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It anyone could describe the way they would of written this small piece.
Please I emphasize please write it on a review. I really really would like to do well
with this story.
I have a very hard time describing different things.
It by chance you could show me in a small description how you would do it.
It would be greatly appreciated
Thank you again for reading my new chapter
LVFGD
Later that afternoon when Lizzie got home. She explained to parents what she was going to do that Friday night.
Her father had taken her to the Gordon estate . Unfortunately he was not familiar with the estate.
He had made the mistake of trying to drop his daughter off at the front door.
The Gordon servant became very upset because she was supposed to use the kitchen entrance.
It had made her father a little upset. Because he did not like the way these stockup people.
Treated his daughter.
Lizzie was undaunted by the situation. She had walked around to the kitchen entrance.
the first person she had met was the Gordon head servant. Which proceeded to show her
around the kitchen. And where the dining room was.
off over to the corner. David was talking to his old friend The cook. Over the many years
they have become. Almost like father and son. He glanced up and saw the most
beautiful girl he had ever seen in his life.
The older cook had taken notice to the twinkle in David eyes. When he saw
him look at Lizzie. Unnoticed by Lizzie. She did not see David and the cook
talking.
It anyone could describe the way they would of written this small piece.
Please I emphasize please write it on a review. I really really would like to do well
with this story.
I have a very hard time describing different things.
It by chance you could show me in a small description how you would do it.
It would be greatly appreciated
Thank you again for reading my new chapter
LVFGD
Later that afternoon when Lizzie got home. She explained to parents what she was going to do that Friday night.
Her father had taken her to the Gordon estate . Unfortunately he was not familiar with the estate.
He had made the mistake of trying to drop his daughter off at the front door.
The Gordon servant became very upset because she was supposed to use the kitchen entrance.
It had made her father a little upset. Because he did not like the way these stockup people.
Treated his daughter.
Lizzie was undaunted by the situation. She had walked around to the kitchen entrance.
the first person she had met was the Gordon head servant. Which proceeded to show her
around the kitchen. And where the dining room was.
off over to the corner. David was talking to his old friend The cook. Over the many years
they have become. Almost like father and son. He glanced up and saw the most
beautiful girl he had ever seen in his life.
The older cook had taken notice to the twinkle in David eyes. When he saw
him look at Lizzie. Unnoticed by Lizzie. She did not see David and the cook
talking.