt...not so much.
SarahCharlotte lolz. it's a cliffy, bc i LOVE cliffy's but this chap isn't a cliffy so....
Trunk-Lover ty happy u like
Godess of SongI can't kill Pan off? well....ok................for now.
soegirl123 ty! glad ya like it that much lolz
lunalady this chap is for u ma friend!
Misty there..no cliff hanger for ya!
Angel V lolz well srry this was a little slow.....glad u like tho! O.O
DarkChildOfTheNite yea! i like dryden to! like ur name btw
Adobo-chan ty! what cha think of my new name?
DragonTears1 glad u think it's a success, but compared to the ancients of ff.net, i suck --
Day Dreamer006 glad u liked that
Vegistie srry this took so long la
RiaChan srry bout makin u cry..... qq
sara ty!
Nedz wow...the best storyu ever read? i'm flattered.
Gen there....no cliff lol
Bittersweet Symphony ty...i'ma gonna check out ur story! most of the good writters are from before my time...wich started last summer OO
T/P-Fan-Forever hmmm how's the whole wesley twist? oO?
SesshomarusGirl123 glad ya liked it dude.
c y'all next time!