Ch 5 coming back

(A/N: ok guys I'm truly very sorry if you guys think my story really stinks, keep in mind that I am a brand new writer in this. But if you do, please don't review as harshly as another reviewer of mine did. Keep it friendly, I'm doing the best I can and I'm working really hard to please you guys.

Ok now that that's of my shoulder, I hope this chappy is better than other ones. )

A/n- man shall I say this again? Ranma ½ does not and I mean does not belong to me, so don't shoot me for it.

Ranma slowly walked towards the bed, which held his fiancé. Kami Sama she was beautiful, she did change in appearance however. Her hair had grown down slightly passed her shoulders. She got thinner and taller as well. How he missed seeing her face, her majestic face.

"Akane…. how?" He just sat down next to her and held her hand being ever so gentle.

Ryoga came over, still weeping but calmer he in turned came over and stared out how she changed.

" Excuse me, but am I suppose to know what's going on? I mean how do you guys know her? Was she your friend?" interrogated mishi.

" Mishi, this is Akane. I don't exactly know how to handle all this right now; I thought I lost her long ago. How could I ever thank you for taking care of her?" answered ranma.

" Well… first of all you could explain a little about how she got in the Mts. And how you guys met. Other than that, truthfully you already helped me by finding her. We just didn't know where to put her once she woke up, if she even spoke English or if she even remembered where she lived. So I guess I should be thanking you." replied mishi.

Therefore, ranma and ryoga took turns in explaining everything that happened since they met to the Phoenix Mts.

" Wow, no wonder you guys are so –active- lets just say. Sounds like you never told her how you felt Ranma, until it was too late. You guys really had an incredible life, always competing for attention. I don't think she will recognize anything when she wakes up, so it's up for you guys to tell everybody she knows about this."

Ranma hadn't thought of it, how would his family react? He was going to need ryoga's help.

" We'll think of this later, right now what matters is Akane and her life." responded ranma. Ryoga nodded his head in agreement. Ryoga and ranma seemed to have finally found their joy back.

For the next few weeks ranma and ryoga went to visit akane for hours. They worried so much about her, they often went alone talking to her but this time they went together.

" So what now ranma? What are we suppose to tell your family or do you just want to wait until she wakes up?" asked ryoga.

" I don't know ryoga, I figured I'd just wait till she wakes up. But then again if she dies, they'll never forgive me for not telling them. But that's not my top priority right now I'm worried about how she'll be when she does wake up."

" She got so much more beautiful, not that she wasn't already, its just that now she looks more mature." pointed out ryoga.

" Ya she looks just like when I first met her, just more mature like you said. I don't know how I ever lived without her…"

" Look Ranma I still love akane but I wont fight with you anymore. I lost her, but then again I never had her. All I'm saying is you two are meant to be together it just wouldn't right trying to separate you guys. I might envy you from time to time but as long as she's happy I'm happy two get it? So ranma basically im saying that if its needed go beyond the impossible to fight for her life, even if it means your own, I know I will." stated ryoga.

" Look, I'm touched but that wont mean we wont be friends like we are now just because she came back, does it? Cause if it does, I'll always regret it. I mean of course I promise to do that but if it means you giving up and saying your last words then leaving, just because I' m with her its not worth it. It's not worth losing a friendship over.."

" Ya, ya I figured you would say something like that. I just had to make sure you had a commitment to akane before you guys were officially together. Don't worry ranma I told you already I know akane is lost to me as a girlfriend, but I know she isn't as a friend. Besides its way too fun picking on you when I'm bored." cut in ryoga.

Ranma smirked at his comment, same old ryoga….

" Say ryoga I've been thinking, do you think we should tell the family?"

" Well I think you should, but you said to put it off till later. Why the change?" responded ryoga

" I don't know, but I think they deserve to know. They are lonely and desperate as it is, they need some stress killer. You know what? I'm gonna call them tonight and you'll come with me. It's time we told em."

Ryoga didn't have time to respond because ranma was already out of site. Class went slowly for ranma today and joey was starting to notice it.

" So ranma, why the anxious face? Looks like your gonna tell everybody the world is going to end or something."

" Joey you'll know tomorrow but my family is probably going to come here after what I'm gonna tell em."replied ranma.

The bell rang and ranma bolted out the door and to ryoga's class.

" Come on ryoga its 7:30 we need to call them before 8:00. Don't make me do this P-chan." A smug ranma said.

" Your gonna regret that ranma, I told you not to call me that in public." Shot an angry/challenging ryoga.

Then they both bolted out of school and into their dorms.

" Dang it's so easy to make you angry little piggy."stated ranma. "Humph…" replied ryoga. Ranma then went and took the phone, he looked at it unsure then started dialing, looking anxious as the phone rung in his ear.

Hello? answered a familiar sweet voice.

" Hi kasumi, it's me ranma. How's it goin?"

fine, everything's fine. How are you ranma? It's been a while since you called us, we were starting to worry.

" Oh no need for that, I've just been busy that's all just very busy. Is nabiki there?"

Yes she just got out of the shower, here let me get her for you…

Hello ranma.

" Hey nab, say uh.. how's it goin?"

I should be asking you the same ranma, now I know you have something important for me to hear, so just say it and stop wasting my time.

" Alright nab, this is going to shock you somewhat so sit down." Ordered ranma, nabiki absentmindedly did as told.

" Ok, nabiki over here we have a friend named mishi and…"

Mishi? Mishi Shonoke?

" ya that's it, why do you know her?"

Well of course, she went to designing school with me for four years then I went up in high school, her father is an archeologist right? Anyways get to the point ranma.

" Well since you already know, her father studied the Phoenix Mts. About two years ago."

…..Yes, yes go on.

" so then he found a whole part of the Mts. Collapsed, but he went to check it out anyway. There he found a girl about 16 under rocks, she is now in a coma but still alive."

That, that girl is, is she…?"

" She's akane nabiki, akane is alive."

How did this happen ranma? I though you saw her die in your arm's, so how?

" She was in a heart shock, they found her two hours after, but by some miracle her heart started beating again, it's strange because Drs. Say she should have died."

Ranma, this is wonderful!!! Daddy is going to be so happy when he finds out, let me tell him, I'll put him on in just a second…….

(crying)… Ranma… (Sniff) this is just the happiest day of my sorry life. (Sniff) When can we come over? I need to see (sniff) my little (sniff) girl alive…(more crying)

(Sob).. dad is very emotional ranma and of course he wants to come over as soon as he can. But we have to tell a few more people about akane's return. Ranma I feel it's only right if I told ukyo and shampoo about this. They have changed after all. Please ranma don't worry I'll make sure they don't cause trouble. asked Kasumi.

" Kasumi, I don't like the idea so much. I guess you are right though, they do have to know. It should be interesting to see how much they actually changed."

Well I guess it will take about a month to tell everybody and to recover. So thats probably how much time you have until we come over ranma. I can't wait to see akane again.

Well ranma we'll see you in about a month. Take good care of akane for us wont you? See ya, I'll tell your father about all this ok? Bye

Ranma was somewhat surprised at all their reaction, he expected it to be more emotional then quick to the chase. He was also thinking of where they would stay and how they would all act when they saw her.

" So ranma what happened? Did they have a fit?" Questioned ryoga, then all of a sudden mishi walked in with joey and diana.

" Hey guys, joey told me that your family might come over, but then why?"asked mishi.

" Okay, all of you sit down. I have a lot concerning mostly mishi, ryoga and I. You all now by now akane is very familiar with ryoga, and me but awhile ago we all thought she was dead. Now I told all of you our life history and all right? But the big deal was that my family didn't know about her being alive. Mishi you know Tendou Nabiki right?"

" Well ya we went to school together for four years. Now I see how you know her, man the world is a small place. But I mean I haven't spoken to her in years." Answered mishi.

" Well ya, you could say that I'm related. But akane is her little sister, as you know. So I felt guilty not telling them about her and I called them about ten minutes ago. They were shocked but quickly asked if they could come over, and they said they would tell my former fiancées sorta speak, about it."

"WHAT???" they all said in unison.

"Ranma why? You know what shampoo and ukyo would do if they came back right? Why they might even try to kill akane to get you. Besides why would you want to bother them? They already have a life of their own. Also what's that about the family coming over? Where would they stay I don't know ranma, sometimes it just seems you never think." Proclaimed ryoga.

"hum, he does have a point, although I am happy nabiki will come, there is just no way they could fit in one dorm. All hotels are very expensive around here, but maybe I could work out something. My apartment is big enough to fit them all they could just stay there. But all the same I don't think it's a good idea telling your former fiancées ranma, they may just cause trouble." Stated mishi.

" I agree with mishi, but neither the less it will be great to meet the gang you had nerima. You all just fit in a martial arts group right? It's great you'll have an exiting life a again." Said joey.

" Ya I mean I've always wanted to meet the people since you always talk about them. I'm very exited about it, but I still agree with joey , mishi, and ryoga, it will be very dangerous having them here if they are as crazy as you say." Pointed out diana.

Ryoga and ranma just stayed quiet, none of them obviously knew what kind of life they would have if they all came back here. Sure mishi could have everybody stay at her place, but did she know there were chances of her apartment being damaged? But hey, they would just have to take the chance the only worry they both really had is shampoo and ukyo.

1 month later.

Ranma, ryoga, zoa, diana, and joey were all walking towards the school when ranma heard a familiar noise.

-dring, dring-

He turned around and received the traditional amazon glomp but it wasn't as affectionate as before. He slowly pushed away and recognized his glomper, shampoo. She looked very different her face was thinner and she didn't have the two buns on her hair it was all down. Ranma noticed she was a little taller and by the way she aproched him, stonger. She smiled at him, but not that old smile that said-your mine- more of a –great to see you again- smile.

" Hello ranma, shampoo happy to see you. Have lot's to tell you, but first want to make sure akane alive."

" wow shampoo it's great to see you two you've changed. But I wont let you harm akane if that's what you came for."

" oh no, shampoo not here to cause trouble. Haave great news but want to see akane, have something to tell her in private." Replied shampoo, she then turned around and saw many new faces, but recognized one.

" hello ryoga, how you been? Shampoo missed you two." Said shampoo with her still broken English.

" ya , hi shampoo. So what's your plan? Are you gonna move here or something? Where's mousse and da old hag, did they even come here or stay behind in china?" Asked ryoga rather rudly.

Shampoo looked very sad at what ryoga had asked. " no shampoo came alone, mousse come here later and cologne.. Great grandmother died one year after we come back to china." Answered shampoo.

"WWWHHHAAATTTTT?? COLOGNE DIED?" asked both ranma and ryoga.

" yes of old age. Great grandmother taught shampoo all she knows. Shampoo still very sad, great grandmother was very respected in our village. She remembered with statue we build on her grave. She told shampoo to tel ranma that she was proud even though not husband. She want ranma to visit clan so he could be honored, because ranma beat great grandmother in battle." Explained shampoo.

" were sorry shampoo, yes I will come to china as soon as akane wakes up, but right now I need you to meet my new friends, well some of them anyways. This is mishi, nabiki's friend, joey, zoa, and diana, guys this is amazon shampoo." Introduced ranma.

They were all silent, joey especially was shocked by shampoo's beauty. Why did ranma pass her up? Was akane even more beautiful?

Diana, and zoa couldn't help but feel a little jealous of the beautiful amazon that stood before them. To them ranma had to be a real player to get a girl like that, was akane also this pretty?

As for mishi, she just stared interestingly at the amazon. She could picture her as a really good model and found that she could get a prize for keeping her in her apartment.

"Nihao" shampoo simply said, then she turned her attention back to ranma and ryoga.

" shampoo want to see akane now, is only reason why made long trip to America. Shampoo no cause trouble." Demanded shampoo.

" yes of course, we were just about to visit her with everybody. Come on shampoo, let's go." Answered ranma they all followed.