Queen-of-Azarath Your story is pretty good. Okay, I personally luv it and if you even THINK of deleting it...well...well it wouldn't be a good thing! Your grammer is a litte weird (but so is mine..) and you should stick to either (this is just an example of a line BTW):
"Hi! I'm Lexi!" Lexi said happily.
or
Lexi: Hi! I'm Lexi!
It gets a little confusing...but otherwise it's an amamzing story!
Reply: Okie Doky!
Hehehe I am so SUGAR high!
SUGAR!
P.S. thanxs for the good reviews!
Airhead123 I hope I have cleared up all ur problems!
just so it seems like a chapter they are all off doin there own thing.