Kinda strange that people who read the stories can DEMAND you to update but I cant demand 10 reviews for each chapter huh??
You know if readers can spend hours at a time reading stories and authors spend more time typing chapters how come people cant have time to review??? Simple question. If reviewers dont have time to review I guess authors dont have time to update either. Hum.. guess i dont have to worry about this story for a while anymore!
Eh? *Twitch* April (Kurama/Hiei's lovable Miko) your kinda Scarin me! **** Dont send reviews like hers!!!
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sorry i got pissed off but I do want to thank Tessie-fanfic who really caught my attention and won the award of calling me rude and saying i have a great story. Congrats!
Chapter 4
YoU oR Me?
(**) that means what Inuyasha is seeing in his mind.
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Thats when it hit him.
Inuyasha was pushed back by a force and his eyes darkened to black.
*Kagome setting down the rose, her mouth saying words that Inuyasha cant hear*
*It skipped to where Kagome wrapped the vine around her neck and launched off the branch.*
*"Kagome!!!!"*
*Kagome body twitched as the life was sucked from her.*
*"Please gods.....NO!"*
*Inuyasha senced a force behind him and looked. No one was there.*
*SNAP*
*The vine had broke and Kagome lay on the ground unmoving*
*'Please get up'*
*Kagome's eyes finally opened. She stood up and faced him.*
*Her mouth spoke words but none were heard.*
*She took a step towards Inuyasha and then she looked down. Tears fell off her cheeks.*
*Kagome's shook her heard and looked up and continued to head towards him*
*Inuyasha held out his arms to wrap around her*
*"Nani!" Kagome walked right through Inuyasha!*
*"Kagome?" Kagome kept walking.*
*'She can't see or hear me.' Inuyasha understood now. He was having a preminition.*
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Inuyasha's chest heaved for breath.
"Are you alright Inuyasha?" Miroku ran up to Inuyasha.
"Shes here!" Inuyasha yelled desperately.
"What?" Sango looked up from her pain and sorrow.
"Inuyasha quit saying nonsence! Shes gone!"
Inuyasha layed still. 'Then what was that?........Just some stupid thing I imagined out of my own hope.....Hope that she was still here.'
"Your right, Miroku." Inuyasha sighed and stood up and walked away.
To tell you the truth. Miroku wasn't hoping for that answer. Hope against hope he too wished Kagome was back.
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Inuyasha had stayed by the god tree all night. Roses had bloomed around the tree. He remember that roses were Kagome's favorite. He sent was of roses too.
'Roses were never here before.' Inuyasha caressed a rose with two fingers.'
"Kagome...." Inuyasha wispered her name hoping it would bring her back.
He finally relaxed against the trunk of the tree and looked up into the star scattered night.
Thats when he noticed the twisted and broken vine hanging from a branch.
'It can't be!'
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I really dont care what people think about me demanding reviews cause you demand the chapters. You get the Chapters if I get 37 reviews now!
You know if readers can spend hours at a time reading stories and authors spend more time typing chapters how come people cant have time to review??? Simple question. If reviewers dont have time to review I guess authors dont have time to update either. Hum.. guess i dont have to worry about this story for a while anymore!
Eh? *Twitch* April (Kurama/Hiei's lovable Miko) your kinda Scarin me! **** Dont send reviews like hers!!!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
sorry i got pissed off but I do want to thank Tessie-fanfic who really caught my attention and won the award of calling me rude and saying i have a great story. Congrats!
Chapter 4
YoU oR Me?
(**) that means what Inuyasha is seeing in his mind.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Thats when it hit him.
Inuyasha was pushed back by a force and his eyes darkened to black.
*Kagome setting down the rose, her mouth saying words that Inuyasha cant hear*
*It skipped to where Kagome wrapped the vine around her neck and launched off the branch.*
*"Kagome!!!!"*
*Kagome body twitched as the life was sucked from her.*
*"Please gods.....NO!"*
*Inuyasha senced a force behind him and looked. No one was there.*
*SNAP*
*The vine had broke and Kagome lay on the ground unmoving*
*'Please get up'*
*Kagome's eyes finally opened. She stood up and faced him.*
*Her mouth spoke words but none were heard.*
*She took a step towards Inuyasha and then she looked down. Tears fell off her cheeks.*
*Kagome's shook her heard and looked up and continued to head towards him*
*Inuyasha held out his arms to wrap around her*
*"Nani!" Kagome walked right through Inuyasha!*
*"Kagome?" Kagome kept walking.*
*'She can't see or hear me.' Inuyasha understood now. He was having a preminition.*
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Inuyasha's chest heaved for breath.
"Are you alright Inuyasha?" Miroku ran up to Inuyasha.
"Shes here!" Inuyasha yelled desperately.
"What?" Sango looked up from her pain and sorrow.
"Inuyasha quit saying nonsence! Shes gone!"
Inuyasha layed still. 'Then what was that?........Just some stupid thing I imagined out of my own hope.....Hope that she was still here.'
"Your right, Miroku." Inuyasha sighed and stood up and walked away.
To tell you the truth. Miroku wasn't hoping for that answer. Hope against hope he too wished Kagome was back.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Inuyasha had stayed by the god tree all night. Roses had bloomed around the tree. He remember that roses were Kagome's favorite. He sent was of roses too.
'Roses were never here before.' Inuyasha caressed a rose with two fingers.'
"Kagome...." Inuyasha wispered her name hoping it would bring her back.
He finally relaxed against the trunk of the tree and looked up into the star scattered night.
Thats when he noticed the twisted and broken vine hanging from a branch.
'It can't be!'
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I really dont care what people think about me demanding reviews cause you demand the chapters. You get the Chapters if I get 37 reviews now!