I don't own Lord of the Rings, ect. :)

Please tell me if this is any good (or just downright horrible)!

Note: - is just because QuickEdit will not allow a break between stanzas otherwise.


You, Only You Hold the Key

Wind blown hair

Long and fair,

Eyes of blue

And heart so true,

How long will you stay in the darkness?

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Silent tears,

Secret fears,

Weighted heart

Of one apart,

How long will you lay in the shadows?

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I wait for you,

My beautiful bird.

Come out of your cage

And start a new page.

Just say the word

And I'll find you.

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But finally see

It's not up to me

To set this bird free.

I would if I could,

And I would if I should.

But only the bird

Can fly out of the tree.

And so it's the same with we.

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You, only you hold the key.


Well? Good or bad? Please tell me! I'd rather not suffer from delusions and keep writing poetry even though I have no talent whatsoever!

Thanks ahead of time!