Well, I have alot of reviewes.

yay!

nevermoretheraven

I reviewed today. I can't wait! I am so intrigued by it! I think I know some stuff that is about to happen.

Yes, but can you tell me what chapter it is going to happen in. lol.

GP2000

Total Chicks rock story. WOHO! Robin is way uber cocky Sigh... only cute w/ raven!!

Uh. sorry I don't write Raven and Robin fics. I don't care for that couple but I will read them.

lilmisschaos

this is pretty good. I love this plot with the whole video game theame. but...

Chaos attacked with some sorcery that only a soreceror could manage.

that line is beyond lame no offense because the rest is REALLY good. Update soon

Uh, sorry?

BlackShield

That was a bit longer, yes. Thanks. Though improvement is always good, right? )

Well, that's just me being greedy and wanting more story, but I hope you can deal with that. Wink.

If you need help with grammar, I'd volunteer as a beta-reader, aka tester. In case you don't already know, beta testing is where an author sends a reader/other author a story before it's posted. The reader it's sent to replies, sending the chapter/post back edited, so that all errors the regular reader might notice are GONE. Fixed. Typos, all those little things YOU don't see because YOU wrote it. Y'know?

Anyway, if you want one, I'd be willing.

)

Plus, it's easier than saying "OK, third sentence in the fourth section, eigth word... needs a comma there (i'm pointing at my screen)..."

Y'know? Cos that's just confusing.

Anyway, good chapter, good story, yadda yadda. All that good bull crappery. )

B S

I still don't understand the beta reading thing. But thanks for reading the second chapter and leaving a long review. This chapter might not be as long as the last though. sorry.

RavenRobin4ever

this story is awesome! cant wait for update!

Uh okay!

mew-xena

I am so ahppy right now! Winter break started, we just bought a cabin, and a bunch of my fav stories (including this one) are updated! YEAH! Okay, you're toying with the starfire idea? well, if you need a name, how about... Regale? It means like graveful and royalty, and I just tihnk it's pretty. ' just suggestions tohugh! LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH! Please try to update sooN!

I might use that name. Thanks. I have one more problem, StarFire doesn't understand alot of things, and I am thinking that computers are one of them. What should I do?

fourthelement

Yess . . . An update! Raven is TOTALLY rockin' the game world. Now if only Star could play and beat them . . .

Yes, that might happen.

raven-shadowsong

this is really good

Thanks.

neoendgame

Great story. Later on you sould have someone beat raven, and then we find out it is slade XD that would be great.

No, but thanks for the idea.

herald

hey i like your story because i like comedy

Thanks.

spiritual-s

hurry up and continue

I don't do good when I hurry.

Well, Here is the next chapter.

Ch3

It was later that night when Raven decided to go back online.

I wont stop attacking them, Raven thought giving her dark room a rare smile, I am having too much fun.

She logged on with a grin and looked for the guys.

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"Is Chaos back on?" BB asked Cyborg as he logged on.

"Hang on," Cyborg said smiling, "I am just getting on."

They both watched the T.V. when Cyborg's character, TinMan, started looking around the forest.

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Tin Man was in the Kahahaha forest. He was waiting for the attack.

"Hello!" he called out to the trees, "Is Ruler of Chaos there?"

He waited for a few more minutes and then a fire ball nearly scalded him.

"Yes," Chaos sneered, "I am and you are going to pay for interupting me from my mission!!"

Chaos raised his hand and the ground started to crumble.

"Wait," Tin Man said in fear, "I need to tell you something."

Just before Chaos was about to throw Tin Man into the ground, he stopped and said, "What?"

Tin Man's fear was given away in his metal face.

"My friends and myself do not want to attack you," he gasped out, "We will help you in your mission."

Chaos was shocked.

"You can't help me!"

"Why not?" Tin Man asked in confusion.

"Because you do not have enough power to defete the evil soreceror," Chaos replied in anger, "But since you were nice in your begging, I will let you go."

The ground closed back up again and Tin Man looked relieved.

"Get," Chaos snarled, "Now!"

Chaos summoned a big gust of wind and used it to blow Tin Man away.

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"Well," BB said after Cyborg logged off, "that was nice."

Cyborg gave BB an odd look and BB started laughing.

"Well," he gasped out between peals of laugheter, "Chaos didn't throw you into level zero."

Cyborg dropped the controler that he held. He had forgotten about leval zero. Good thing Chaos was not out to kill their characters yet.

"Yeah," Cyborg whispered softly, "that was strange."

BB then picked up the controler and said, "I will try to reason with Chaos myself."

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The Ruler of Chaos was now in the city bar.

"What would you like?" the barkeep, Jonny, asked.

Pulling out two gold shillings, Chaos said, "One ale."

Jonny went to get the ale and Chaos shook his hand.

Morpher had walked in as Chaos was taking off his hat.

When the hat was off, Morpher saw long black hair fall from Chaos's head making one thing clear, Chaos was female!

"Wholey cow!" Morpher yelled, "You are a girl!"

Chaos turned sharply and sighed when she saw Morpher there. Then she smiled.

"Are girls too bad to play this game?" she asked laughing at Morpher's shocked face, "Or are you still too proud to admit that someone might be better than you?"

hahahahahahaha end of chapter.

sorry it is short but I don't have alot of time to write.

here is an idea, you like rpgs, go to