In the dark Chamber

If I own anything, it will be the poorly written paragraphs below, regretfully, not any of the characters that appeared in JKRolling's books.

The Riddle boy

Life is not easy for anyone, no matter good or evil. Whatever your destination, you have to fight every threat of the future posed by those around you, and further more, the powerful obstacles laid somewhere ahead by masses of people out in the world holding different opinions. Consequently, those who have fought their way to the great God or to great devils all have some merits like shrewd mind, quick judgment, bravery etc. And even the field where these goodness or evil was cultivated, have differences in some cases.

As in the case of Tom Riddle, the merits were far more obvious than hatred and cruelty possessed by him. Born poor and an orphan, brought up in an unfriendly muggle orphanage without knowing of his magic until getting the letter at the age of ten, he gained achievements that surpassed, at the same time, stunned everyone as soon as he entered the wizarding world, and earned him the title of the most outstanding student ever enrolled by Hogwarts. So, clever and handsome and always with a manner of sincere responsibility, he was adored and respected by students and teachers alike. Few people know the will and power hidden under the mask of the perfect boy, which was to help him towards his final goal---the erasion of the mudbloods and the throne of the world.

The initial form of the goal, which came into his mind almost as soon as he learnt that he was the last hire of Slytherin and the expectations the great wizard had had on his hire, was just an obscure intention to reset his purpose of life, which paved the way for his hatred towards one muggle to spread to all muggles and mudbloods.

So there he was, hiding under the disguise of a perfect student, brooding his will and power of evil, which truly take its roots in his soul in the years ahead.

A/N Ah, first chapter! What do you think? Smell something Asian? Well that's my way of writing. This one is short, but it's part of my brief introduction. Next chapter, we'll be with Ginny. It's really hard work for me, because my English is so poor that I kept wondering if I used the proper words, if the grammar is correct, etc. This is my very first fic about HP, and the first in English. I write it with utmost caution, and really want to finish it though it maybe quite long. If you have any advice about the story or about my English language, I'm can't wait to see your review. I'll update very soon.