Thanks for the reviews; Internuts: sorry I didn't day this in the last story. I sent in #7 before I read the reviews, to answer your first, I have started three stories already that take place before Misfits and lead on, Toad Chronicles, Spider-Kid (Comic-Spider-man) and Frog-Man (Comics-Spider-man). I will also watch my punctuation if it really becomes needed. Final answer: My Brother (Raven354) reads my stories usually before I submit them.
"That's right people run!" Ace was screaming to all the people below him. He was standing on a Pile of huge cars shooting things with some guns that he probably stole.
And where are our heroes you might ask?
"There is no way in hell I'm going out there." Frog-man screamed to his fellow comrades as they sat down behind a flipped over car.
Toad started to make a white flag and attach it to an antenna that came of a car nearby. "Where the heck our the other heroes?" Spider-kid screamed. "Where in New York, I can think of at least a hundred superheroes out there."
"Hey look." Frog-man pointed up in the air. "Its a bird, no its a plane, no, its its its…"
"Damn it! Its Iron Man." Todd yelled as he raised his flag into the air.
Misfits#8
True Hero
By: Riddler Kid
Ace saw the armour clad hero come from the sky; he jumped onto his bike and drove off at full speed. Ace was scared stiff because he never liked fighting Heroes like Iron Man, and when his "Spider-Sense" rings he knows he's not gonna win.
Iron man landed on ground zero of this destructive incident put on by Ace. People started to clap and scream. Iron Man stood there in all his glory, not that he has any.
News photographers appeared on the scene. They started snapping pictures of the Famous "Iron Man".
Well, as you guessed it the Misfits weren't all that happy. They stood up out of their hiding spot and looked at the festivities among them.
A girl and two guys sit at a table in "Paris" or at least that's what it looks like. One of the guys looks scared and walks away from the table. Suddenly a bus goes out of control and the girl screams. The guy was luckily not hit by the bus, but then a sign from atop of a building fell off the roof about to hit him. Instantly his buddy ran in and saved him then said, "If it skipped you, then whose next."
Todd using his incredible leaping abilities jumps and rescues the guy just before the sign returns because it's connected to some electrical wires. When Todd lands he looks terrified.
He looks at his fellow Misfits. "I think I just broke my leg."
The Next day….
"It's ok guys the doctor said I'd be out of the cast in Two months." Todd said as the three left the doctors office and to the elevator down.
Todd felt wired though because he was wearing a cast and had to use two sticks that would help him walk around but not very fast.
"Two Month! Dang it Todd not Two Months!" Paul screamed as the three reached the elevator.
The three then entered the elevator when it opened. "How did you break your leg anyway?" Ollie Questioned.
"That may be a mystery we may never solve." Todd replied.
"We should fix that elevator before we go to lunch break, someone could be hurt!" Said a brawny construction worker.
A small thinner man sat down with his sandwich. "It's our break and I'm going to take it the way I want it.
When the elevator reached the correct floor the three left at "Ding" sound of the elevator. "Lets get out of here I hate these places." Paul cried out.
"Yah one sec I dropped my wallet in the vator." Ollie rushed back in the elevator to get his wallet. He picked it up and looked at his friends who were waiting patiently.
One last look at Ollie and Ollie was no more. The elevator fell down the shaft. All that Paul and Todd could hear was a giant crash as the elevator reached the ground.
Paul rushed over to look down, while Todd walked as best as possible with the crutches to the elevator.
"You Ok Ollie." Paul yelled down to the elevator shaft.
Ollie was with the vator at a lowest level possible, which was one level below them. "I think so!" He shouted out.
At Ollie's house.
"It's Ok guys I have a small concussion that will end in three months." Ollie told his companions as he is sitting in a one-man sofa leaning back.
"Maybe this is bad luck or something given to us from our enemies." Paul cried out again for the umpteenth time in this story. "What if I'm next?"
"One," Todd said in sarcasm. "We have no major enemies that hate us that much except for Mysterio, but hard to imagine he did this. Two: If we had bad luck, your luck would over power it, because, your lucky."
"You know what Todd your right." Paul said happily.
Ollie and Todd started to play X-box (Copyright TM).
Ollie looked on his small hand held palm pilot. "Trouble, Ace. Froggy you'd better get going."
"Come on I've always wanted to play this game." Paul said as he tried to grab the game controller from Ollie.
"Just go!" Todd yelled out grumpier as ever
Paul didn't reply.
"That's what I thought. Your no hero you just hide behind them." Todd said.
"I'm going."
"Your gonna fail you oversized Frog." Todd said as Paul left the apartment building occupied by Ollie's family.
Frog-man was jumping from house to house muttering himself. "Some other superhero could take Ace on why does it have to be me? How did Ollie get a hand held pilot that told him where trouble was?" This puzzled Frog-man for a couple seconds he then moved on. "I'll show them, they'll see that I'm a true hero is made of." For some odd reason He felt like he was going to cry.
Down in an abandoned wear house. Ace is making some deals with some guys wearing black. "You got the money?" Ace called out.
One of the big guys in black walked up to Ace with a brief case. Ace felt no danger so he grabbed the case from the guy hands.
Ace opened it up slowly and pulled out ego waffles (Copyright TM) "Hmm my favourite." Ace closed his eyes and smelt the fresh scent of waffles.
A bigger guy in a bigger black coat walked up. "Now where my part of the deal.
Ace pressed a button on a remote and behind him a garage started to open. Ace was eating the waffles loving every bite of it.
There was a giant tank in the garage with guns and other crap on the walls.
"Freeze, you villains of the law." Frog-man was atop of a crate.
"How the heck did you know I was here?" Ace said baffled
"I could smell your stench a mile away." Frog-man replied.
"No you saw our big black car didn't you." One if the bigger black guys said
"NO! I saw your bigger black car." Frog-man replied.
"Blast him." The elite leader of the black guys called out.
"Not today vile citizen." Frog-man jumped of the crates and delivered a heavy punch to the leader and tied him up with a cord from his hand shooters. "Anyone man enough to take on Frog-man."
All the black guys left leaving all the guns behind. "That's what I thought." Frog-man commented. He turned around and received a giant blow to the head. Ace was standing with a metal pipe in his hand over the fallen Frog-man.
"You stupid Frog you can't beat me." Frogman stuck up his finger and pointed behind Ace. "I knew this was to good to be true, I'm gonna die because of empty crated that I move back and forth for no good reason at all." Ace said this without even turning around. Frog-man nodded his head up and down.
Frog-man shot a cord to the ceiling of the building and pulled himself up.
Ace turned around slowly to look fear face to face, or in his case face to crate. Well seeing that Ace is no more… we head back to our hurt guys in black.
"Last time I ever make an appearance in a bad story like this." One of the big guys I black said.
A bigger guy in black got of the chair he was sitting on and in a bigger voice said. "I can't believe we gave him those waffles!"
Well alls well that ends well don't you think, Frog-man proved to his friends that he's a hero even though he's probably the worst hero in this series. Paul in the flesh also got to play the game that he had never played before, and believe it or not so will you. Go to your TV and turn it on, change the channel to video one and stare mindlessly into the screen.
Then maybe you to will have played the game that Paul had never played before.
Frog-Man: This game Sucks!
Next Time,
The Misfits: Rent a Place
In the divine search for a high-tech state of the art, machinery and paintings from a different country home. But when this High-tech state ect. Is up and running the Mysterious entity known as that computer wiz from that X-evolution series what ever his name is, rather than Marvel comics take over the house that is to hard to pronounce what it has within it.
Till next time,
Riddler Kid.