-Shakes head- ''sorry!'' I sort of rushed on Chapter 4....'' I wished I could have done it much better but the past is the past. I only wished that I could understand the realities of romance. Unfortunately, I over did it in Chapter 4. I added in too much humor and I rushed how Keitaro would feel about the girls, and I only focus on Motoko… just because she's my favorite character, doesn't give me the right, to just focus on her and Naru. I deeply apologize… For I am just a wandering writer to be just as good as other Love Hina writers out there…. Geez… I'm such an idiot… I don't have any patience as a writer. Well here is Chapter 5, enjoy.
Disclaimer: I do not own Love Hina, sadly.
The Mysteries that Lies Ahead of Us….
As the sunset sank into the ocean like a sunken ship, a woman with brown long hair stood on the beach with a face of a crying child. Her tears slowly ran down her blushed cheeks with her nose tinted as red. The sounds of her tears dripped down to the soft white sand; the wind was howling at her, brushing her tears away, trying to drift off to the setting sun.
The man in front of her frowned but still had friendly eyes. His soft hair blew into the wind, also. Their eyes met showing how strong their love was. The woman smiled with the tears still forming, ''I wish we could go somewhere far so we can be lost before dawn.''
The man smirked, ''than your wish can come true…. Because I….,'' he smiled once more with a little red on his face. The woman smiled, she knew what he was about to say, ''I love you too, you were my first love.'' She turned trying to avoid the face staring at her, ''But I still… feel some other type of feelings for someone else.'' I yearn both of you… but I couldn't…''
The woman stayed silent, unsure of neither what to say nor what to do. She felt two arms wrapped around her and a body covering behind her back, the man's head came closer towards her ear, ''I would never give you up… had he ever held you like this?'' Had he ever whispered to you, I love you, even once?'' The woman shook her head to give him the answer, ''No… he hasn't but still….'' The man let go and met with her eyes once more.
''Narusagawa… I love you.''
Keitaro awoken with fear left in his head, ''Where's that bastard?'' I'll rip his freaking head off….if he's going to touch her one more time I will beat the shit out of him!!'' Keitaro's fists tighten with red, ''that bastard… That bastard…'' His fist slammed to the wall, causing a massive hole inside. His fist was bleeding from the attack, but Keitaro acted like it was nothing.
''THAT FREAKING SON OF A BITCH… RRRAAGGHH!!!!'' His voice almost woken the whole Hinata Dorm but it was only 3:00 in the morning, so no one bother to see what it was. 'I'll get that freaking bastard!'' I'll kick his ass…'' Keitaro growled and his face darkens from pure anger and from pure anguish. His fist still bleed, but it didn't hurt as much as he felt now. He felt like killing someone… literally.
He sighed, trying to relax and calm his red aura. He didn't know how violent he could be, but what was to blame was jealousy, which signals how much he felt for the one person he desperately wants to be with. He sighed once more, looking through the black sky with stars slowly disappearing.
Keitaro's whole body was covered in a sea of sweat from the incredible intensity the dream had given him. He smirked with sarcasticness, ''Naru….sagawa.'' it's been two weeks now… another two will end this.'' His eyes slowly came back with the friendliness shown, ''Baka… what the heck happen to me… Why do I feel..,'' he paused, ''Love hurts like the blade being use on your heart, endlessly stabbing it.'' He was glad that his body seemed stronger but he was disappointed that his heart was turning darker. ''He's more handsome than me,'' muttered Keitaro, ''much smarter,'' he paused, ''and… the perfect guy to be with.'' He has great deal money, too.'' Keitaro smirk came down to a pitiful look along with a long sigh.
''You don't understand… I love you, Narusagawa… I love you…'' His eyes tighten with seriousness. ''I love you more than anyone else.''
Motoko was staring at Keitaro's room; it was too bad he didn't know that she wakes up at 3:45 to do her training. And it was too bad that she heard all of Keitaro's sins, clearly. She gave a short sigh, ''Baka.''
As she did kendo, she couldn't concentrate on one of her techniques. Her mind was set on Urashima. A daydream came to her mind, ''Oh Keitaro, do you really love me?'' Keitaro grabbed Naru's hand, ''Of course… Let's get married right away!'' Naru's eyes watered, ''Please… Take me now… right here…'' Keitaro smirked, '' Heh… Okay!''
Motoko's eye twitched in total disgust, and she sped up her kendo, with each word she gave under her light breath, ''BAKA!'' ''HENTAI!'' ''CHIMI!'' She continued her insults feeling the burning aura in her stomach.
Everyone gathered around the dinner table, with a light smile, of Shinobu's delicious cooking. Keitaro sat across from Motoko which made Naru a little intense. Shinobu stared at Naru hoping she wouldn't do anything stupid and Kitsune was waiting for Naru to make the move. Su… well erm… she didn't count…, since she was drooling all over her food. To make a simple point, everyone was uneasy, hoping that one of the two rivals could have at least chatted with Keitaro.
Naru couldn't just seduce Keitaro, with one of Kitsune's techniques, so tried to act like her normal self, except nicer. ''So Keitaro, I heard you didn't do anything perverted, while I was gone, I'm really proud of you!''
Kitsune slapped her head, ''Smooth move Naru… yeah sure nicer!'' she thought. She tried to motion Naru to say something better.
Keitaro frowned, ''and why would you care?'' Why can't you just butt out and let me be?'' His frowned turned into a smirk, ''besides how would you know?'' I enjoyed myself for the past month.''
Naru's eye began to twitch and her thoughts repeated, ''don't get mad, don't get angry, have patience….''
Kitsune sighed and thought, ''for once, why can't she stop having her temper taking over her?''
Shinobu grinned while eating but she thought, ''Come on Motoko… Keitaro needs your comfort!'' I mean try to seduce him or…''
Su only focused on the food in front of her, ''Why isn't anyone eating?'' Yum this is good!''
Keitaro left a calm face and thought, ''Looks like the gorilla looking angry… did I just call Naru a gorilla?'' Hahahaha now it makes sense… Once you look at her attitude.'' And cow seems to be quite… Let me pick on her…''
Keitaro was about to start the conversation, until, Keitaro's hand and Motoko's hand reached the soy sauce at the same time. Keitaro let out a soft gasp and Motoko did the same, she swiftly grabbed the soy sauce, ''don't touch me!'' Motoko growled, but you could still see the little blush left on her face.
When the dark side of Keitaro saw that, he immediately took his chance, ''Toko- chan… You don't like it when I make direct skin contact?''
Naru started to get angry, ''what the hell is he doing?'' thought Naru.
Motoko started to blush with anger, ''what are you pointing out, Urashima?''
Keitaro gave a sly grin, ''you sure were pretty good… after Narusagawa left.''
Motoko blushed, ''what are you talking about?!''
Keitaro laughed, ''Come on you don't remember?'' I remember… the heat, the intensity, the moisture of our wonderful battle of----''
Naru burst with total fury, ''WHAT?!'' ''YOU SICK… HOW COULD YOU?'' YOU TOOK MOTOKO'S VI--
''Kendo,'' continued Keitaro, ''And yes I took her victory, Naru.'' or were you going to say something, I thought you had in mind?'' Keitaro smirked.
''Thank you for this wonderful morning breakfast, Shinobu,'' Motoko couldn't help but see the two lovers battle it out. ''This is ridiculous…,'' thought Motoko.
Motoko began to go to her room to just lie down, as soon as her back landed on her pillow, she felt something odd. She turned around to see what the mysterious object was, and looked carefully. It looked like a walkie talkie except it was in yellow and it was made by no other than Su, since the three eyes had been place.
In the back was something small stick to it, telling what it was. This invention is made by Su. Please do not overload the mind- control device by using on a person awake. It is best you use it when someone's sleeping. To put it on the victim, wrap around the invention around the victim's neck, than use the control to control whatever movements you desire. Warning: Victim might realize what ever you're doing to he or she so be careful and have fun!
Motoko blinked, ''Curse you Su!'' Motoko ran into Su's room, ''what did you do to me last night?'' Su looked over her shoulders, ''huh?'' I did nothing!''
''Oh really?'' growled Motoko, ''than what's this?!'' She pulled out the device and showed it to Su.
''Oh… that?'' Shinobu said she wanted to borrow it!'' For some reason…''
Motoko's eyes widened, ''what?'' Shinobu wouldn't do anything, so absurd!'' Would she?''
Su gave a confused look, ''Motoko… is there something wrong with Keitaro, he always dodge my attacks!'' It's no fun!''
Motoko stayed silent for a moment, ''don't care about that pervert Su, or else you will end up having his contagious stupidity.'' She left the room, with nothing else to say.
Kitsune checked on Naru who seemed to be way too determined, ''Uh… Naru?''
Chibi eyes started to take over Naru, ''this isn't working out… I'll just let him do whatever!'' Besides… it's not like I actually love the pervert… It's just that he's like a best guy friend I ever had!''
Kitsune smiled, ''How cute… but you're being too soft Naru… Just act like your regular self… do not worry about him… I'll figure something out!''
Naru's back stiffened with surprise, ''Yeah… you do that…''
Motoko went up the balcony for some time for herself. She quietly landed on the rooftop to see the magnificent view. She began to feel satisfy with her moment, until she saw Keitaro who was also up there, looking towards the horizon.
Disappointment was deeply shown on Motoko's face, until Keitaro turned, sensing her aura. ''Yo, Toko!''
''I prefer Motoko, Urashima.'' growled Motoko.
Keitaro stood, and looked into Motoko's eyes; he came closer signaling that something was going on. His eyes met with hers, the gentleness came upon his face, Motoko awkwardly moved in a short distance but she was near the edge of the rooftop.
One of his hands glided to Motoko's face and the other went under her chin, forcing her to look at his eyes. She froze, unsure of what to do. She closed her eyes and tried not to struggle to move since she was on the edge of the roof. She had no choice; she felt the heat of Urashima's breath. She closed her eyes even tighter waiting for the obvious event.
Keitaro's head slowly backed off and his hands slowly went to Motoko's cheek. Her eyes slightly open to see why he was taking so long, but there was only a sly grin on his face. His hand started to pull Motoko's cheeks apart, showing her teeth.
Keitaro let go, leaving Motoko, dumbfounded. He laughed, ''there, I don't see that stubborn face of yours, Toko!'' Motoko was still dumbfounded but she listened. She was about to send Keitaro to Okinawa; but what caught her eye, was he bandages wrapped around his left fist. Now she knew the ruckus that was caused in the early morning. She sighed, leaving with no words after the prank. Keitaro was also left dumbfounded, but he decided to speak, ''Oi!'' what's the matter with you cow?'' Did ya really want it that bad?''
Motoko did not turned around. Keitaro was starting to get piss, so he ran after her.
Keitaro caught up with Motoko and grabbed her by the shoulder, her hand slapped the flesh which touch her, and turned. Keitaro's reaction was caught by surprise, so his foot slipped off the roof.
''No…!'' Keitaro' voice echoed, ''not now!'' But as he fell he saw the little balls of silver tears forming inside of Motoko's eyes. The eyes he recognized as he flew to Sendai… ''the crying eyes of the kendo girl for whom he hurt.'' He let out a deep gasp.
Motoko dropped down her hand trying to reach for Keitaro… they suddenly met but it was slipped and there were no grip for Keitaro.
As he fell, he felt sharp pain, everywhere, especially in his heart. When he finally met earth's gravity, it turned black. Darkness surrounded him, once more. Feeling the same intense pain. All he heard were voices that slowly faded little by little….
How was Chapter 5? Hahaha… I would like to thank you all who reviewed all my chapters! You guys are the greatest! Anyways.. Just to let you know, Keitaro didn't die! He's immortal! I think we all know that! Well it's time to sleep.. See ya guys, I mean Ja Ne!
