Me: Hello reviewer people!
Reviewer People: Hi!
Me: Okay, My self confidence has run out as I read over chapter four. It's not that good and I practically gave away the ending! I hate life, it sucks.
Sora: You're no one to complain! You're not getting tortured!
Me: Oh shut up.
Sora: Why don't you torture Riku?
Me: BECAUSE RIKU IS GOD DAMN SEXY!
All: o.O
Yuffie: She's got a good point.
Leon: Are you trying to take away my girlfriend?!?
Riku: (gulp) NO!
Leon: (jumps on Riku and starts beating him up)
Sora: Now you know what it feels like. And that torture thing you wrote about with my chin.... yeah, that hurt like HELL!
Me: I know.
Okay, review time!
ElegantArrow 64
You're right, Riku is just too damn sexy to torture!
Riku: Chicks dig me.
Sora: Shut the hell up!
Me: Anyways.... I just got back from Disney World, and I saw King Mickey's spies all over the place. Damn spies. Well, thanks for all of the excellent reviews and support even though my story is way too obvious!
Sorceress Sakura
I'm sorry I tortured Sora, alright? And I updated, so don't bug me. It's not like I'm DigitalDreamer! lol. Thanks for the great reviews!
Merielle
Okay, you scare me. And let Ken out of the darn chains! Even though he did like the Sora getting tortured part.... you know what? Just leave Ken in the chains. And thank you for the free chocolate! Since we're in the giving mood, here's a giant hershey kiss! Now read the chapter! And by the way, keep on sending me those long reviews, they make me feel special! (huggles review).
Lone Warrior2
Not enough torture for you, huh? Well try this chapter! Most of it is torture! So are you happy now? Good. Read!
AJ Taylir
Guick, get untangled from the suspence! You must read! (hands you a pair of scissors to free yourself) Thanks for the great reviews!
Majora's Spawn
What the hell do you mean make Sora suffer incredible pain? Wow, you are strange. (backs away slowly from your review.) Thanks for the great reviews anyway!
M.D Sora
Okay, lets get this straight. My story will never be as great as yours! Yours rocks my socks! I never liked stories like that until I read yours! You rock out loud!
done!
Me: Okay, it's time for the next chapter. I have no clue what to write, I'm just making this up as I go. All I know is that it contains way more torture then the other one did.
Torture Place
Sora figured that this had to be the worse wake up call he had ever had in his entire life. The call was a plunge into the stomach with a Mystical Staff with the shape of a cobra. He almost screamed, but remembered himself and kept his mouth tightly shut.
Jafar grinned. "Did you sleep well?" He slanted the staff to the left, and dragged to the right, pulling Sora's insides with it. AGONY! Sora groaned as he felt the new placement of several organs and was gasping for air when Jafar finally yanked it out of him.
Sora winced as he opened his mouth to try and throw an insult at him. The gash under his chin left by Hook was still there, and hurt like a demon. Jafar just smirked and said, "That whole in your neck really isn't big enough for my liking." Sora's eyes widened in fear... he could see what was coming. Jafar held the staff on one end of the cut and pulled outward. The slash then split to twice its size, running from half way down his neck to the tip of his chin.
Sora gasped in pain and tears rolled down his cheeks. Don't scream... don't scream... don't scream... don't scream....
Jafar yanked his staff out, and then brought it up with full force to the center of the wound. There was the sound of Sora's jawbone being broken into tiny peices. The staff ripped all the way through to the bottom of his mouth and through his tongue. He then twisted it around, causing Sora even more pain.
He couldn't stand it anymore. Sora screamed as loud as his lungs would permit. But he quickly stopped when a memory flashed through his mind. Kairi. She wouldn't want me to give them the honor of making me give in. I must fight back.
The staff grew to a firery temperature at the end of it, as hot as magma, burning his mouth and chin from the inside out. When he fininshed, he stood back to admire his handywork. Not bad, Jafar thought, but I can do better.
Jafar summoned the fire lazer to the end of the staff and sent it slamming into Sora's left arm, burning a hole right through it. Sora grunted, and let the tiniest of whimpers escape from his lips as he studyed the hole through his arm. How was he going to live through this? He really didn't know. How was Sora's skin keeping in one peice and not just falling off? The author is not telling.
Jafar laughed loudly. "Give it up, boy," he growled. "You shall die in the end. But if you come with us, we will spare you. And there is so much to gain! What can you possibly win by going through this? Only pain!"
"No, I can win more," Sora mumbled, trying not to move his tongue a lot. It had that giant hole in it. But all he succeded in was hooking his teeth into the hole and making it grow wider and more blood spilled out. Sora spat out the blood, and said slowly, "I will win the safety for all worlds. If I die, I die. It can't be any worse then this. Nothing is."
Jafar's smile widened at his last two comments. "If nothing is worse then this, then just join us! After all, nothing can be worse then what you are going through now! You said it yourself."
Sora winced; Jafar was... he was.... NO! I will NOT give in! I'm stronger then them. I can still get out of this alive! I can still... I can still... I can still...
But even as Jafar left to go get Malifecent, even as the thoughts raced through Sora's mind, he realized something; his hope was running thing. His trust was diminishing. What if his friends really had forgotten him? What if they didn't care? And what was really so bad about joining them anyway? NO! NO! I will NOT think that! I will get through this. They're looking for me right now, that's what Kairi told me. I will survive. I know so... I hope so.... God damn them all.... I miss my island... I just want to go home... Just let me live long enough to see my island one more time... please... Just once more....
Gummi Ship
"Kairi, what the hell are you talking about?" Riku snapped. His friend was losing it.
Kairi glared at him. Why didn't any of them get it yet? "I had a dream," she said slowly. "Sora was there. He's giving up soon, and we have to help him! He told me that we can't find him with directions. The place he is can only be found by the hearts of the people inside the room. We need Sora's heart to find him, and that's what we have to follow!"
"Okay, Kairi, do you mind explaining?" Aerieth asked. ''How do we use his heart if he has it?"
"Don't you get it?" Kairi asked. "Sora's heart is inside of us! It's always been there. We just have to follow the way that are hearts are pointing us, and it will get us there."
When she had finished, they were all staring at her. Damn, she was smart. By then, they had been at Disney Castle for five minutes and several people had come on board to see who the hell had just flown in. It was Stewlart, the advisor that usually taught new staff and was the King's teacher when he was taking lessons (yeah, there's lots of stuff you have to learn to become king! Lots of lessons and stuff) and the Magician; the Magician was smiling. They had all heard Kairi's little speech.
"I'm glad that you have finally figured it out, young Miss," the Magician said. He turned to King Mickey, Riku, Aerieth, Donald, Goofy, Leon and Yuffie. "She is right. You must go to Sora this instant. He is in grave danger and I do not know how long his heart can stayin the light. Fly straight to Hollow Bastion, and find him. Your hearts will indeed lead you there."
"Your majesty," Stewlart said, "The moniter has picked up the n..."
"I know," King Mickey said. "We'll deal with one problem after the other. Just prepare." Stewlart bowed his head and King Mickey rolled his eyes; he hated it when people treated him like.... well.... a king.
"Come on then," Goofy said. "Sora's a' waitin for us!"
The Magician and Stewlart were leaving the pain when they realized someone else was going with them.
"Aerieth?" Yuffie asked, "Arn't you coming with us?"
Aerieth just shook her head sadly. "No, I am not that close of a friend. I would just get in the way. You go on without me." She glanced at King Mickey. "I will help Stewlart prepare." King Mickey nodded his head once, and then gave them the for them to take off. Donald pulled down the lever and closed the doors. They hovered for a moment, and then took off at top speed, blowing up dust in thick clouds.
They had traveled for around an hour at the same high speed, when Donald threw the ship into a complete stop, sending everyone flying into the front of their seatbelts.
"DONALD!'' Leon roared. "WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT FOR?!?" Everyone sat there, rubbing their chests from where the seatbelt had hit them, glaring at Donald.
But Donald didn't even notice them. He was gaping with his mouth open at something ahead of them. Everbody slowly got up from their seats and looked out the window. What they saw saw truly terrifying.
Ahead of them, not a fifth of a mile away, was an entire fleet of thousands of Heartless ships. And from the look of them, loaded with weapons. "Oh shit..." Kairi muttered. Had they not been in a state of complete shock, they would have been very surprised to hear Kairi curse.
"What now?" Yuffie murmered. ''The only way to Hollow Bastion is through there, and there's nothing to hide behind so they won't see us!''
"As Sora once said..." Leon said. "We are totally screwed."
Mickey put on a look of absolute concentration. "We need to go through them." Nobody argued with him. They were just as dead set on getting Sora back then he was.
Goofy got to work on putting up as much defense as possible, addind defense-g's. Leon took his choice of heavy weapons, and loaded them with as much deadly amo as could fit. Donald switched the ship to flying position again, heading fastly towards the oncoming army. "They're almost within firing range, everybody hold on..."
And then the shots came down like hail. The emergency lights were going on withing ten seconds as they desperately tryed to destroy as many ships as possible and trying desperately to heal the ship. Nothing was working. The health meter was going down, and they just couldn't destroy enough.
"DONALD!" King Mickey yelled over the noise. "Do we have enough power to go into hyperspeed and go right through them?"
"We barely have enough energy to keep this ship moving!" Donald snapped, not caring if it was the king he was talking to.
Then, a ship managed to fire right into their defensive system, causing them to burst into flame. "We're going down!" Riku yellled.
"Going down where?" Kairi yelled as the ship turned over and over in the air.
"Oh no..." Leon said, staring outside the window. "Please don't tell me it can't get any worse then this."
They looked outside and received another shock. It was coming right towards them! It opened it's mouth and swallowed him whole.
They all screamed as they ran down a bumby trail through a large red tube and splashing right into a puddle of water with over-large piles of wood coming up every here and there.
"Well," Mickey said, "the good news is, the water put out the fire. The bad news is, we're inside Monstro." (No shit Sherlock!)
Meanwhile, Back in Sora's own Personal Hell...
"Well, are you quite done yet?"
Sora just glared at her. Most of the colors he could see were only red, since blood was leaking into his eyes. Jafar had finished his fun and now it was, once agin, Malifecent's turn to come and try to pursuade him. Wow, thye were developing a schedule. That scares me. Sra could no longer talk, his tounge severed too badly. Even if he could talk, it might make the slach across his neck even worse. Right now he needed better, not worse. He just stared at her with all of the defiance he could muster.
Malifecent smiked. "Fine then. As you wish." She raised her staff and send more dark green power into him. His hurts pained him twice as bad, but he still refused to scream. It felt as if every vein in his body was being ripped, his blood reached boiling temperature as it streamed through and out of his body.
She kept this going for a few more moments, and then released him from the pain. He tried to catch his breath, but it was running too fast for him.
'I don't want to be the one
who battles the issues,'
" Give in keybearer,"
' Cause inside I realize
That I'm the one confused'
"NEVER!"
' I don't know what's worth fighting for,
Or why I have to scream,"
"Then suffer!" She blew another attack at him.
' I don't know why I instigate
And say what I don't mean.'
He whimpered, but still didn't scream.
'I don't know how I got this way,
I know it's not all right.'
"Idiot boy."
'So I'm breaking the habit,
I'm breaking the habit,
I'm breaking the habit....'
"Bitch..."
'... tonight!'
"You can never defeat us!"
'I'll paint it on the walls!
Cause I'm the one that falls!'
"You can never defeat my heart!'
'I'll never fight again!
So this is how it ends!'
She put him through more pain of another attack.
'I don't know what's worth fighting for,
Or why I have to scream,'
Don't scream.... whatever I do, I can't scream!
'But now I have some clarity
To tell you what I mean!'
The pain grew larger and larger, tearing him apart.
' I don't know how I got this way,
I know its not alright.'
Malifecent turned up the power.
'So I'm breaking the habit,
I'm breaking the habit,
I'm breaking the habit....'
Sora threw back his head....
'TONIGHT!'
and he screamed louder then he had ever screamed before.
Monstro
"What do we do now?" Kairi asked in a small voice.
"Might as well go look around" said King Mickey. "Might as well go see if there's anyone else in here then can help us get out."
Leon snorted. "If there was anyone in here who knew how to get out, do you honestly think they would stick around?" King Mickey and Leon argued for a few more minutes, Mickey winning in the end, of course. I mean, he's Mickey Mouse!
They wadded through the water and to land. They took a look at the now incredibly damaged gummi ship. It didn't look fit to be in a dumpster!
Riku was frowning deeply. This place brought back terrible memories that he wanted to forget.
They looked around the entire place, not finding a trace of any living being in there besides them. Then, they eventually came back to the place they started from.
Riku groaned. How could they ever ind their way out.
"What now?" Yuffie asked. And this time, the king was actually out of answers and good ideas. Even Goofy was losing his hope. This was definately not good. They were screwed. Then, water started to flow from all around them. What the hell is going on?
"Everyone, to the gummi ship!" Donald yelled. They scurried across the area and climbed into the ship. Water continued to rapidly flow in. raising the gummi ship. There was some kind of suction coming from a whole in the ceiling.
"You don't think..." Goofy began. But his words were cut off by a loud whooshing as them and the awater blew threw the hole, sending them out into space, and zooming into the water of a different planet; Hollow Bastion. Everyone scrambled out the door and looked at the whale, which was waving his tail in farewell.
No one could make heads or tails of this. Monstro had... helped them?
"Could this week get any weirder?" Yuffie asked.
Mickey walked into the back of the ship and came out with.... ten different moogles?
"I need you guys to fix up the ship," Mickey told them.
"We will, moogle!" one of them squeeked. They set to work at once with their tools.
But as it turned out, the day could get weirder. As they walked up to the big gates od Hollow Bastion, they could feel their hearts tugging torwards it. Oh yeah, follow you heart time.
Torture Again
The pain ceased and Sora fell lmp against his chains. He had given in and screamed. Damn it.
Malifecnt wore a triumphant smile. "So, do you give in yet, key bearer?"
Sora just shot daggers at her with his eyes. "Hell no,"
Some sort of worry flitted across her face, but she hid it. ''Well then, maybe Oogie Boogie can soften you up a bit more?"
She left the room and in came the bag head.
"Well, looky looky!" Oogie said. "You look a bit uncmfortable!" Sora responded by spitting out a mouthful of blood at his feet. Oogie glared at him. "You're making a big mistake kid." Bugs started to crawl out from under the cloth. Half with pointy jaws, the other falf with scissors for heads. They crawled over Sora, getting at the ready. "Have it your way then."
The scissors started to snip at his skin slicing it it thin strips. The little jawed creatures crawled under his skin and started eating away at him, causing him to writh and squirm in pain. Despite the fact that this really didn't compare with Malifecent's torture, it stiff hurt like a bastard.
The bugs nawed and snipped away at the cut on his chin, eating and taking away chunks of his skin. One large scissor head sliced through the middle of his ear, cutting it in half on the middle. They dug under his nails, seperating the nail from flesh.
You could see small bumps rolling under his skin, showing where the bugs were carving their tunnels. They dug up from under his skin to breath, and then dove under again.
Oogie Boogie was now having various tools to hurt him. A saw moved across his right calf, cutting to the bone and revealing pink and bloody tissue. Hammers clunked along his body, snapping his bones and creating large bruises.
"Mr. Oogie Boogie!" The bag ghost turned around to see Malifecent standing there. "We have visitors. Return to your torturing of him later. The tools vanished and the bugs crawled back to Oogie, all dripping with blood.
"Who are the intruders?"
Malifecent looked coldly at Sora. "The brat's friends."
End
Me: DONE!
Sora: How am I still in one peice?
Riku: Not a clue.
Me:Review or suffer the consequences!
Sora: pain.... THE PAIN!
Kairi: You have a ten-second start...
Me: EEPPP!! (runs away)
Kairi: one... TEN! HERE I COME!
Sora: Oh heck, just review the damn chapter!