Yay! I love my reviewers! Im so glad you guys like my writing! My friend was flamed for no reason By someone who didnt even have the guts to sign in. It was a very harsh review and if i knew who it was I would crash their computer! I have my ways. Hum.. lets see if i can find it.....hold on....
Ahhhh! found it!
Reviewer name: 0 Anonymous javascript:alert('review id: 18839198') it's no wonder you have to beg for reviews. this chapter sucks. everythin was okay till chapter seven. do a better job on the next one loser. Ony losers asl for reviews or in your case beg. i don't waste my time i will say this about a new life new love and new powers stop continuing it. very lame and vry pathic. again, it suts you and your cowriter the loser. your much beter writer i will admit that, but then you steel other people's work not to mention ideas.
Kinda pathetic the baka didnt even sign in not to mention that she needs a Major spell check! Now you see that if I can get 1 link to her/his computer I'd crash it! That was really uncalled for and my friend was so pissed and hurt she started crying. Shes only 16 days older than me but im still the big sis. You'd probably notice her stories are yu yu/ inu like mine but shes into x-men and im not! She's also a better writer than I am. If it wasnt for her I wouldn't even have an account on fanfic.net. Sorry I had to get all that out! Well heres the story! Have fun.
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Chapter 7 ....right?
'...title....title...title .......whats the title?'
wHo ArE yOu?
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Inuyasha followed the woman halfway across the village until she stopped. Inuyasha hesitated then stepped forward.
"Hey?" Inuyasha asked in a monotone.
"Why do you keep following me?"
"Following you?"
"You know you were following me. Why?"
"Cause you look suspicious."
"You always went after the supicious ones didn't you." Kagome wanted to shove her fist in her mouth. 'Baka!'
"Excuse me?" Inuyasha watched the woman standing in front of him. She seemed a bit agitated, "Do I know you?"
Kagome frowned. 'You did once.'
"No, we have never met." was her reply. Kagome turned to leave but Inuyasha grabbed her wrist. She looked into his eyes. They seemed to be searching for something almost pleading to know the truth.
"Let go."
"No." Inuyasha knew there was something about this woman he had to know. "Who are you?"
"Inuyasha!SI-----" Kagome was shocked. 'I didnt?' Kagome made Inuyasha's hand burst into flames for her escape and a distraction.
"AACCKKKK!" Inuyasha shook his hand in the air till he put out the flames, but when he looked up the woman was already gone, rose petals remaining where she stood.
''What did she say." Inuyasha stared at his hand he touched her with.
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Inuyasha entered the hut where Miroku, Sango, Shippo, and Kikyo were all gathered around a fire.
"Did you find her." Shippo stood.
"Yes." Inuyasha walked over to Kikyo and sat down.
"Then where is she?" Shippo ran to the door and looked outside.
"She got away." Inuyasha stared into the fire and remember the girl that turned his hand into flames.
"Got away?" Sango shook her head, "We would've had a better chance if we had Miroku trying to find her."
Miroku smirked, "So where did she go?"
"God! Can't you guys just shut up? An ordinary woman comes to the village and you cant shut up about her!" Inuyasha yelled.
"Shes far from ordinary, Inuyasha." It was Kikyo who cut in, She hesistated before going on, "I could sence her from here."
Kikyo stood up."I'm going outside." and she disappeared. Kikyo knew something the group didn't.
'Not only could I since her but......the jewel shards too..........Could it possibly be the...'Unforgiven Angel'?' Kikyo sighed. 'She's as stubborn as I am.'
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Kagome ran as far away from Inuyasha until she thought it was safe. A flyer which was surrounded by people caught her eye and she slowed to a stop.
BATTLE ROYAL! TOMORROW MORNING! BATTLE FOR THE BRAVEST HUMANS AND DEMONS! TO PARTICEPATE YOU MUST BE 16 YEARS OF AGE AND BRING YOU OWN WEAPONS. A HINT TO WIN IS TO STAY ALIVE! REWARD IS 100,000,000 GOLD VALUE TOKADOE!'
Kagome stared at the poster. 'How Stupid can they get? Why would you want to lose you life for some pety money?'
Some of the villagers seemed quit interested, "So are you gonna be in it, Sajoiro?"
"Me!? No way, not if that Inuyasha guy is competeing! He'll tear me to shred."
"Oh you wimp!" The other man just laughed.
'Inuyasha competing? This might be a little fun after all." And with that Kagome walked into the woods to rest for the big battle that She would win.
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Kagome woke up with the sun nipping at her eyes. She got up and a pair of white clothing, that appeared out of air, and headed towards the springs.
"Yasashii! A real bath finally!" Kagome checked the surroundings with her power for any unwelcomed visitors before getting undressed and sinking into the hot-steaming water. (((Now i Want a Bath)))
Finishing up she slipped into a thin silk Kimono top with no sleeves and a pair of short shorts, so it would be easier to move in. And headed off to the battle palace.
It seemed forever until she reached the top of the 2,000 steps of stairs where the competeters gathered to sign up. Many of the men turned around laughed others whistle and yelled. Kagome continued to the front table.
"May I help you, Miss?" A skinny man with glasses asked.
"Yes, Im competeting in this battle."
The man laughed, "You can't....you just a woman."
Kagome grabbed the man's throat and slammed his face into the table, "What was that I didn't quit here you?" Kagome asked nicely.
"Your number 63." The man muffled through the table.
"Thank you!" Kagome turned and left to check if Inuyasha had showed up.
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Okay thats it for today! You guys better hurry up and reveiw as fast as you can cause chapter 8 is already done!
Kikyo is the only one that knows Kagome is back. But why won't she tell the others? And Will Kagome actually make it to the finals to fight Inuyasha? Find out on the next chapter of 'Unforgiven Angel'!
Ahhhh! found it!
Reviewer name: 0 Anonymous javascript:alert('review id: 18839198') it's no wonder you have to beg for reviews. this chapter sucks. everythin was okay till chapter seven. do a better job on the next one loser. Ony losers asl for reviews or in your case beg. i don't waste my time i will say this about a new life new love and new powers stop continuing it. very lame and vry pathic. again, it suts you and your cowriter the loser. your much beter writer i will admit that, but then you steel other people's work not to mention ideas.
Kinda pathetic the baka didnt even sign in not to mention that she needs a Major spell check! Now you see that if I can get 1 link to her/his computer I'd crash it! That was really uncalled for and my friend was so pissed and hurt she started crying. Shes only 16 days older than me but im still the big sis. You'd probably notice her stories are yu yu/ inu like mine but shes into x-men and im not! She's also a better writer than I am. If it wasnt for her I wouldn't even have an account on fanfic.net. Sorry I had to get all that out! Well heres the story! Have fun.
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Chapter 7 ....right?
'...title....title...title .......whats the title?'
wHo ArE yOu?
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Inuyasha followed the woman halfway across the village until she stopped. Inuyasha hesitated then stepped forward.
"Hey?" Inuyasha asked in a monotone.
"Why do you keep following me?"
"Following you?"
"You know you were following me. Why?"
"Cause you look suspicious."
"You always went after the supicious ones didn't you." Kagome wanted to shove her fist in her mouth. 'Baka!'
"Excuse me?" Inuyasha watched the woman standing in front of him. She seemed a bit agitated, "Do I know you?"
Kagome frowned. 'You did once.'
"No, we have never met." was her reply. Kagome turned to leave but Inuyasha grabbed her wrist. She looked into his eyes. They seemed to be searching for something almost pleading to know the truth.
"Let go."
"No." Inuyasha knew there was something about this woman he had to know. "Who are you?"
"Inuyasha!SI-----" Kagome was shocked. 'I didnt?' Kagome made Inuyasha's hand burst into flames for her escape and a distraction.
"AACCKKKK!" Inuyasha shook his hand in the air till he put out the flames, but when he looked up the woman was already gone, rose petals remaining where she stood.
''What did she say." Inuyasha stared at his hand he touched her with.
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Inuyasha entered the hut where Miroku, Sango, Shippo, and Kikyo were all gathered around a fire.
"Did you find her." Shippo stood.
"Yes." Inuyasha walked over to Kikyo and sat down.
"Then where is she?" Shippo ran to the door and looked outside.
"She got away." Inuyasha stared into the fire and remember the girl that turned his hand into flames.
"Got away?" Sango shook her head, "We would've had a better chance if we had Miroku trying to find her."
Miroku smirked, "So where did she go?"
"God! Can't you guys just shut up? An ordinary woman comes to the village and you cant shut up about her!" Inuyasha yelled.
"Shes far from ordinary, Inuyasha." It was Kikyo who cut in, She hesistated before going on, "I could sence her from here."
Kikyo stood up."I'm going outside." and she disappeared. Kikyo knew something the group didn't.
'Not only could I since her but......the jewel shards too..........Could it possibly be the...'Unforgiven Angel'?' Kikyo sighed. 'She's as stubborn as I am.'
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Kagome ran as far away from Inuyasha until she thought it was safe. A flyer which was surrounded by people caught her eye and she slowed to a stop.
BATTLE ROYAL! TOMORROW MORNING! BATTLE FOR THE BRAVEST HUMANS AND DEMONS! TO PARTICEPATE YOU MUST BE 16 YEARS OF AGE AND BRING YOU OWN WEAPONS. A HINT TO WIN IS TO STAY ALIVE! REWARD IS 100,000,000 GOLD VALUE TOKADOE!'
Kagome stared at the poster. 'How Stupid can they get? Why would you want to lose you life for some pety money?'
Some of the villagers seemed quit interested, "So are you gonna be in it, Sajoiro?"
"Me!? No way, not if that Inuyasha guy is competeing! He'll tear me to shred."
"Oh you wimp!" The other man just laughed.
'Inuyasha competing? This might be a little fun after all." And with that Kagome walked into the woods to rest for the big battle that She would win.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~MORNING~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Kagome woke up with the sun nipping at her eyes. She got up and a pair of white clothing, that appeared out of air, and headed towards the springs.
"Yasashii! A real bath finally!" Kagome checked the surroundings with her power for any unwelcomed visitors before getting undressed and sinking into the hot-steaming water. (((Now i Want a Bath)))
Finishing up she slipped into a thin silk Kimono top with no sleeves and a pair of short shorts, so it would be easier to move in. And headed off to the battle palace.
It seemed forever until she reached the top of the 2,000 steps of stairs where the competeters gathered to sign up. Many of the men turned around laughed others whistle and yelled. Kagome continued to the front table.
"May I help you, Miss?" A skinny man with glasses asked.
"Yes, Im competeting in this battle."
The man laughed, "You can't....you just a woman."
Kagome grabbed the man's throat and slammed his face into the table, "What was that I didn't quit here you?" Kagome asked nicely.
"Your number 63." The man muffled through the table.
"Thank you!" Kagome turned and left to check if Inuyasha had showed up.
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Okay thats it for today! You guys better hurry up and reveiw as fast as you can cause chapter 8 is already done!
Kikyo is the only one that knows Kagome is back. But why won't she tell the others? And Will Kagome actually make it to the finals to fight Inuyasha? Find out on the next chapter of 'Unforgiven Angel'!