WrItErKaT322 :
It's not too sad! It's beautiful! And don't worry about me. I hate Lizzie. She needs to go die in my opinion. heh heh... You know what's ironic? My friends and I always say Lizzie should fall off a cliff...
Thank you! And you guys are right about Lizzie. :)
J (silence) Quill:
Aww! A great start for your first story! My only suggestion would be to start new paragraphs each time someone different speaks. Other than that, great job! evil grin Looks like things didn't work out the way Lizzie planned, eh?
No they didn't! I'm glad you liked it. Thank you for the advice! ;)
AkitoSana :
Cute start And it isn't two sad. I'm not that much of a 1/5 fan (they're okay) but I like the fic =D however, maybe you should at least mention what's happening to the others...
Thank you, and after I read the story when it was finally posted, I agree with you completely.
SuperSmashGal :
It does not stink! It's an excellent story!
Aww! Thank you so much!
Number14 :
O! tear tear snif just kidding! lol! hey cool story! you are so gonna be on my favorite author list!
Wow! Thanks a ton Number14! : ))
LovelyAphrodite :
you don't stink don't be so hard on yourself
update soon
Thank you LovelyAphrodite! I will.
Kat :
YOU DON'T STINK RAWR! :(
This was sweet, heehee, I loved it.
Thank you! :()
Authors Notes: Thanks to everyone who reviewed! I'm glad you guys didn't think it was too sad. So here, in honor of my wonderful reviewers, is my next chapter
Disclaimer: No, I don't own KND, I'm going to own Ruroni Kenshin, and Sano :)) (unless I buy Yu-Gi-Oh, so I can keep Jonouchi (read the manga if that doesn't make sense, it's Joey ;)
Losing You
Chapter 2:Saying Goodbye...or Not
"ABBY!" yelled Numbah 1. He couldn't believe it. He simply couldn't believe the love of his life was gone. Dropped over a cliff by his horrible girlfriend. That's it! Nigel finally managed to cut the ropes that were holding him. He grabbed Lizzie by the shoulder and whirled her around so he could punch her in the nose. "You jerk!"He said. Then he punched her in the stomach. Lizzie fell to her knees. "Nigie..."she gasped. "DON'T CALL ME THAT!" He yelled,"I hate you! If I EVER see you again, I'll beat you within an inch of your life!"
"Alroght Numbah 1!" Said Numbah 4, "You showed that cruddy girl." Numbah 1 swiftly cut the rest of his teammates lose. Numbah 3 started down the cliff in shock. It finally began to sink in. Her best friend was gone. She began to cry into Numbah 4 hood. 4 immediately turned bright red, but didn't bother stoping her. Cripes! This can't be happening! He thought.
"Uhh, Numbah 1? What should we do?" asked Numbah 2. "Go on back to the tree house," he replied, "I'll be along in a second." The other boys nodded understandingly. "C'mon Numbah 3" 4 said, gently tugging on her arm. She was rooted to the ground, sobbing loudly.
Alone, Numbah 1 dropped to his knees by the cliff. He stared down into the ravine below. There was no way Numbah 5 could of survived the fall. Her last words kept ringing through his brain. "Sorry girl, I love 'em!" Had she really meant it? "You didn't even scream..." he whispered. He remembered a week ago, when he had heard her whimper as he passed her bedroom door. Everyone else had been asleep Hearing her whimper had worried him, so he peeked in. She was tossing and turning, clearly in the middle of a horrible nightmare.
FLASHBACK
"She must be dreaming about her mom..."he thought. He knew her mother's death still bothered her. He gently put his arms around her. "It's OK Abby,"he whispered to her,"I'm here, I promise I won't let you go. I love you. I know I can never tell you that when you're awake. And I know you don't care, but I love you with all my heart."
END FLASHBACK
As he was gazing down the cliff, he noticed something caught on a rock just below him. He reached down and pulled it off. It was her favorite pink scrunchie. Standing up he put it in his pocket and glanced down the cliff one last time. "Good by Abby." he said.
Back at the tree house, Numbahs 2, 3, and 4 were sitting on the back of the couch(the one in front that huge TV they have). Numbah 3 was still sniffling. They watched Numbah 1 pacing in front of them. "How are we going to tell her family?" asked Numbah 2. That was the main thing on 1's mind at the moment.
"I...."he began, but was immediately interrupted by a phone ringing. Numbah 1 picked it up. "Yes? Oh, hi Mr. Lincoln."he said. The rest of the KND were watching his face as he was talking. "Yes. Well, you see..." A strange expression suddenly appeared on his face. "They did! Where did... Right. We'll be there in a moment." "Come on!" 1 said as he started towards the door.
"Hold it! Whats going on?!" Demanded Numbah 4. Numbah 1 turned to them. His voice sounded strange to his own ears. "It's Numbah 5,"he said, "They found her." He took a deep breath. "She's alive."
Authors Note:Yes, she's alive. And now.....CLIFFIE CLIFFIE CLIFFIE!!!!! I like cliffies, they encourage people to read on. Anyhoo, may not update for a while, I live in Florida, and we have Hurricane Charley coming here tomorrow, so the power may be off for a while. Please review while I'm gone. And keep giving me advice on my writing as well as the story. Also, for any 3/4 fans, I decided to add a little to my fanfic. Not much, so don't get too excited, but some.
