Hi there!!! I'm sooo glad you like this story!!!!!! Thank you my first two reviewers!! Iccle fairy, Drylith, and Grumpy!!! Thx you guys!!!
And.....Hi Alana!!!!!! SQUEAK!!! And this is angst Alana...it will get good.....you'll probably laugh! lol
Ok on with the story!!!
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Before Elladan Elrohir or Legolas could even register what was happening let alone do anything, the orcs made a move. Quick as lighting one drew it's sword and plunged it into Estel's upper back near his lungs. There was a horrible pain filled yell from Estel and the orc was about to make another stab but somehow Estel drew his sword and blocked the blow. By this time Elladan, Legolas and Elrohir were down from the trees and had drawn their swords but all the while the orcs continued to slash and beat poor Estel. In a few minutes of hard struggle the orcs were dead.
"Estel!!!" cried Legolas running over to his best friend, sure he was dead. Estel was slumped over unconscious in a veritable pool of his own blood his face deathly pale.
"Is, is he alive?" said Elrohir tears welling up in his eyes at the state his foster brother was in.
"Yes....I think he is but barely." Said Legolas his voice shaking with fear.
Elladan's face was stony, "We have to get him to Ada right away." They nodded. Legolas picked him up thankful he was unconscious because he would have been in so much pain for even so a moan escaped his lips as he was put onto the horse in front of his best friend. They rode as fast as they could back to Rivendell and Estel didn't wake up, whether that was a good thing or a bad thing no one knew.
They approached The Last Homely House galloping as fast as they could. Elrond who had been looking out the window waiting immediately knew something was wrong. Three of the boys were on their horses, but one horse was following rider less and Legolas had another person on his horse. Someone was hurt badly (for if they weren't they wouldn't allow themselves to be carried) and he knew who it was, Estel. He stood up quickly and ran out to meet them.
"What has happened?" he cried.
"Ada!" cried Elrohir, there were tears slowly running down his face.
"It's Estel.....we were hunting the orcs from the trees and Estel fell out of the tree and......and...he was attacked." Said Legolas his face pale. Even in the electric blue eyes of the strong Prince there were tears. He got down from his horse carrying his best friend's motionless body.
"Oh no." was all Elrond could manage to say. All the color had drained from his face. He took his youngest son from the Prince's arms and swept away towards the healing houses. The other three boys looked at each other and ran to catch up with Lord Elrond's long strides. When they reached the houses Elrond rushed inside bidding all his assistants to come immediately. Then he swept inside the examining room shutting the door in Elrohir, Elladan, and Legolas' faces.
"Now what?" said Elladan. He had been silent since they arrived and was not crying but they saw that there was no color in his face, which was rigid and emotionless.
"We wait. I suppose." Said Elrohir silent tears still trickling down his face but he stayed strong. Legolas on the other hand was overcome with emotion and leaned against the wall sliding down and sitting on the ground his fair head in his hands, his shoulders shaking as he cried.
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Not the longest chapter and not the most original idea I know but I haven't really written angst before and at least this isn't a "let's torture Legolas!" fest...... It's a let's torture Aragorn fest!!!!!! LOL! Come to think of it Legolas is kinda miserable too cuz his best friend is near death.....o well he can never be happy can he!!!! LOL! Especially not when Alana kills him! LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Any way I hope this isn't boring! More to come if you like it!!!!!!!
Reviews:
Grumpy: LOL!!! Here's your more!!!!
Drylith- Ya it is kind of hard to picture him in a hat!!!lol I bet it looks like Johnny Damon with his hat on! (only as an 11 year old of course)
Iccle fairy- Ya I'm not gonna do looooong paragraphs like that any more it is really hard to read. And anyone will tell you me and my friends are really random!!! But everything I said to Alana are inside jokes with loooooooong stories!!!!!!
Hi again Alana!!!!! Review to both my stories now that u have a name on here!!!!!!!
And hi Ariana if your reading this!!!!!
Luv u all!!!!!
EMHG )
