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at least write how they take it (i want Robin to cry)
Uh sure. wait untill the chapter.
mew-xena
DEFINETELY CONTINUE! I love this story so far! it's really good! Can't wait to see how the boys react! How about you have Star create a character and team up with Raven, and they BOTH whip the boys' butts! Or have the boys become obsessed wiht finding out who Ruler of Chaos is! Cool name for her, by the way! Well.. loving tihs story! please try to update sooN!
When I orginaly started Raven's name was daughter of Chaos but I remembered what I wrote about only guys playing and I changed it to Ruler of Chaos. About Star creating a character, I was playing with that idea. But what would her name be?
robxraelover
cool story please continue
Uh thanks.
fourthelement
Likes very much. Is telling you folloing:
If you don't keep writing this I'll DIE!
Dramatic but true. So hurry up already!
Glad you like it.
BlackShield
Haha! This is awesome, and, sadly, a story of many of the male gamer populace. (No offense to the guys out there, I know a lot aren't like "It's guys only," but I know some who are. They know who they are - bwah.) It's also hilarious.
Though, please - longer chapters! You're killin' me. )
BlackShield
Sorry for the short chapter. Um..I had that idea on the top of my tounge and I had to blurt it out. I will try to make things longer. And can I ask a favor?
Will you tell me my grammatical errors in the story so I can fix them.
I suck at Grammer.
Unknown
Yes! Keep going I can just see the boys jaws droping when or if the ever find out Raven been killing them off like bugs, especially Cyborg's reaction his going to keep trying till he beats her which might necer happen.
I don't think that will ever happen Mr. Unknown.
Raven Fan
Please continue, it sounds so interesting
Thanks.
Uh... Hey people. Here is chapter two
Ch2
"Hey," Robin said quietly when StarFire and Raven walked in, "Hows it going?"
"Great!" StarFire said with her usual peppyness, "How are you, my friends?"
"Not so good," BB said dissapointdly, "Ruler of Chaos beat us again."
Cyborg nodded at his friends.
"But Robin got a life point off of him though," he said as an afterthought.
Raven smiled and walked off.
"Why did she smile?" Cyborg asked confused, "something funny?"
"No," StarFire said smiling, "she is just in a good mood."
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Raven was back in her dark, drab room.
I beat them again, she sliently gloated to herself, I should be the Ruler of Gamers!
Then she shook her head and got back on her computer.
"Time to play somemore," she said to herself, "Maybe I can continue with the quest I orginally started."
She continued her game in silence.
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"Star," Robin said as the others got back online, "Do you want to watch us play this time?"
"I would love too," StarFire smiled, "Just let me go tell Raven I have to cancle our plans."
"What plans do you have?" BB asked in interest.
"She was teaching me how to type on a keyboard," StarFire lied.
"She will understand," Cyborg said quickly, "Just stay here and watch us play."
StarFire nodded and she sat next to Robin on the couch.
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The city was full of people.
The Ruler of Chaos was going around city helping the less experienced gamers.
"Thank you Chaos," one called Savaaka said as she held the staff that she was given, "Thank you for your help."
Ruler of Chaos just nodded with a small smile.
As Ruler of Chaos walked off BirdBrain came out of hiding.
"Ready to fight?" he asked in anger, "Just you and me. Monao to Manao."
The Ruler of Chaos smiled.
"How can you be sure I am a guy?"
BirdBrain was quick to reply, "Because only guys play this game! Its a proven fact among my home!"
"And you live in Titans Tower?" Chaos asked smugly, "Isn't there only three guys there?"
BirdBrain was now shocked.
"How did you know?" he asked in fear, "are you a villian?"
"No," Chaos said, "Just an angry person. Be sure to tell your friends not to mess with me."
Chaos stopped for a moment.
"Well," Chaos added, "Tell them if they don't want to get messed up, to not mess with me. Personaly I hope they do because I need the extra experence. You three ae such an easy prey."
Then Tin Man and Morpher jumed out from the shadows.
"Who says we are going to get messed up!?" Tin Man yelled in frustration, "Its you thats going to get messed up!"
"yay!" Morpher said, "No more dog catcher for me!"
Chaos was confused.
"I don't have time for this," Chaos muttered walking off, "I have a quest to attend too."
BirdBrain called on the power of the birds to attack Chaos and Chaos attacked with some sorcery that only a soreceror could manage.
"You are the new soreceror!" Tin Man gasped in surprise.
Chaos nodded.
"Now I have to leave," Chaos hissed dissapearing, "Good luck."
Chaos then left TinMan, Morpher, and BirdBrain alone.
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"Chaos has a quest?" Cyborg asked in confusion, "Then why was he trying to attack us?"
"Cause our quest is to kill the new soreceror," Robin said soflty.
"Great," BB muttered, "Another person to watch out for on the game."
"We should change our quest," Cyborg said, "Then maybe Chaos will be our ally."
"We should go after the evil soreceror," BB said smiling, "Not any soreceror, the evil soreceror!"
"We will tell Chaos that we will not attack him anymore," Cyborg said grinning, "But when will he come back on?"
"Check later," Raven said walking into the living room, "Your little friend might be back on then."
"Hey," Cyborg said smiling at Raven, "How are you doing?"
"Fine," Raven said in her mono tone, "Just seeing what all the noise was for."
"Lets go get pizza," BB said exicitdly, "I'm hungry!"
They left the tower and braved the cold air outside.
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So BlackSheild, long enough chapter for you?
Hah, This one came eaiser to me than last so it was longer.
Review today and I will update tomorow!
DarkGoddessRaven