Please reply and say what you think of our twisted screwed up version of "The calling" (Say you like it or feck off) this great story is by Becca and Jennie and it's our first one so like it!

THE BIG PEAR

Everyone was chatting amongst themselves, about something to do with monkeys and condoms when Hunter shouted

"We're here. Woopy dee woop." Bree looked out the window and had a really confused look on her face

"I thought we were going to the big apple, not New York."

"Same thing dumbass," Raven said.

"Doesn't look like an apple. More like a pear. Look!!!" She pointed at a big building.

Robbie taped her on the back. "Honey, that's the pear factory which, funnily enough, doesn't make it the big pear."

"Whatever, I still don't think it looks like an apple." said Bree with annoyance.

"BECAUSE ITS NOT AN APPLE IT'S A CITY!" everyone shouted.

"Wow, a city in an apple, that's so nifty!" We all gave up. We got out the car and went to the boot of the car to get our stuff out. We were staying in Bree's fathers flat. Hunter almost fainted when he saw what was inside.

"Howdy all!" my little sister said with a grin, half climbing half falling out the boot.

"What are you doing here?" I inquired, it's a little odd her being here isn't it? Especially in the boot.

"Oh I was bored so I thought I would play hide and seek with my friend Bob-chuck and it was my turn to hide and I decided it would be a really neat idea to hide in your boot with all my stuff when I knew that bob-chuck is imaginary so he couldn't open the truck and that you and all you guys were going to New York. I also told mum you said I could go just incase." She smiled sweetly.

"Ok then" I smiled at least this was normal. "Emm, Mary K, where's all our stuff we had at least six suit cases in here and they weren't pink." I said while holding up one of Mary Ks many bags she had in the boot.

"O them, they were digging into my side so I chucked them on the highway." I moved Mary K as Sky and Raven lunged at her trying to strangle her.

"Maybe we should go shopping and get some cloths and stuff" Bree suggested "I'll pay I've got lots and lots and lots of money, I'm rich!!"

"Oh no, it's fine Bree" Hunter began "I'm sure we could just...Ow!" Raven elbowed him in the stomach.

"Yes thanks that would be great. How much money do you actually have? Can I have the most because all my stuff will cost more?"

"Sure, I mean at our house we have money fights and chuck it out the window. So it's not like were short."

"Thanks Bree" I said "At least we don't have to buy Mary K stuff."

Well actually, I kinda had to throw one of my suitcases out, and that's the only one with clothes in it."

"Then what the hell have you got in these ones then?" Hunter asked.

"TOOTHBRUSHES!!!" My sister and her toothbrushes, and yet her teeth are still yellow. What the hell does she do with them all?

"Ok guess where going shopping!" Sky said while grins appeared on all the girls faces while Hunter and Robbie groaned.