( Thats my first fanfic, and it his my first story in english. Please be not to hard on me)

Introduction

we are in 20XX, time where everything is recording by the net and controlled by the cyber matrix.

Even after the dismantalment of World 3, the destruction of Gospel and Nebula, a new crime organization raised on the world.

After the recent action of the dark syndicate Apocalypse, most of the official netbattlers are occupied to stop them, letting most of the net unprotected.

Lan, Chaud, Maylu and the rest of the gang are 18 years olds now. They are all way the first to fight Apocalypse, and past the rest of their time on college, but that an other story.

On the street

"…", muttered a young boy.

His name was Shito Makuri, he was a average kid, 13 years old and he just arrive at DenTech city. Like most of kids, Shito liked to Netbattle with his friends. The problem is he doesn't have any friends already, he is the new kid at school.
Resigned he enter on his school for a other boring day.

Scilab, Conference room of Dr. Hikari

"Dr. Hikari! We just receive the confirmation!! They send the E-mail!!"

"good", responded the brown hair scientist.
"Dr. Hikari?? Why do we don't wait the return of Lan and Chaud, for escort the E-mail???"

"Because they are at Sharo to help Laika and we can wait for them", responded Lan's father calmly .

"But if Apocalypse attacks..."

"No need for concern", Hikari smiled. "they probably don't think we will pass a so important data now with all our netSavior occupied."

The other scientist was going to said another argument, but dr.Hikari stopped him.

"Any way, we have some special force on place. Juste don't worry."
"Yes Doctor."

On the street, after school

"That was a horrible day", think Shito, "first I don't understand anything of what miss.Marie said and I was totally humiliated at lunch time!!!"

The boy gave a punch on the first wall he crossed, hurting himself, more then other thing. He take a look on his PET, only to see the rest of his serie netnavi. Only the top of the chest and the head was visible, the rest of the body was simply deleted. His opponent totally beat him and ridiculing him.

"Crap, that go do take one week to repaired my navi, and even after that… he go to be useless against customs netnavi." the boy thought outloud.

He finally arrived at his home and go in his room to sleep after pluging in his PET.

"I hope something good will doing tomorrow…"

If only he knew what will arrive to him in the morning.

(and that is my introduction chapter, please review. I need your opinion to continu my story. But make it simple please, I read english but it is more easy to me if you make it simple)