Well, I'm back, and after we wash the dog, drag stuff inside and even board up the windows, we STILL don't get anything. Charley decided to land way down south, so we didn't even get much rain until today. So, here is your next chapter, but first, the reviews.
SuperSmashGal
An excellent chapter! :D
You live in FLorida? NO wanna trade homes? I live in , rainy but not-hurricane-affected Chicago...
Thanks! And na, inspite of the hurricanes, I like Florida ;)
J (silence) Quill
hands FFX2player a massive umbrella and a Jounouchi plushie Jeez, that stinks; the cliffie, the hurricane...but I live way up here in New England so we're basically getting the crumbly remnants of Charley. I hope everything goes well for you.
Dang you and your cliff-hanger. But I'll be blunt; even though I doubt Number One would ever punch Lizzie in the stomach, it sure did make for some great imagery and I couldn't stop laughing. If you're planning on carrying this story further, you might want to take this question into consideration:
What events led up to Lizzie's Cliff-Dangling-Feat-of-Doom, and how did she manage to tie up all of Sector V? (that ought to be interesting )
AHH! PLUSHIE! Thanks for the umbrella! Thanks for the idea! And I'm glad you enjoyed reading about Lizzie being beat up as much as I enjoyed writing. Though I DO admit I had Numbah 1 a little OOC at that point.
AkitoSana
Yay!! 3/4ness!! I LOVE YOU!! XD
He grabbed Lizzie by the shoulder and whirled her around so he could punch her in the nose. "You jerk!"He said. Then he punched her in the stomach. Lizzie fell to her knees. "Nigie..."she gasped. "DON'T CALL ME THAT!" He yelled,"I hate you! If I EVER see you again, I'll beat you within an inch of your life!"
o.O...Ouch...Doesn't that seem...a little too violent, even for him? o.O;;
But anyway, continue soon!
I'm glad you want 3/4 and yes, it was OOC for Numbah 1.
GunMster
that was really good. i HATE it when the power goes off. last time we had to go camping until the power was back on. it took three weeks. believe me, ya don't know how much i hate the outdoors. anywayz, this is pointless. i like ur story alot.
Thank you, and yeah, I hate when the power goes off too. (I couldn't have seen the new KND episodes!!!)
Silverflare07
YAY! Numbuh 1 finally beat Lizzie up!
pats Nigel on the head Good boy Numbuh 1.
I've been wantin to beat her up myself. Thank you for that!
I'm just happy people enjoyed it as much I did :)
Number14
O my gosh! that was a great ch.! I cant believe shes alive! please continue! thanks!
Thank you too!
Shades of Black Horizon
Pretty good! The writing in general is fantastic, but ive got one little thing to critizize on, couldn't Numbauh One just use his rocket boots to save Numbuh Five before she fell into the water? The rocket boots are pretty powerful and can handle two people at a time.
But for lizzie, yeah i personally belive that she needs to die. Poor Numbuh One always having to go on dates when he doesnt want to, sigh stressful.
No it wasnt too sad. I liked it and i cant wait to read more.
Glad you liked it! Ugh! I didn't think of the rocket boots!
Shades of Black Horizon
Wonderful secound chapter. So they found her eh? I think this will get interesting.
Man that sux 'bout hurricane Charlie. :( Hope everything goes ok!
till next time!
Cheers!
Thank you! Yup, it gets even more intense!
ACDCFan
Hey man, don't be so hard on urself! ya dunt stink! As a matter of fact, YOU ROCK! Rock on, Dude!
Thanks!
ACDCFan
Hey, it's me again dude! I luv this story. can't wait 2 c the next chappie! I don't really haf any comments bout ur writing. It's all soo good. I'm a huge fan of 1/5! anywayz, keep goin. Oh, and i HATE 2/5. lolz, that waz kinda pointless, but i felt like telling SOMEBODY. ur the rite person cause ur a big fan of 1/5. I think i should shut up now, rite? ya! well, c ya! And ROCK ON!
I don't know where some couples appear from :(}) Oh well, each unto his/her own....(however strange it may be) Anyway, I'm glad to meet another 1/5 fan :)
lyokogrl
go us we stink together mine is bad to...btu mine is on the code lyoko board so anyway cool i hate lizzle she is so ... well she gets on my nerves.
She IS annoying (to put it mildly ;)
Nako-chan
i want to read the rest but I had to say it AW! CUTE CUTE CUTE CUTE! okay I'm done for now. hops off to next chapter
Glad ya liked it.
Nako-chan
I'm still trying to click the next chapter button. Where is it? pouts I want a new chapter. Anyway, cute! and evil cliffy of course.
YAY 34! just a little? Still yay!
New chapter for ya! And I'm glad you want a little 3/4(I like 3/4 as well, even though my first couple is 1/5) :()
Authors Notes: Sorry this chapter is a little late. When it finally calmed down last night and we WEREN'T having a hurricane after all.....I got distracted by watching KND instead of writing about it ;) I loved the new episodes, espcially Operation J.E.W.E.L.S.!! To all who noticed, Numbah 1 was a little OOC in the last chapter where he beat up Lizzie. But hey! You enjoyed it any way didn't you? Thanks to everyone who reviewed! This time, my chapter is in honor of all my reviewers, and especially Nako-chan! Here's your next chapter!
Disclaimer: Don't sue me. I don't own KND, OR Ruroni Kenshin OR Yu-Gi-Oh!
(Will eventually own the rights to Jonouchi;) Just Kidding!)
Losing You
Chapter 3:Alive but gone
This just isn't my day. Thought Numbah 1, first a false mission, then Lizzie, now this....He still couldn't believe Lizzie had actually fooled the alarm system in the treehouse. The alert for supisous adult activity had gone off, sending them to a remote toy factory. There, Lizzie had dropped a net on top of all of them, then tied them up one by one. I guess I should have called her. It WAS the third date in a month, but 1 didn't enjoy going temporarly deaf every time he called her to cancel. Lizzie could shriek louder than anyone he knew, Numbah 3 included.
Why she thought he was cheating on her with Numbah 5 was beyond him. Maybe Lizzie guessed. Was it possible? Could she have some how realized 1 was actually in love with Abby?
But that didn't matter now. What mattered now was that Numbah 5 was alive. The only question was, how bad had she been hurt? As they rushed into her room they found 5 lying the hospital bed, apparently unconsious, her dad on one side and Cree, of all people, on the other. Numbah 5's dad sighed when he saw them. "We're still waiting for her to wakeup." He said. "Where was she?" asked Numbah 1. "They found her next to a river." Mr. Lincoln replied. "But she had been knocked unconious. Abby doesn't have any serious wounds, but they're waiting for her to awaken so they can find out if she has any brain damage." As if on cue, 5 began to stir. "Abby?" Asked her dad worriedly. "Do you know who I am?"
" 'Course I know who you are." she said. "Ya think I'd forget my own dad?" Mr. Lincoln hugged his daughter happily. A doctor stepped forward. "Abigail?" The doctor said. "I'd like you answer some questions. These may sound simple, but just answer them as best you can." "Whatever you say." Abby replied. The doctor proceeded to ask her name, date of birth, and age. She answered all the questions correctly. "Well," said the doctor, "she appears to be fine."
"It's good to see you made it, Numbah 5" Numbah 1 commented. 5 seemed to notice the rest of the Kids Next Door for the first time since she woke up. "Who are you guys?" She asked. "Aww, you know us silly." 3 giggled. "We're your friends!" Numbah 5 gazed at them blankly. "I know you?" Nigel frowned. "This is no time for jokes Numbah 5" he said sternly. "You're the ones joking" 5 replied with a snort. "I don't know any of you." The doctor frowned. "Do you know her?" He demanded.
Cree spoke for the first time. "Know them? She lives with them in this big tree house all summer. She's known them for seven years! They're her best friends! She's spent, like, half her life with them." The doctor raised an eyebrow. "Really now? I think we've finally found the results of the brain damage." "WHAT?!" Everyone yelled at once. It's to be expected after all she's been through," the doctor replied," She has a mild form of amnesia. She's forgotten half of her life." "Sh-She will remember, right?" asked Numbah 1, not relizing he was stammering slightly. The doctor shrugged. "Possibly. If you all live in a tree house, I suggest you take her back there. Being in a framiliar place may jog her memory."
Three Hours Later
After a quick stop at Numbah 5's house, the Kids Next Door took 5 back to the tree house with them. Unfortunatly, it didn't do any good. Numbah 5 still couldn't remember anything about her teammates. And it was beginning to look like she wasn't going too....
Authors Note: So, alive, but now she has amnesia! Bet no one saw that coming...:(}) (so utterly corny!) ANYWAY, please review, tell me if my writings good, and about the story...You know this stuff by now. Oh! About the 3/4 stuff, I promise there will be some! Just wait about two chapters. growls from pissed off 3/4 fans I promise! I know excatly what I'm going to do, but I have to put it in the right place!