I don't own Lord of the Rings, ect. :)
Please tell me if this is any good (or just downright horrible)!
Note: - is just because QuickEdit will not allow a break between stanzas otherwise.
You, Only You Hold the Key
Wind blown hair
Long and fair,
Eyes of blue
And heart so true,
How long will you stay in the darkness?
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Silent tears,
Secret fears,
Weighted heart
Of one apart,
How long will you lay in the shadows?
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I wait for you,
My beautiful bird.
Come out of your cage
And start a new page.
Just say the word
And I'll find you.
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But finally see
It's not up to me
To set this bird free.
I would if I could,
And I would if I should.
But only the bird
Can fly out of the tree.
And so it's the same with we.
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You, only you hold the key.
Well? Good or bad? Please tell me! I'd rather not suffer from delusions and keep writing poetry even though I have no talent whatsoever!
Thanks ahead of time!
