Any of you other authors type a story and then reread and get caught up in it that you can't stop reading? It sucks doesn't it?
OK wells this chapter is dedicated to all my reviewers. luv-ya.
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Chapter 6
iM bAcK
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Kagome ran through the forest with amazing and elegant speed. She soon arived in an opening of the forest that seemed to lead to a village. The village that she first set eyes on when she first arrived in this time. Her face stayed emotionless as she proceeded to the village.
Kagome only wondered how the village had progressed....... and the one name...Inuyasha still lived.
The streets where crowed with the villagers working on busy schedules. But every single one of them stopped in there tracks to watch the beauty.
She had only walked around for at lease 15 minutes listening to everyone bicker when she came to the store stands. Many owners offered her jewelry, food, and find cloth, much of what was useless to her. Kagome stumbled upon a mirror and gasped at her own site. She never saw herself once in the Tikai (training area) because no mirrors where held there. The women that stood before her was stunning. She had never realized how much she had change.
'The village must be progressing very much to have mirrors already in the future.' Kagome thought.
She passed the stand and into a crowd. The women admired her and one was even jealous and made crude remark saying that she was a demon who stole men's hearts. Kagome chuckled under her breath. The woman screamed as her foot suddenly caught on fire and rolled around in the dirt trying to get it out.
"Stupid woman deserved a lesson." Kagome chuckled. She soon stopped and realized how horrible she sounded and was ashamed of herself.
"Is there a problem?", an unwelcoming voice reached Kagome's ears. She knew it was a demon in the crowd who was speaking to her. A kitsune to be exact.
She turned to find a very familiar face, He had grown so much that he was a young man now that look around the age of 16 or so. "Sh-," She paused realized the man had no memory of her. "No, what could've given you that idea."
He glared and walked off sayin in a harsh voice, "Im watching you." And with that Shippo dissappeared into the crowd.
Kagome gazed at his back and realized someone else had been watching her too besides the villagers stares. She looked to her left and a woman with a large boomerang seem to disappear when Kagome looked her way.
'I wish I could tell you who I was.' Kagome felt her heart soften as she remember the old time with her friends. The ones she had left behind saying that she would return with Inuyasha.
Kagome turned around and walked away it was only a matter of time till Inuyasha knew someone suspicious had showed up in the village.
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Shippo and Sango watched the beautiful woman turn and walk away from a nearby roof.
"Ever see someone like her, Shippo?"
"No...If I did I would remember."
"She has incredible power. Although I don't think shes a demon."
Shippo stayed silent.
"Did you feel a connection to her, Shippo?"
"Its just, when I was with her..... I felt like I lost someone dear to me.....like a-- nevermind."
"A mother?" A new voice broke in.
"Huh?" The both turned around to find a serious monk in deep thought.
"Uh...yea." Shippo hung his head and stared at his feet.
"Do you know her Miroku?" Sango asked looking the perveted man.
"Me?" Miroku beamed.
"Him!?" Shippo laughed. "He wouldn't have a chance."
Miroku glared at him and turned his head muttering something about, "Stupid kitsune---ruining my moment---"
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Kagome wondered from place to place noticing how much had changed. She walked by a stand and couldn't help over hearing two women speak with each other saying something about, "Young girl---an old well---missing one day----Inuyasha" Kagome stopped in her tracks.
"Excuse me?" Kagome cut in.
The woman stopped and smiled, "May I help you?"
"I'm so sorry to over hear, but can you repeat that?"
"What? Oh...You mean the legend of the angel?"
"Uh... yes." Kagome replied.
"You can believe it or not but I swear the 'Unforgiven Angel' was real! She was in this very town." The other woman came and stood beside the first.
"Maya, be quiet and let me tell the lady the story!" she turned and face Kagome, "Well anyway, there was a young girl who traveled from the future through a legendary well. She released the demon Inuyasha who used to terrorized this village but now protects it.She fell in love with the demon Inuyasha. Her and her friends went on a mission one rainy day and it's said that Inuyasha betrayed her for Kikyo, a former Miko, they came back but the girl never returned. Many people say she abandoned Inuyasha and the her other friend's and went back to the future and Inuyasha never forgived her."
"Others say she died, either way thats why they call her the 'Unforgiven Angel." Maya cut in. "But we're not suppose to talk about it."
Kagome stayed silent. The past can be a pretty painful thing to remember. It came as a surprise that she had become a legend and everyone thinks shes gone
or dead.
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"Huh? A suspicous woman?" Inuyasha asked Shippo.
"And a very beautiful one might I add." Miroku butted in causing him to be slapped by Sango.
"Yea, You might want to check it out." Shippo Ignored Miroku.
"Yeah, whats new?" Inuyasha snorted and jumped off the porch and proceeded through the oncoming crowd.
Inuyasha asked around for the young girl, and being so familiar it wasn't hard to find her. Inuyasha looked her up and down. He couldn't help it but she Was very Beautiful.
Inuyasha watched her leave a stand after saying good bye to a pair of women, and of course he followed.
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Yea its a boring chapter but hey...I updated didn't I? "IM so hoping i dont have school tomorrow!!!!!!!!!!!!"
-Dark-Elmo twiddles her finger and cries- 'I didn't do my homework project for English 3rd hour'
dont forget to R&R
OK wells this chapter is dedicated to all my reviewers. luv-ya.
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Chapter 6
iM bAcK
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Kagome ran through the forest with amazing and elegant speed. She soon arived in an opening of the forest that seemed to lead to a village. The village that she first set eyes on when she first arrived in this time. Her face stayed emotionless as she proceeded to the village.
Kagome only wondered how the village had progressed....... and the one name...Inuyasha still lived.
The streets where crowed with the villagers working on busy schedules. But every single one of them stopped in there tracks to watch the beauty.
She had only walked around for at lease 15 minutes listening to everyone bicker when she came to the store stands. Many owners offered her jewelry, food, and find cloth, much of what was useless to her. Kagome stumbled upon a mirror and gasped at her own site. She never saw herself once in the Tikai (training area) because no mirrors where held there. The women that stood before her was stunning. She had never realized how much she had change.
'The village must be progressing very much to have mirrors already in the future.' Kagome thought.
She passed the stand and into a crowd. The women admired her and one was even jealous and made crude remark saying that she was a demon who stole men's hearts. Kagome chuckled under her breath. The woman screamed as her foot suddenly caught on fire and rolled around in the dirt trying to get it out.
"Stupid woman deserved a lesson." Kagome chuckled. She soon stopped and realized how horrible she sounded and was ashamed of herself.
"Is there a problem?", an unwelcoming voice reached Kagome's ears. She knew it was a demon in the crowd who was speaking to her. A kitsune to be exact.
She turned to find a very familiar face, He had grown so much that he was a young man now that look around the age of 16 or so. "Sh-," She paused realized the man had no memory of her. "No, what could've given you that idea."
He glared and walked off sayin in a harsh voice, "Im watching you." And with that Shippo dissappeared into the crowd.
Kagome gazed at his back and realized someone else had been watching her too besides the villagers stares. She looked to her left and a woman with a large boomerang seem to disappear when Kagome looked her way.
'I wish I could tell you who I was.' Kagome felt her heart soften as she remember the old time with her friends. The ones she had left behind saying that she would return with Inuyasha.
Kagome turned around and walked away it was only a matter of time till Inuyasha knew someone suspicious had showed up in the village.
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Shippo and Sango watched the beautiful woman turn and walk away from a nearby roof.
"Ever see someone like her, Shippo?"
"No...If I did I would remember."
"She has incredible power. Although I don't think shes a demon."
Shippo stayed silent.
"Did you feel a connection to her, Shippo?"
"Its just, when I was with her..... I felt like I lost someone dear to me.....like a-- nevermind."
"A mother?" A new voice broke in.
"Huh?" The both turned around to find a serious monk in deep thought.
"Uh...yea." Shippo hung his head and stared at his feet.
"Do you know her Miroku?" Sango asked looking the perveted man.
"Me?" Miroku beamed.
"Him!?" Shippo laughed. "He wouldn't have a chance."
Miroku glared at him and turned his head muttering something about, "Stupid kitsune---ruining my moment---"
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Kagome wondered from place to place noticing how much had changed. She walked by a stand and couldn't help over hearing two women speak with each other saying something about, "Young girl---an old well---missing one day----Inuyasha" Kagome stopped in her tracks.
"Excuse me?" Kagome cut in.
The woman stopped and smiled, "May I help you?"
"I'm so sorry to over hear, but can you repeat that?"
"What? Oh...You mean the legend of the angel?"
"Uh... yes." Kagome replied.
"You can believe it or not but I swear the 'Unforgiven Angel' was real! She was in this very town." The other woman came and stood beside the first.
"Maya, be quiet and let me tell the lady the story!" she turned and face Kagome, "Well anyway, there was a young girl who traveled from the future through a legendary well. She released the demon Inuyasha who used to terrorized this village but now protects it.She fell in love with the demon Inuyasha. Her and her friends went on a mission one rainy day and it's said that Inuyasha betrayed her for Kikyo, a former Miko, they came back but the girl never returned. Many people say she abandoned Inuyasha and the her other friend's and went back to the future and Inuyasha never forgived her."
"Others say she died, either way thats why they call her the 'Unforgiven Angel." Maya cut in. "But we're not suppose to talk about it."
Kagome stayed silent. The past can be a pretty painful thing to remember. It came as a surprise that she had become a legend and everyone thinks shes gone
or dead.
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"Huh? A suspicous woman?" Inuyasha asked Shippo.
"And a very beautiful one might I add." Miroku butted in causing him to be slapped by Sango.
"Yea, You might want to check it out." Shippo Ignored Miroku.
"Yeah, whats new?" Inuyasha snorted and jumped off the porch and proceeded through the oncoming crowd.
Inuyasha asked around for the young girl, and being so familiar it wasn't hard to find her. Inuyasha looked her up and down. He couldn't help it but she Was very Beautiful.
Inuyasha watched her leave a stand after saying good bye to a pair of women, and of course he followed.
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Yea its a boring chapter but hey...I updated didn't I? "IM so hoping i dont have school tomorrow!!!!!!!!!!!!"
-Dark-Elmo twiddles her finger and cries- 'I didn't do my homework project for English 3rd hour'
dont forget to R&R